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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
ah so she let's Arnav believe she is a prost*t*te

but she is blackmailing all these men who victimize and use women for their pleasure

damn of course she still thinks he is responsible for the marks when it was Adi

crap when Khushi finds out that it was not Arnav she spent the night with she will be as shattered as Arnav
Edited by seeta_naips - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
so well written, eagerly waiting for prologue 1. plz continue soon. thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
After reading the update one more time, I am commenting again. I did not understand one thing. Khushi tells NK that nobody will Fu** her again. Then she was not s*xtuly active with those rich clients? Then how did she get those bruises?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkly

After reading the update one more time, I am commenting again. I did not understand one thing. Khushi tells NK that nobody will Fu** her again. Then she was not s*xtuly active with those rich clients? Then how did she get those bruises?


It was from ADI dear..

which is why she thinks how could Arnav stoop so low forgetting what he did and asking all innocent questions..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Deepu...
How can you write every chapter better than previous one. How can you exert so many emotions in single chapter. Sorry Deepu I will stop praising.. I can't find more words to describe the writer in you... So I am agreeing that you won over me. Now, I will try to step back. But my heart is not agreeing to stop uttering how wonderful you are... My hands are not stopping to write how marvelous you are.

Ok coming to the update :

First of all your opinion on prostitutes... I agree with each and every word you specified there Deepu..There are humans after all...but got cheated by fate or by other ill hearted people. I always think that we are very lucky to have a loving family. More than enough money for our necessities. Freedom to do anything. Of course we are lucky. But if you think about those women who are giving their everything to random bas***ds, for money to live their life... are they peacefully living their life. Are eating their three meals stomach full. Do they have freedom to do anything. Do they have family to share their grief..Of course not... I am damn sure all the women in that place are living their lives by shedding tears every second they spend with lusty leeches. How can we hate those women. I hope every women in that position will find courage to fight back their demons who are forcing them to do whatever they don't like. If we want to talk about the women who went into that job willingly...may be they have their own reasons. At the end it's their decision how to live their life. How can we judge them with out knowing them.

In the first part.. I felt very bad Deepu...for their penthouse... Oh...it's their first home living together. it has so many memories. I give very less value to materialistic things...but more value to the memories associated with those materials.

The resolve Arnav took about Khushi... is completely Arnav style. Khuhsi reaction after hearing the fire accident..and she going to see Arnav ... love always drags you to your loved ones... it is the proof for that.

Whatever Khuhsi is doing to free prostitutes ...Wow amazing .. I salute for that courageous lady... and I salute you fro penning that idea.

In the second part..when that idiot slapped Khuhsi my hand rose up immediately.. to hit him Deepu... But when Khushi slapped Arnav... my heart cursed Khuhsi...sorry.. I can't take anyone hurting my Arnav...not even Khushi... He is very precious...

But care, concern side of Arnav never leaves him... no matter what ever Khushi do. He always love Khushi... Always... Old habits and your true nature...are tough to lose... they will go with you... as long as you live... Yes ...its better for him to understand as fast as possible... that he can never hate Khushi...never... And we tooo...we too can never hate Khushi and Arnav... no matter what they do... because we know they love each other to the core. Arnav being Arnav.. he is not believing anything he hear about Khushi... And Khuhsi...is damn courageous woman... I adore her...

Excellent job...Deepu...excellent... you always make sure that we wait for the next update right... I know... I am all set.. ready to face the prologue part once again... but this time with much clarity and much... open mind... because when I read the prologue part. I hated Khuhsi... for abusing Arnav for her mistake... because i know it's not Arnav's baby... because you mentioned right..why should always men to be blamed... You don't believe me Deepu I used to wonder the same question so many times... but when I hear about rape cases and men abusing their wifes and all these kind of news... I end up reacting like all typical women... I am also a woman after all... same harmones...

Love you Deepu... Love you so much...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I mostly concur with author's comments but want to add that it is not always the case of woman (pros*****) giving money to man. There are so many men out there help women and there are so many women out there cheat women. But majority is men stealing from women.

Kushi is one hell of strong woman and she never shed tears and took life in her hands and molding it the way she want it to be. It was so nice to see Kushi visiting Arnav in hospital to make sure he is out of danger even after what all he said and did to her (in her view). Looks like Kushi - NK are into extortion business but to help suffering women and this is how she got into media by going around with big shots in the city. Glad that she has a friend like NK standing and supporting her cause. Her pregnancy news didn't make her happy as it supposed to be but why? Is it her sixth sense telling her that this baby is not made out of love but lust and revenge?. I really hope her pregnancy don't progress well ( I am evil I know)

There is no doubt that Arnav is suffering and going through toughest phase of his life. I like the way Kushi gave it back to him when Arnav asked about the bite marks. He is still possessive and cares for Kushi's wellbeing and also realized that he can never hate her of course she is his first and only love (How can he hate her?).

Prologue chapter will be one hell of ride for us and I am more excited for the revelation (hopefully Arnav knows it first) in maha update. Once again brilliantly penned chapters.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Hai dear...
I was scared after knowing abt her decision...
but a little hope left that she'll not take tat step in her life willingly...
happy with this decision...
and they still care for each other. they can't stop loving each other after everything happened...
hope this love will make them together again...
any I have one doubt. in the prologue u mention that her one wrong move will destroy their love...wat's that move... as per my POV it's not her fault in that night.then wat's it???
after 28 parts coming the prologue...waiting for the moment when khushi comes to know about the truth of that night... will that day come soon???
wat have u done to me??? no story affected me like this. was thinking about the story and the possibilities of their reaction after the truth comes out all the time... that much this story affected me..hearts of to u for that...this much impact on readers...
waiting for next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is getting interesting with every chapter. So, finally Arnav realized something is a miss.

I was very angry at Arnav for doing this to Khushi throwing her in the roads, out of his life out of his world. He played the court, the jury and judge and sentenced her punishment. How dare he without listening to her part of the story. But, now since that phase is over I don't think Khushi will even be willing to talk about that night. Now, that she openly says she is a prostitute. Arnav you truly screwed your chance.

The phase Khushi is going through many go through the same phase after the first heart break, but for Khushi this was more hard because this was not the just the 1st heart break, Arnav was the first she ever loved and trusted with her complete being. I'm glad that, Khushi has not taken up prostitution, but Whatever she is doing she is just playing with fire. Blackmailing men who are rich and powerful for money .

Honestly, if u ask me I would tell u to drag the track, because if Arnav comes to know about the truth so soon his guilt, will soften his stance towards Khushi. But, I want to see him fall in love with the brave mother who chose her baby over him, over his love, unlike his mother. Later, when he comes to know she never betrayed him it would be like an icing in the cake for him.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Loved Loved Loved the update! WHat a update!!!!! Arnav finally stop hurting khushi and i won't question why you make khushi what she is today! But i am curious what does all that money go toward!Is it to help girls buy their freedom from prostitution? Or to help orphans? Khushi is pregnant!!! Hope she doesn't kill the baby after finding out it's adi's not arnav...it's not the baby's fault! Plz continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
congrats on the new thread
awesome update
loved the strong n confident khushi
n khushi is pregnant
wonder what's going to happen when the truth comes out
thanks for the pm

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