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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuarshi

Can you turn the story more worst than this???😭

This is what I wanted to portray..I am sorry if it didnt appeal you but I wouldnt change a bit. Let me make it clear..This is not something I made it up this chapter..This was shown as coming up in the prologue 1 itself..


You said that it doent matter whether arnav was her first o not but the love b/w thm is all thats imp...
But now bringing a child in their lyf???!!!!

Help me understand your concern, who in the world said love diminishes if a child comes in between the couple..especially when they were ready to adopt unknown stranger's kids..I really want to slap that person..Sorry dont mean to be harsh...But thats me!

Seriously????!!! by making a innocent thing suffer will u uphold their love story😡😭

Sweetheart, the story hasnt come to a point where you will know if the child is going to suffer or be raised happily...Please wait for the track to speak for itself before getting angry

And what about the actual culprit?????!!!

I wrote 5000 words approx to narrate their present life, Nothing happens overnight. And I dont think I dragged any track without a reason, Have some faith, that is all I could request at this point.
Sorry if i was harsh to you but i mean it...
Plz plz plz let the misunderstanting get awy soon

SOON..Its imposssible to go faster than this..Please lets all breathe in and breathe out...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
first of all hats off to you for updating it promptly for ur readers. about the chapter wow..just wonderful. They both are madly in love with each other. You bring so many unsaid or unspoken things in real life too.. like how important is to communicate with ur loved ones. gr8 work overall
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
wht a update now pls nxt one mahaupdate ...pls just clear misunderstanding
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
bang on chapter!

loved that strong khushi is back

hmm... so both r beginning to question, both having doubts, good thing

do cont. asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Such an intense update...

Khushi is totally changed... And pregnant...,..,????
Nd ya she is kinda doing some other kind of job ryt... ???
Loved the 2nd part of ther meet...
How arnav noticed her...
He must be heart broken after dat statement of hers...
Now i seriously cant wait for nxt...
I litrally stalk ur updates almost evrytym i cum online
Edited by piyaarshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Wow!!!u updated...
lots of things have changed...khushi had become more confident...
already they are suffering now the child?????yeah the child is innocent but its result of crime that happened to khushi...when the truth is out i don't know wat she will do...
hope the find the culprit soon...
waiting for nxt chapter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Thanks for the pm...
Amazing parts..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
ok just read d last note ...d prologue part is cuming ...yeyy m so excited 😃

arnav is doubting his decision , he is still not able to hate khushi , he is giving her space to judge her actions ...in a way he is trying to to prove himself dat his khushi is still his,but still is scared

arnav's redemption is going to be hell painful ...but i dont think i will still be able to sympathises with him as at dat moment khushi will get to know dat she got raped , women worst nightmare

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
brilliant...
lykd d bold avtaar of khushi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
is khushi really a prostitutee

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