SanDhir SS: The Deep Dark Secret *UpdateScheduled * (pg29) AN pg33

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Mariya

@mariya.kamran

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres
MARIYA !!!
MERA RES NAHI MIL RAHA 🤣

🤣 Bhulakar... aur kar itne lambe res, pichle he page par tha madam x

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

This story is amazing

Keep writing

Waiting for the next update

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Mariya

@mariya.kamran

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres

Finally ! M here!!

*smiles sheepishly*
*dodges the stones thrown by you*😕
*types at the speed of light which is 3 x 10 to d power 8 *

*OK OK sorry*😛

Mariya baby!!

I was so silly not to have read it before🤢

Jo ho gaya so ho gaya

Lemme tell you what I feel.,..

CHAP 1 : OMG ! SANYU RUNNING 😭
Kaun hoga wo katil ??😲

But as far as I know you it should be babaji

CHAP 2 : typical SANDHIR ,,, uff 😳
Ab to 80% shak babaji pe hi hai ...

Chap 3 : randhir admits he NEEDS sanyukta ??
*faints* !!
Wow wow ,... Interesting .., very interesting!!
Sanyukta KO bacha le randhir😡

Chap 4: OMG OMG OMG !
GUY SALA... (u told me you think he is a cow)😆
Randhir on bike ?
Parth Teri watt Lagne wali hai 🤣

Mom calling😡 ... Will edit later...😭

Loves you a lot,
Pree😳

Itna zabardast review, mere liye... I LOVE YOU 😳

Bas dekhti chal, hota hai kya 😉

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Pata hain main kya kar rahi hun? Main yahan baithke conspiracy kar rahi hun ki kaise teri murser karru. =.=

Update! >.>

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Kirti

@kirtiarora111

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Thank you so much yaar. Yeah you mentioned it earlier. Glad that you liked it. I know, everybody loves the present scenario but it's important to post the flashback to make a little progress. plus the story has to unfold in this way. Will be updating after exams. Lots of love xxx

Ya, obviously flashback is basically the plot of the story.. Without it's proper description, the story cannot move forward..😊

And undoubtedly, it was portrayed quite beautifully..👏👏

It's just that I got little too excited for the present scenario..😆😆

You know, human impatient psychology..🤣🤣

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swathi sen

@SWA1992

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

where is the next part??? please update soon...

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Anshika

@MainPareshaan

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

UPDATING?????

Yayyy

RES RES RES RES RES RE RES

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Srishti Sharma

@sanyukta_lolz

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Omg!! It's hell amazing...! Thnxx for the PM yaar, had you not told me about it, I wouldn't be able to read such an amazing story. M loving it... update asap!! Read all the parts in one go. The first and second part were very interesting, made me very curious... The third part showed Randhir's emotions so beautifully. The fourth and fifth part left me flabbergasted... That bloody Parth, will surely kill him!! And finally the sixth part, so horrifying... and that dialogue of Parth -"So Sanyukta Agarwal I have been kind enough to narrate the Oh-Vidushi-Murder story to you. Now I'm bored. When I'm the hunter and you're the prey, why not play a game?" Saying so, Parth lifted a rod that lay nearby and approached towards Sanyukta." That was sooo daraavna!! Will surely kill u Parth wid the same rod if u even hurt Sanyu!! Randhir please come and save your love... I loved it... update soon and PM me!!

With lots of love,

Srishti <3