SanDhir SS: WTSGB! *SS Of The Week :')* Chapter 5 & Prologue - Page 29

Originally posted by: krisrock

**RES**

Originally posted by: Reminiscence

Arushi, you beauty! This is brilliant. I'm absolutely loving this FF. This has a special feel in it and trust me, its doing wonders. :D
Update soon. :*

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Commenting as I read... So brace yourself for the random outbursts of speculating thoughts that are about to follow (You should remember what happened last time🤣) PARI! SUCH A LONG COMMENT! I AM GOING TO GOBBLE THIS UP MANY TIMES LIKE A CHILD EATS CHOCOLATE! OH DAMN! I REMINDED YOU OF CHOCO! SORRY! xD Ahahaha! Yes, I remember what happened the last time! But still! I am SO excited for this one!!!

"I believe I rose in love the moment his eyes met mine across a hall of innumerable people and never wavered till our last breaths. Other people fall in love, but that day, he and I rose in love."

^^Naaw! That was just beautiful Aru! I know I could always expect such beautifully poignant profound statements from you! AWW! You are too kind, my Gujju behena! :*

@ red: Did i read that correctly!? Past tense?! Urrr, already thinking of a new theory now! (And don't you dare tell me to WA it... 😆) BAHAHAHAA! Say all you want, but that quote isn't by any of the characters in the story! Actually, please elaborate on your thoughts on this this if you can! It'll be cool to have an open discussion! OR NOT! Please WA it to me? xD

I just read the paragraph following this, about two times! They way you play around with language is just outstanding! Are you sure you want to do commerce Aru?! I would say just publish this! Oh my gee! Pari, if you are going to be any sweeter to me, I might just get diabetes! Thank you SO SO much! *cries tears of profound happiness* And, commerce is my first love but writing is my last! :")

Your control over the fluency and accuracy of language is just beautiful! Plus it sounds very real, very natural! *loves you to Pluto and back*

I personally don't believe in love at first sight... But the way you described their first meeting, makes me want to believe in it😳... I mean how beautiful!Though I really don't think they are experiencing 'love'... It's more the attraction between two broken souls, just penned down so beautifully that I think it's love, but it's not (Lol, that didn't make sense right? *keeps on reading* Theory confirmed! It wasn't love...) Bahahahaa! Naw, it wasn't love. It wasn't even attraction. It was an urge to help her on his part and it was emancipation on her part. I don't believe in love at first sight either, so we're in the same boat! *hi 5*

Life seemed to have been unfair to the both of us, leaving not a single person except ourselves to help us fight our battles. She was scarred and I felt it my duty to heal them and shield her from any force that dared to touch her.

^^That was just beautiful! Beautiful is an understatement to what that is! It is poignant, elegant, yet heart-breaking(ly) filled with anguish!

For me this is where the prologue comes in to play, "So you turn to me, when stars go blue?" AWW! Naw! There is another scenario which will bring the prologue into play. This is just the beginning.

That Jack Sparrow and Rizwan Khan conversation though! What I perfect way to balance the mood of the update... Though the underlying melancholy was still present! Thenkoo! :*

Not because she couldn't accept what he had given her but because she didn't want him to walk down a painful road at her cost.

^^Hmmm, My WA prediction coming true or what?! So there is definitely something else that you are not disclosing yet(or maybe it's just in my head)

Oh God! This story of yours is like a cryptic message that I desperately want to solve... But the deeper I go in to it, the more I get caught in the web of mystery, laid out soo flawlessly by you! Ahahahaha! Pardon me for my STML but I have forgotten your prediction! *bites nails in guilty anticipation of what's coming next* A cryptic message! This makes me feel exotic! Not in a percy way though! xD I know how your head works xD I can't wait for you to get to the end of it! :")

You sure know how to conflict a poor soul like me!😆 That is my job, madame! xD

What else to say now? I have never told you this, but my respect and admiration for you keeps on growing every time I read this SS! I feel soo proud to know you sister! *dramatically wipes off tears* OH, HOLY JESUS CHRIST! There are no correct words to reply to that so I will only say this. I am SO glad to have such a cool and endearing Gujju behena as you in my life! :*

I can't say anymore! You are doing a BRILLIANT job! (See how my vocab isn't even on par with this SS?!🤪) Haaye! Don't say that! I could read all your work and point out better vocab!

How I heart you! I BODY YOU! xD

A very very happy,

Pari❤️ And a much happier (because of this comment),

Arushi

PS: My comment for this SS is always going to be in blue😳 How sweet of you, Pari! :*

PPS: I hope you like massive comments! *looks around, sees Aru with a rotten egg, runs away...😆* I LOVE MASSIVE COMMENTS! THEY ARE MY DRUGS! I LIVE FOR THEM! Why would I throw rotten eggs at you, Pari? Not like you cheated on me! xD

Always, through and through,

Arushi

PS. This has to be one of the longest comments + replies in the history of IF. HI 5, Pari!!! :*

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Marvellous. ... so far away yet so close .. update soon xxx

Originally posted by: froots93

I am literally out of words..All I can say is brilliantly penned

loved the convo between jack sparrow and Rizwan khan.

update soon..

Originally posted by: Harita1309

Arushi...sorry for d delay honey😕
omg! i felt like i m gng through a dictionary...grt n thoughtful usage of words which suited d scenario perfectly👏...top notch but Arushi u jus left me on a cliff😡 seriously i cudn't even speculate d next part girl coz ur writing style is d most different one i hav come across till date👍🏼
n dis poor brain cudnt process such amazing skills at a time
Sandhir moment was awesome,i felt like i was reading a novel...u know d one in which d leads are always meant to be together n how one person makes d other complete
it was sooo lovely n u depicted jus like they were destined together👍🏼
i am jus speech less,i dnt really know wat to say now😕
except one thing..plz update soon😉

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Hey! Please tell me your name?

Thanks SO much! :D

Originally posted by: Ms.P.K.Tunn

Mere liye Dedication? 😭

I wub yu !!

res !

-Edited-

Aroooshii!! This is better than Grease Story!

I'm already in love with this.. a stripper hero and a drunk heroine xD

So, unfamiliar yet familiar characters!

Sorry for unresing late but you know how lazy I am /.\

Update soon!!

Loads of LoVe
Kreeeti ❤️