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Poulami

@Sunshine_Ami

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#261

The way he realized her pain with knowing her >> haaye masallah... just like soul-mate!! For once he forgot his need as an escort & went to her so that he could soothe his pain!!

That was so amazing... Without expecting anything in return he did magic, which somehow heals her painful; alone heart a lot...

Looking forward to know more about this story... Really Amazing!! 👏 👍🏼

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Noor

@nafees5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#262

aaru uuusshiii iii hunh

res

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Arushi, you beauty! This is brilliant. I'm absolutely loving this FF. This has a special feel in it and trust me, its doing wonders. :D
Update soon. :*

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Sanjana

@SweetSassy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

**RES**

**UNRESING**

Actually I wasn't commenting now, but then when I saw that you are waiting day and night for comments,😆 then I was galvanized to comment!!!

Advice:Always use this idea, I will UNRES soon!xD

How could you manage to write so beautiful!

Aaj toh tum mujhey bta hi doh, yaar, I have fallen in love, actually nah,I have rose in love with you and your skills xD xD !!!(Hope Pudding(ipti) won't mind me falling and rising in love with you too!xP)

It was miraculous update!!!I wanna hug you for this🤗 Your vocabulary and language is too good!I had to sit with a dictionary though xP!!! The way you wove words is something ENCHANTING!!!😳

Thorn Birds, as far as I remember it was a nice novel, maybe written by Colleen McCullough, you might wonder that how I remember such names! You seem Pura-Hollywoodian!😉

Sanyukta and Randhir's POV was a treat to read!

Mashallah! What epic lines Aru you have written for Sanyukta's POV!

Randhir had such a great impact on her that she almost forgot all her pain in seconds, she somewhat got an reason to live again, to feel again!

Don't know that after how much time she would have got this solace seeing a person!!!

But how does one simply walk up to a stranger and make them cognizant of their entire existence, expecting them to completely understand everything just because one sees an endearing earnestness in their eyes?

WOW, these lines were so heartwarming!

Randhir is such a duhling!😳 He had just entered, but he sensed everything about her! He even made a promise that he won't dare anyone to hurt her!

Nowadays, it's so rare to see someone understanding someone so much!Everyone is so damn busy with themselves!

Sanhir's convo was Perfect, I mean, Randhir was well-trained in his job!

Sanyukta showing that she is smart like Rizwan Khan by tapping her right temple with her index finger, in her druken state! Awww...she looks alluring!😳

Randhir being an escort is still so loving! It would be hardly sometime when he met Sanyukta, but still the way he drown himself into her problems, was something that nobody could have done!

Sanhir's New Beginning was delight to read, all thanks to you Aru!

I would b eagerly waiting for coming updates!!! This time thoda jaldi!!!

Aru, your way of writing is commendable!👏Please ignore my language mistakes,😃 I was never good in conveying, though I feel that I have conveyed my affection towards you very well! xD

You have given an ELOQUENT description of SANDHIR WORLD!!! I would love to call you "My Eloquence Queen", would you mind ^_^?

Love

Sanju❤️

Edited by krisrock - 11 years ago

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Mariya

@mariya.kamran

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Marvellous. ... so far away yet so close .. update soon xxx

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Commenting as I read... So brace yourself for the random outbursts of speculating thoughts that are about to follow (You should remember what happened last time🤣)

"I believe I rose in love the moment his eyes met mine across a hall of innumerable people and never wavered till our last breaths. Other people fall in love, but that day, he and I rose in love."

^^Naaw! That was just beautiful Aru! I know I could always expect such beautifully poignant profound statements from you!

@ red: Did i read that correctly!? Past tense?! Urrr, already thinking of a new theory now! (And don't you dare tell me to WA it... 😆)

I just read the paragraph following this, about two times! They way you play around with language is just outstanding! Are you sure you want to do commerce Aru?! I would say just publish this!

Your control over the fluency and accuracy of language is just beautiful! Plus it sounds very real, very natural!

I personally don't believe in love at first sight... But the way you described their first meeting, makes me want to believe in it😳... I mean how beautiful!Though I really don't think they are experiencing 'love'... It's more the attraction between two broken souls, just penned down so beautifully that I think it's love, but it's not (Lol, that didn't make sense right? *keeps on reading* Theory confirmed! It wasn't love...)

Life seemed to have been unfair to the both of us, leaving not a single person except ourselves to help us fight our battles. She was scarred and I felt it my duty to heal them and shield her from any force that dared to touch her.

^^That was just beautiful! Beautiful is an understatement to what that is! It is poignant, elegant, yet heart-breaking(ly) filled with anguish!

For me this is where the prologue comes in to play, "So you turn to me, when stars go blue?"

That Jack Sparrow and Rizwan Khan conversation though! What I perfect way to balance the mood of the update... Though the underlying melancholy was still present!

Not because she couldn't accept what he had given her but because she didn't want him to walk down a painful road at her cost.

^^Hmmm, My WA prediction coming true or what?! So there is definitely something else that you are not disclosing yet(or maybe it's just in my head)

Oh God! This story of yours is like a cryptic message that I desperately want to solve... But the deeper I go in to it, the more I get caught in the web of mystery, laid out soo flawlessly by you!

You sure know how to conflict a poor soul like me!😆

What else to say now? I have never told you this, but my respect and admiration for you keeps on growing every time I read this SS! I feel soo proud to know you sister! *dramatically wipes off tears*

I can't say anymore! You are doing a BRILLIANT job! (See how my vocab isn't even on par with this SS?!🤪)

How I heart you!

A very very happy,

Pari❤️

PS: My comment for this SS is always going to be in blue😳

PPS: I hope you like massive comments! *looks around, sees Aru with a rotten egg, runs away...😆*

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago

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hema

@froots93

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#267

I am literally out of words..All I can say is brilliantly penned

loved the convo between jack sparrow and Rizwan khan.

update soon..

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: BeyondWords
res

Ipip! Jaldi unres na!!

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: Harita1309
res

Harita! Please unres jaldi? My jaan is going here! xD

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: Ms.P.K.Tunn
Mere liye Dedication? 😭

I wub yu !!

res !

Yus, Kreeeti! Tumhare liye! :*

I web you more! Unres jaldi! xD

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