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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: shaaz23
Nice update
Waiting for the next part eagerly

thank u

will try to update asap

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Sanchita_ArSha
👏 👏 wooowww it was
brillient Update
full Update was very intresting
Loved it thnx for the pm

thanks and welcome

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: -Monika-
Awesome update...

vo rey ka dream tha..

ya sach..

end mein sb shock...

very interesting...

continue soon...

dream tha ya sach baad me pata chalega.

And

thank u

will try to update asap

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: reyaditi
OMG...dis is hell scary...

dara diya tune mujhe...

i waz sooo scared at the car wala scene n dn d scene whr a voice tells Kriya to stay away from Rey...

do update soon...

haye sach me daraya kya maine tujhe? Maine daraya ya update me jo likha hai usse dar gayi?

thank u

will try to update asap

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: kreya204
Amazing!!!
Its becoming interesting!!!
So ders sm ghost or unnatural being surrounding dem all!!
Pehle d mirror thing!!!
Den rey ka hallucination...den kriya ka outburst!!!
Den kriya ka hallucination!!!
Den d krisha reyam talks!!!
Den dis mystery voice dat threatens kriya!!!
N den d cliffhanger!!! 😡
Cliffhanger k bagair to update adhoora hita hai...haina!! 😡
Koi nai...update soon!!!

thank u

will try to update asap

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Akansha1515
its a nice horror story..really liking it..😊
update soon nd thaxxx for pm😊

thank u

will try to update asap

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Mahnaz Gul

@FrozenTeardrops

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: AishPoojaKR

aww, tu shock hui sach me Maggie jaan.

Thank u comment k liye

erm Romance ka pata nahi yar ho gaya ya nahi.
😆

What do you mean by romance hoga ya nahi!

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

rews..😎

reason bhi batati ho res keliye..😆

unres..

Okay reading the FF my main reason was i just read the horror word in title..

u knw i really get fascinated to words like horror or supernatural nd i can help but read it..

so ye reason tha story padhne ka..btw dont worry me baki sab bhi padhongi but thode time baad..

so comming to the update i mean both update..it was fabulous both of the part..

loved the first part which was full of KriSha fears and thier bad lucks...

loved the way u showed ReYam's entry..KriYam beties and ShaRey bestie i loves it..

then the house god the house is so royal..ek baat batao i had always dreamed to live in a house like that in the pics.

so i loved the way u started part 2 the mystery is to began i guess its horror time..

Kriya's behaviour after getting up was little unusual i guess so..

KriYaansh part was like something sweet, rude, nd horror full

so the guy kriya suspects to be the murderer is Rey's cousin..nd that created misunderstanding between them..

and the whole horror part came to be rey's dream gosh..it was really scary..

then now at end what happened to kriya..?? i hope she is alright..

update soon aish dii..i hv first time ever called u di..😳

P.S. guess what i have read ur one work..🤣

Edited by -reine- - 11 years ago

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

kitne thhaat se res likha hai pagal. Janti hun tere res likhne ki wajah.

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: AishPoojaKR
kitne thhaat se res likha hai pagal. Janti hun tere res likhne ki wajah.

haww..?? tu kese jaanti hai mere res karne ki wajha..??😕😆

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