Raaz- Chupaye nahi chupta KR ~Horror~ 'Paused'

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

OMG...dis is hell scary...

dara diya tune mujhe...

i waz sooo scared at the car wala scene n dn d scene whr a voice tells Kriya to stay away from Rey...

do update soon...

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Sneha

@Arsha_Arshi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Amazing.

This story is becoming very interesting.

Waiting to know what happens.

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Amazing!!!
Its becoming interesting!!!
So ders sm ghost or unnatural being surrounding dem all!!
Pehle d mirror thing!!!
Den rey ka hallucination...den kriya ka outburst!!!
Den kriya ka hallucination!!!
Den d krisha reyam talks!!!
Den dis mystery voice dat threatens kriya!!!
N den d cliffhanger!!! 😡
Cliffhanger k bagair to update adhoora hita hai...haina!! 😡
Koi nai...update soon!!!

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Akansha1515

@Akansha1515

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

its a nice horror story..really liking it..😊

update soon nd thaxxx for pm😊

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David

@arshafan94

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Wow now that is scary.
i loved it and i had goosebumps while reading it.
amazingly penned.
cont soon

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KReyAS

@KReyAS

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

awsom updt

loved it cont soon waiting thnx fr pm

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Sridipta

@sri_crazlacious

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

"Life is a game played by the destiny, whenever you feel yourself to be happy; a moment comes when your happiness turns to sad"I loved these lines soo much..interesting and awesome update..there is much left to be revealed..Really excited to know who is trying to scare kriya..waiting eagerly to know the guy...I hope ki sharon shares kriya's problem with rey and the gang..lovely update..continue soon and PM me.. 😊

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: FrozenTeardrops
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Yuppie! Update mila... I was shocked at the car scene!

Jaldi update kar and romance start kar!

aww, tu shock hui sach me Maggie jaan.

Thank u comment k liye

erm Romance ka pata nahi yar ho gaya ya nahi.
😆

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: -Vaish-
Very nicely written..
It was amazing..

aiting to know what happens.

Thank u Vaish. 😊

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: love_arsha
Nyc update...
Loved it...
Rey daydreaming ya Jo usne dekha sach tha..
Kriya ko warning on hai WO...
And Krisha kya truth hide kr rhi hai...
And in the end all r shocked...
Pls update soon next part and do pm me

well Rey ka dream tha ya sach tha nahi bataungi

sare ques k ans updates me milte jayenge

ya will try to update asap