Raaz- Chupaye nahi chupta KR ~Horror~ 'Paused' - Page 8

Originally posted by: aishu3003

awesomeee part👏

was very interestingg😳

continue soonish😊

thanks Aishu

ya sure ll try to update asap

Originally posted by: don girls

wow amazing update

it was really interesting

can't wait to see what happens next

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: luvuKR

AWSUM update..vry intresting..cnontinue soon

thnx fr d pm

thank u

will try to update asap

always welcome

Originally posted by: anjali22

Awesome update
Update next part soon

thank u

will try to update asap

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

mrs bacchhan...update plz

Akku madam itne din kahan thi? Update k liye comment to de diya kar

Originally posted by: rajeshwaribr

I read all updates at a go..

I loved the concept..always wanted to see some horror in Krishareyam lives..😊

U have written it beautifully...😊

waiting for the next update...

wanna know what happened to kriya..

did she faint, or did she just stood still/ i don't know...quite curious to know..

update soon

thank u

will try to update asap 😊

yar xams time me busy hu isliye...june me i will start commenting

Originally posted by: parigyaverma

Horror stories have always fascinated me and your story to did!

The way you portray Kriya and Sharon's bond was enthralling my senses to its zenith.😃

And i don't know why when I read Sharon's part I could only imagine SK. Maybe because I am used to her as Sharon.😆

KR and SS parts were a pleasure to read 👏. But the length of SS was shorter when compared to KR.

Loved both the Updates!!!

P.S.- Hope my comment was long enough😳

well first of all thank u for a long coment and about Sharon's part. I do imagine SK so that i could give d nice bonding.

And again

thank u

will try to update asap

Originally posted by: arsha_simran

res I noe meinne theek se comment nhi Kia...

jaldi hi I will...

apka jaldi kab ane wala hai?

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

yar xams time me busy hu isliye...june me i will start commenting

oh ok. Good luck exams k liye.