SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 72

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh

~Unres~

From this update I'll start writing a C/N. Confused? Lemme clear it. C/N stands for Critic's Note🤣. I got this idea while reading your A/N🤣.

C/N: Umm...I want to tell you something.

Actually C/N toh likh diya but I dunno what should I write in C/N:/ 🤣

Yeahh!! Got it!! So nowadays I'm getting to know that my comments lightens many moods. Y'day it was the height when someone told me that after your FF (obviously), she stalks for my comment. (still, not digested by me)🤣

So, now commenting on your FF has become an assiduous job for me.🤣 kya karu itni expectations badh gayi hai iss nanhi si jaan se. 😆

Here ends my C/N. 😆

Chapter's Review:

The Title.

I love those 'always apt' titles of your FF. This time it made me all the more excited. The moment I read "One Step Closer" I immediately jumped to conclusion that SanDhir will come One Step Closer. But then it shot in my mind that it is a thriller as well so "One Step Closer" might be for the mystery. So I was curious to know, which one it was referred to from both of these, but as I ended up reading the chapter I realized that "One Step Closer" was for both the purposes...Yeah SanDhir as well as mystery. That's Anu ka jaadu.

KUDOS!!! [Oh em jee...this time I reviewed one para for title itself]🤣someone please control me!!! 🤣

The Quote.

I love those deep and insightful thoughts of yours. It was touching and it gave me a hope for justice. Yeahh...mere saath bhi partiality hui thiii... Its a very sad story...gather up all your audacity to read it further.

Hmmmph...So this incident happened day before y'day. Dad brought 2 Dairy Milks, one for me and one for bro. But my Mom gave 1.25 Dairy Milk to bro. :"( :"(. I was SHATTERED on such partiality but your quote gave me hope.

Now I know that bhagwan jii badla zaroor lengey. 🤣 🤣

The chapter.

Every reader of yours guesses the murderer but I never did. This is the first time that my shaq ki sui has stuck on Dinesh Shekhawat. My 6th sense is saying he's the culprit. The letter!! How come nobody else didn't come across it? It means it was pre-planned. Hai na ? Hai na?

I know I'm genius!! Bachpan se hi hoon,but kabhi ghamand naii kiya maine.🤣

Ghor kalyug!! Here I'm persistently requesting you to give us some SanDhir romance and you gave us a THAPAD, umm not us but Randhir..a THAPAD???

Nevermind! I'm happy with this too.

You know why? 'Cause Indian serials are the proof that every great love-story starts with a THAPAD. 🤣

My favorite part was the last part. I love the way how that letter came across Sanyukta. I already know what you are planning in next chapter. *evil smile*

So it was another amusing update.

For this update I think I should say you are a "Captivating Presenter". You have that enthralling power in you that captivates me in your ART(as I always say)

*winks*.

Update the next part soon.

Love ya,

Samaira <3

PS- I just realized C/N and the Review is one and the same thing.🤣🤣 So from next comment no C/N. 🤣

C/N??? Really???

I am actually waiting for the day when your 'feedback' to my 'update' receives more likes then the update itself!!!!

I mean stalking an FF for its comments...yeh toh by god too much ho gya ji!!!!!

Your obsession with my 'Titles' actually makes me rack my brains to write an 'apt' one!!!!

'The quote'...I swear I stuffed a pillow in my mouth for the 1.25 dairy milk part!!!!!

Chinta na kar balikey, tujhe 'justice' zaroor milegi! Bhagwan ji aisi nainsaafi nhi sahenge!!!

Like I've said, there is no proof that u are a girl

Originally posted by: Asapom

awesome update

randhir has noone with him who literallly care for him

sanyukta got the envelop

now will she go to that place??

pls continue soon

Originally posted by: arpitaa9

Anu!

i am so sorry for nt commenting before!

oh my god what an update!

i have praised enough of your writing skills and now let me

tell you something else!

I'm a die hard fan of SanDhir and when i read an SH ff,

all I ever look for is SanDhir chemistry!

but this ff of yours!

I'm much more interested in the mystery u're creating!

that's the power of ur writing!

amazing update gal!

u are rockin' it

totally!

hats off to you

lots and lots of love

#appy

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

stupefying update di !!
loved it !!
the sandhir scene outside vardhan's cabin !!! so eventful !
randhir shouldn't have bad mouthed sanyukta's character !
so i think sanyukta's slap is justified !
what if RD figures out that sanyukta has the envelope ?
why do i have the feeling that sanyukta will go to that place and something bad will happen !!




love
-kiki😳

p.s: sorry again for the short comment !

Love u