SanDhir FF : *Along Came 'She'* ~~THREAD 1 - Complete~~ Chapter 1-10 - Page 70

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: barauni

2nd page but okay..
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Omg! I am just short of words.
The kind of mystery you create is so enchanting you deserve innumerable accolades n applauds 👏
Randhir, he examined his Ramu chacha and confirmed that the murderer was a surgeon cuz the slit was nothing but accurate! Wow!!! 👏
N carotid artery! Looks like u have done a lot of research Anu di kudos to that!
He does listen to people but at the same time he knows when he has to zip up about something cuz when u know you are in search of some mysterious people you hafta be nothing less than a bigger mystery yourself! N this quality of Randhir which didn't perish till now in any of ur updates is something I truly adore 👏
The way he answered the media was quite appreciable!
And Vardhaan! He scolded Sanyukta so badly when she isn't any farzi student! Randhir 😡
But Vardhaan knows it was Randhir's fault too interesting very interesting!
Sanyukta was being nice and asking questions and Randhir he knows he has to answer but ego!!!
And she slapped him omg!!! That was needed!
And that letter! Sanyukta took it! Ab isski toh band baj jaayegi!
Randhir finally went rude on Ishita! Im happy yayyy!!!! [:D/]
And Sanyukta!!!!! She tore open the letter!
That line just scared the hell outta me sachchi!
Im still awake and the visuals of all the scenes ypu just wrote are rewinding in my brain!
I wonder if I will get some sleep this night!!!
The update! I can just keep on talking about it!
This really is my fav till date!
Update asap now!
Cant wait too know what happens n who that person is!!

Love,
Nikitha 😃



Niki,
I love it when ppl appreciate my research!!!
Thank u for that :D
And yep, randhir is very cunning...he knows exactly when to put up walls & act alone!!!
As for Vardhan scolding sanyu, that was needed...sanyu was becoming too mushy!!! The slap was on public request to bring back our tigress!!
And the letter...well the story starts now...sanyu has no idea what she has gotten herself into!!! Next few updates excite me!!!!!
Drama and fear to unfold! Lol!!!!
But thank u so much!!!!
Love u :)
(u know I love u...I dnt even need to mention it!)
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love your works so much anu..even though i missed out on commenting i never missed any update...cant wait for next update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
The qoutes At the starting is good.this story always keeps me gripping at the edge of the seat. While reading this update it keeps captivating my mind.
Randhir is so intelligent that he found out which person could have murdered his uncle and also the reason behind it.
The second best part was slap by sanyukta to randhir. The moment I read this line I thought that he would be kissing sanyukta but no😭
And I really feel like killing randhir's girlfriend
I have a feeling that it might be karan ishi and smriti's parents who must have killed them.
After reading the last line I m impatient who wrote rhis letrer to randhir.

Thank you so much for giving regular updates and no doubt you are super se upar writer.
Also waiting for sandhir's romance to start soon and sanyu's jealousy just great and parth is also so sweet.

Greetings
Rashi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: forevermine

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Anu!!!
you have noidea how much i am in love with FF of urs..!!!
it has everything...from mystery to suspense to romance!!!
this is a story which is so worth all the time u must be spending writing it..!!
i love many peoples writing and many peoples fan and u r one of them..!!!
coz when i read through this beautifully sculpted FF!! with a award winning storyline!!!
thriller isnt usually handled well my many but u did it..!!!
so now lemme strt with what i luved aboout the update!!!
Randhir a guy who comes from such a rich family but surrounded with all of them who r fake and back stabbing..!! the day he finds out...ouch its gonna hurt real bad!!
the last few updates as u let out the mystery be revealed...i as a reader sat thinking of all the possibilities...!!! i first tot it was only ishita and was curse her and den as it gradually proceeded it turns out everyone seem to be involved i wonder if even Parth is..he is the only character im confused about!!!!
This update had its share of thrill like the piece of paper that askes randhir to cum somewer for the secret to be revealed...now why do i think its the killer who wrote it..!!! an impulsive person would rush to that place without thinking twice...!!! but u juzz neva seem to reveal nything *pouts*
hands off yaar but the way you are handling the entire story is so mention worth..!!!
update soon!!!!
regards
safrena
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Ahaan!! Someone has decided to comment today!!!!
And that too made the first reserve!
Safrena,
This is so sweet of u!!!
Thank u so much!!
The mystery part I'm not revealing of course...but yes...randhir is in for some tough times ahead!!!
But no is at higher risk right now than sanyu :D
The letter...that's the next update!!!
Let's see what happens :p
But thank u for commenting tonight!
Means a lot!
Love and more love,
Anuradha
(As far as I know u are a little girl)
PS: I'm in love with ur dp!!!! That pic of Ian's is sooo...wow!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shar123

<font color="#cc00cc" size="5">Amazing update Anu👏👏👏... sorry for short reply... But I am really busy with myexams... But I can't explain how amazing writer u are.. I have my exam2 days later but stillI can't stop myself from reading this story... I am so in love with this story that sometimes I even forget the actual storyline of the show😆.. Since u have started writing this story I am never this curious to watch the show than I am to read next update of ur story... Plz update next part soon... I am very curious to know how the mystery unfolds... Eagerly waiting for next part...</font>



Omg!!! Exam...go study!!!
And thank u so much for reading & commenting despite being busy!!!
This makes u forget the show sometimes?! Wow! That's such a huge compliment!!!! Thank u!!!
Love ya :*
All the best!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

The qoutes At the starting is good.this story always keeps me gripping at the edge of the seat. While reading this update it keeps captivating my mind.

Randhir is so intelligent that he found out which person could have murdered his uncle and also the reason behind it.
The second best part was slap by sanyukta to randhir. The moment I read this line I thought that he would be kissing sanyukta but no😭
And I really feel like killing randhir's girlfriend
I have a feeling that it might be karan ishi and smriti's parents who must have killed them.
After reading the last line I m impatient who wrote rhis letrer to randhir.

Thank you so much for giving regular updates and no doubt you are super se upar writer.
Also waiting for sandhir's romance to start soon and sanyu's jealousy just great and parth is also so sweet.

Greetings
Rashi


Rashi!!!
Thank u so much! Means a lot! :D
Love u :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wao di amazng. Those starting lines were so beautifully pennd down.Di as u might hv heard of.Koi bhi shubh kaam krne se pehle, kuch meetha ho jaye. Here. Shubh kaam= readng ur postmeetha= the lines u write while startng ur post.This update was actualy superb, mindblowng, rockng, amazng.The way u describe each n evry charactr, day by day m fallng more 4r ur story.The bst lines which i found in dis post."Randhir composed himself. He was a doctor in the making. He couldn't let 'death' affect him, not even death of his loved ones"i mean u hvnt spoild d charactrs. Dis tym u cud hv shown him smthng like cryng n all. Bt d way u wrote thoz lines.*well done* for that.N whnevr m gussng smthng u alwaz prove me wrng. :-/i tho8 vardhan sir n his uncle are behind all dis. Bt hell no.Vardhansaw in him the potential to be an 'inspirational doctor' and a 'motivator' some day.By dis i got more perplexd."Who knows what a girl of your character is capable of doing"whn he said these lines, i was like.Sanyukta ab toh bol kuch. N thnthud. Slap.M sry bt i likd dat he got slappd. She provd dat at least she'z hvng sum guts."experience what it was like being his girlfriend by reading Ishita's lette"o.Owat d...I thnk sanyukta have lost it.She read it, just 4r a stupd reasn. Dat 2 he is d only guy whom she slappd mins ago.Pta ni sanyukta k dimag me kya chalte rehta h. Y she alwaz wnt 2 luk up for randhir.N thn dat endng. Hw cud u do dis wid ur fans.U vry well know, ki hum kitna intezar krte h. Ab mjhe bohot tez fever h. I swear i cant r8.Gudbye.Lots of luv.😳p.s pta ni wat m gonna post. Jst padh lena.*PRIYANKA*
Edited by angelpriyu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelpriyu

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Wao di amazng. Those starting lines were so beautifully pennd down.Di as u might hv heard of.Koi bhi shubh kaam krne se pehle, kuch meetha ho jaye. Here. Shubh kaam= readng ur postmeetha= the lines u write while startng ur post.This update was actualy superb, mindblowng, rockng, amazng.The way u describe each n evry charactr, day by day m fallng more 4r ur story.The bst lines which i found in dis post."Randhir composed himself. He was a doctor in the making. He couldn't let 'death' affect him, not even death of his loved ones"i mean u hvnt spoild d charactrs. Dis tym u cud hv shown him smthng like cryng n all. Bt d way u wrote thoz lines.*well done* for that.N whnevr m gussng smthng u alwaz prove me wrng. :-/i tho8 vardhan sir n his uncle are behind all dis. Bt hell no.Vardhansaw in him the potential to be an 'inspirational doctor' and a 'motivator' some day.By dis i got more perplexd."Who knows what a girl of your character is capable of doing"whn he said these lines, i was like.Sanyukta ab toh bol kuch. N thnthud. Slap.M sry bt i likd dat he got slappd. She provd dat at least she'z hvng sum guts."experience what it was like being his girlfriend by reading Ishita's lette"o.Owat d...I thnk sanyukta have lost it.She read it, just 4r a stupd reasn. Dat 2 he is d only guy whom she slappd mins ago.Pta ni sanyukta k dimag me kya chalte rehta h. Y she alwaz wnt 2 luk up for randhir.N thn dat endng. Hw cud u do dis wid ur fans.U vry well know, ki hum kitna intezar krte h. Ab mjhe bohot tez fever h. I swear i cant r8.Gudbye.Lots of luv.😳p.s pta ni wat m gonna post. Jst padh lena.*PRIYANKA*



Fever?
Priyu, take care swthrt!!!
And u always take so much care to write the comments!!!
I really dunno how to thank u!!! :D
Love u sis!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: moonkmh

i love your works so much anu..even though i missed out on commenting i never missed any update...cant wait for next update..


Thanks a lot moon! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suumi

Suprb update 😊
every whr mystry mystry...
I'm hopng tat in nxt part v wil get to read abt more sandhir scens bt gud scens nt fight


Thank u so much :)

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