SanDhir SS - The Road Not Taken Epilogue Updated - Page 26

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Aishwarya

@smileroy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

loved it...nd d title..i just love dis poem by Robert frost...,..wt a poet he is... I read dis poem 3yrs bk...nd i fell in love with both..d poem and d poet...

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Shreya

@swarontruelove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Road not taken...quoting Robert Frost...

"I shall be telling this with a sigh

Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I,
I took the one less traveled by,

And that has made all the difference. " unquote.

Ah!! these have to be my favorite lines from the poem and clearly its also closely related with your os. T

he way you wrote with that touch, which touch? well i still haven't got a name for that but its something you can not only connect too but it instantly touches your heart, creating a niche for itself in their.

The way you have put up the scene and conceptualized it was superb.

The way you portrayed sanyukta's dilemma of holding on or letting go. Ah! i am at a loss of words to describe it. Everyone in life has to make a choice somewhere. and sanyukta too had too, and although the choice she made hurt her she made it to see him happy, the person who she loved the most.

The whole os, was mindblowing, heartbreaking but being a sadist that i m i loved it. and i think no other end other than the end u gave could have justified it.

Although a part of me would have liked you to continue it but i love it just the way it is. because in those short lines you have mesmerised my heart in the beauty f sacrifice in love.

Lastly keep writing more and more and try to pm me your new works.

Love

Shreya

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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

The title is so perfect. So much so! :)

Mashallah your writing! You know when you have that one fic which is so much of everything perfect but you can't describe it in words .. I really want to let you know how beautiful this is but somehow can't!

I'll just tell you the words did it for me. Everything felt so real and sad :( Must write more 🤗

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Aisha

@RandhirHolic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: smileroy
loved it...nd d title..i just love dis poem by Robert frost...,..wt a poet he is... I read dis poem 3yrs bk...nd i fell in love with both..d poem and d poet...

I'm Glad U Likd it!

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Aisha

@RandhirHolic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: themockingblue.

The title is so perfect. So much so! :)

Mashallah your writing! You know when you have that one fic which is so much of everything perfect but you can't describe it in words .. I really want to let you know how beautiful this is but somehow can't!

I'll just tell you the words did it for me. Everything felt so real and sad :( Must write more 🤗

Awwieee! Thats a huge compliment ! tysm ...I will definately write more!

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Aisha

@RandhirHolic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: swarontruelove
Road not taken...quoting Robert Frost...
"I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I,
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference. " unquote.
Ah!! these have to be my favorite lines from the poem and clearly its also closely related with your os. T
he way you wrote with that touch, which touch? well i still haven't got a name for that but its something you can not only connect too but it instantly touches your heart, creating a niche for itself in their.
The way you have put up the scene and conceptualized it was superb.
The way you portrayed sanyukta's dilemma of holding on or letting go. Ah! i am at a loss of words to describe it. Everyone in life has to make a choice somewhere. and sanyukta too had too, and although the choice she made hurt her she made it to see him happy, the person who she loved the most.
The whole os, was mindblowing, heartbreaking but being a sadist that i m i loved it. and i think no other end other than the end u gave could have justified it.
Although a part of me would have liked you to continue it but i love it just the way it is. because in those short lines you have mesmerised my heart in the beauty f sacrifice in love.
Lastly keep writing more and more and try to pm me your new works.
Love
Shreya

Awww Shreya firstly thank you for giving such a long comment! i'm mesmerized by ur comment ! thank you so much fr ur love and appreciation!

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Hey Aisha, that was so well done for first time and I was in tears till i reached the end ...

how about writing more

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Aisha

@RandhirHolic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -DamnedDrooler-
Hey Aisha, that was so well done for first time and I was in tears till i reached the end ...
how about writing more

Aww That's really sweet of you! i am thinking of converting it into a SS or FF ! will drop a scrap if i do so :)

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ansah

@SahSah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: RandhirHolic

Aww That's really sweet of you! i am thinking of converting it into a SS or FF ! will drop a scrap if i do so :)

that will be great do let me know in case u decide to continue

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

wow.. just saw your scrap and opened it..

road not taken.. robert frost..

but this one on sandhir is just amazing..

on emotions, on separation..

and the ending, where you gave a hope that they'll be together in an alternate universe.. so i dont consider this as a sad ending.. nopes, since you have given us the hope of sandhir.

beautifully written..