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Honey

@Honey712

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

O my god plzzupdate the next part soon plzz

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radhika

@-Baatcutter-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Honey712
O my god plzzupdate the next part soon plzz

Sorry bt I ll update only if I ll get sum mre likes n comments

bt because of very less likes n comments I m thinking to discontinue dis ff

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payal sood

@love_arsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Awesome update...
Read all the parts and its amazing story...
Update soon next part and do pm me pls

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radhika

@-Baatcutter-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

CHAPTER

Yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath n kyu ho raha hai.

No I cnt gt affected by kriya. Bt why the hell she is back. Kisi ko uski zaroorat nai hai ryt? Usse kya lagta hai uski help ke bina me khud ki dance academy open nai kar pauga. And swayum kriya ke saath contact me usne mere saath aisa kaise kiya bt den kriya uski bestestt friend hai bt iska matlab yeh nai hai ki woh sharon pe is tarah se chilay. Oh god and taani. Uske baare me main toh bhul hi gaya. Kal usse baat kar lunga and kriya ko uski asli jagah (place) dikha dunga.

Kriya thik keh rahi thi mujhe sharon pe is tarah se chilana nai chahiye tha. Kitna gussa hogi woh mujhse. Kya karu usko manane ke liye.Aisa karta hu uske ghar chale jata hu.

Sharon ws lying on her bed

Swayum I mean mere swayum ne mujhe pe chilaya n kiski wajah se dat miss kripa. Urggg I no swayum uska bff hai bt it doesn't mean ki woh uski wajah se mujpe chilay. For God's sake mein uski girlfriend hu. Ane do ab is swayum ko main bhi usko itni asani se maaf nai karugi. And waise bhi maafi magne ke liye zaada se zaada kya karega ek gift hi lekar ayega na baaki ladko ki tarah.

Swayum who ws standing near window, listens everything.

Gaya kaam se. Aj toh meri solid lag gai. Kaise manao mein ab sharon ko. Sabse pehale toh is gift ko chupa swayum. He quickly hides it in his pocket.

Den he goes to sharon

Sharon - Tum? How dare u? Tum tahs kaise aai?

Swayum - (innocently) khidki se

Sharon - woh mujhe pata hai. I mean hw dare you cum hre? Jao na apni kriya ke paas

Swayam - woh sharon I m sorry.

sharon - areee sorry kyu bol rahe ho. Galti toh meri thi na jo maine tumhari kriya ke baare me kuch galat bola.

Swayum - sharon dekho I no u r hurt bt jis tarah tum apne best friend ko defend kar rahi thi ushi tarah me apni bff ko.

Sharon - bt swayum tum jante ho ba ki usne past me kya kya kiya hai phir bhi?

Swayam - Exactly sharon usne past me hamare liye kya kuch nai kiya hai. Weaklings, dance, friends, popularity n tum. Maine socha bhi nai tha ki yeh sab mujhe kabhi milega bt ab dekho I hve everything n its coz of kriya.

Sharon - mein us baare me baat nai kar rahi hu swayum.

Swayum - I know. Bt kriya yaha hamari help karne aai hai. Fine dnt accept her as ur friend bt kaam se kaam workshops toh attend karo. Isme hamara hi faida hai. Plz sharon mere liye.

Sharon - Thik hai

Swayam - Toh isja matlab tumne mujhe maaf kar diya?

Sharon - Yeh kisne kaha. Me sirf kriya ko ek chance de rahi. Na hi woh meri friend hai n na hi maine tumhe maaf kiya gai. N yes sharon rai prakash itne aasani se nai manti.Nw go

Swayam - bt sharon

Before he could speak further he ws out of hr room.

Hw ll swayum manofy sharon?

Will the others accept kriya ?

if yes what ll b rey's reaction?

Rohan seems to lyk kriya. Is it jst attraction or luv at first sight?

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Here it ends

Guys I m vry much disappoint with the response I m getting. 😭

I know I m a bad writer bt surely nt dat bad.

I have read alots of ff ss n os

The storyline may b vry similar to many of ff/ss/os. Bt I cn assure u it is different frm others. If sumwhere u find any similarity wid other stories it is purely a coincidence or may b I m inspired frm dat particular scene.

Plz anyone cn snd pm on ma behalf?

Edited by -Baatcutter- - 10 years ago

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alisha

@alisha_arsha

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+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

awesome update

loved it sooo much

update soon

plz pm me when u update next part

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payal sood

@love_arsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

NYC update
Loved loved it...baht short that BT cute tha
...
Thanx for pm me

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Sunaina

@sunu.nainu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awesome concept n story yar...

Just read all the parts n totally loved them...

Rohan liking Kriya=Jealous Rey which is ma favourite...

Will enjoy reading!!!!!!!!!!

Continue soon...

N do pm me when u update next time...

But do continue :)

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radhika

@-Baatcutter-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: love_arsha
NYC update
Loved loved it...baht short that BT cute tha
...
Thanx for pm me

M glad dat u liked it

thanks for your comment

it means alot to me

NXt tym pakka try karugi bada update dene ki

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radhika

@-Baatcutter-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: KriyaanshManan
Awesome concept n story yar...
Just read all the parts n totally loved them...
Rohan liking Kriya=Jealous Rey which is ma favourite...
Will enjoy reading!!!!!!!!!!
Continue soon...
N do pm me when u update next time...
But do continue :)

Thank you so much

I m really glad dat u liked it

jealous rey is my fav too

If I ll continue dis ff den I ll surely let u no

For nw it all depends on d no. of readers