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radhikaforam

@radhikaforam

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Posted: 11 years ago

Me and my sis r writing our first ff n its a Kriyaansh ff

Hope u guys lyk it😊

So here's the character sketch

KRIYA GHAI

A very helping & caring person. A gr8 combination of beauty n brain. She is a very innocent n childish girl.

Dance is her lyf n passion. Very much hurt coz of rey coz he didn't trust her n simply moved on so easily. So almost truned into an attitude girl.

Alway in contact with her BFF , swayam. Loves n Misses him alot. ( as a frnd guys)

She is d dream girl of every boy. Best dancer of New York. Popularly known as K. Every boy drool ovr her, the hottest grl.

REYAANSH SINGHANIA

A very caring guy.A great frnd 1 could have. Still hurt coz of kriya, deep inside his heart he still loves her.But is attracted 2 wards naani. Loves his frnds n fraternal twin alot. Can't hide hide anything frm swayam.

SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT

A chocolate boy n d cutest guy of d college. Loves sharon alot n is in relationship wid her. He is very gud in understanding sme1.

Loves kriya alot ( as a frnd) n is very protective 2 wards her.

SHARON RAI PRAKASH

She is d diva of d college. Never forgets her attitude n loves his majnu alot. She is d gr8 support for the gang. Always respected kriya but her ego always came in between. Misses kriya alot but is angry on her as kriya had hurt her bff alot.

NEW CHARACTER

ROHAN SINGHANIA

Most loving, handsome n dashing guy, girls drool over him. Loves his bro, rey. Still finding his Miss Perfect. He is also a great dancer.

guys plz reply weather v shld continue the story or not.

Edited by radhikaforam - 11 years ago

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Ardhanarishwara

@Ardhanarishwara

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice cs ..seems very interesting,,
continue soon,
n plzz post it in d3 forum..it will bring u lot of readers..

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AimanAsim

@AimanAsim

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome cs

next update

n plz pm me

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radhikaforam

@radhikaforam

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Thnx for ur response. V will continue it soon..

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radhika

@-Baatcutter-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello frnds. I m radhika..

M new to dis forum

So I dnt know many things...

nw I m gng to update frm dis id as ma previous id is nt working coz of sum unknown reasons.i have no frnds in dis forum n I m nt able to add anyone in ma buddy list.

I guess I need a lot of things to learn.

INDEX

Chapter 1 pg 1

Chapter 2 pg 1

Chapter 3 pg 1

Chapter 4 pg 2

Chapter 5 pg 2

Chapter 6 pg 5

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radhika

@-Baatcutter-

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Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 1

A new entry in st louis college.

Our gang as usual sitting in canteen.

Vicky - Yaar kuch order karo mujhe bohot bhuk lagi hai.

Nil - Tujhe toh hamesha bhuk hi lagti hai BHUKKAD...

Vicky glares at him.

All strts chatting wid each other

Just den dey heard sum girls gossiping abt sum new entry

Grl 1- Hayeee he is so handsome.

Grl2 -yeah...He ll b ma future bf ( dreaming)

Grl 3- oh plzzz I m more beautiful.

Just den a grl enters.

Grl 4- I cum to no who is dat guy.

All grls - Who?

Grl 4- He is d brother of our very own REYAANSH SINGHANIA.

Nw it ws a big shock for d gang specially rey.

Gang rushes towards d atrium.

N der ws ROHAN SINGHANIA looking as handsome as always.

Rey gives a bone crushing hug to Rohan followed followed by vicky n sharon.

Ricky n sharon - Rohan tum yaha kaise?

Rohan - woh I ws missing u guys so much ki yaha aa gaya.

Rey introduced him wid his gang

So kaisa tha?

Accha tha ya bura?

plz do comments. ...

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radhika

@-Baatcutter-

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 2

Days passed on, gang became very close to rohan as he is very friendly.

It has been one week rohan had joined the college.

Rey cums to RH where the gang was sitting.

Rey - hey guys I have a great news.

All - What?

Rey - Finally hamara dance as a career banane ka sapna pura hoga.

Sharon - Wat? But how?

Rey- Guys new york dance academy ki head dancer yaha 3 months ke liye aa rahi hai hume training dene.

All -Wat? Seriously?

Rey - And after dis training she ll decide weather we r capable making our academy.

Vicky - it is a great news

All - yes...

bt 2 people where busy in der own thoughts

ya ryt 1st is swayam and the 2nd is Nil ( kya socha)

swayam- ( new york ki head matlab ... bt woh kyu ayegi mujhe usse baat karni chahiye)

Vish - swayam nilesh tum logo ko kya hua?

swayam - uh ha woh kuch nai it is a great news.

Neha - aur nilesh?

Nil - Arre mein toh double khush hoon ( starts dreaming )

Bharat - kyu aisa kya hua?

Nil - aree tune suna nai rey ne kya kaha SHE matlab LADKI.

Vicky - Aree ha yaar maine toh sohca hi nai

Simmi n neha - What? ( angry)

Sharon - Guys stop dis n concentrate on rehearsals.

Nickey - kya hamesha rehearsals.

Vicky - Yaar kitni hot hogi woh...

Neha - Nw neha not talking to babu. Dewaana not telling neha Hot ( angry pout.)

Vicky - Dewaani aisa nai hai . Tum toh uhhh Tum toh ha... aloo ke garam pokodo ki jitni hot ho.

All starts laughing.

Neha - Babu telling neha aloo...matlab neha is fat ( She says pouting cutely)

Vicky - Are nai-2 deewani aisa nai hai.

(he follows neha n continues to manofy her)

Rohan - ( for whom all dis things were new says ) Guys u all r so funny. I m really enjoying alot specially Nil n vicky dey r complete entertainment box ( all starts laughing )

Rey - Aree yeh sab toh sirf trailer hai picture abhi baki hai.

Swayam - I m sure you ll enjoy.

Rohan - I m already enjoying.

All smiles

Simmi - Accha toh rohan hame ek baat batao u r so handsome toh tumhari koi gf toh hogi hi na?

Rohan- no meri koi gf nai hai.

Vish - Hey dude dnt lie. You r so handsome

Sharon - Rey iski sachme koi gf nai hai?

Rey - Ya guys rohan sach keh raha hai isse aj tak iski MISS PERFECT nai mili.

All - ohhh miss perfect. .

Swayam - Accha toh kaisi hogi tumhqri miss perfect?

Rey - ya rohan isse bata de yeh hamare college ka LOVE GURU hai. Sharon ko kitni mehnat se pataya hai. ( all laughs n sharon blushes.)

Rohan - Meri Miss Perfect toh bohot cute n innocent honi chahiye. She shuld b childish n ek different attitude hona chahiye usme unlike other girls.Jiski ek smile dekhke mera din banjaye.Jo hamesha non- stop baate karti ho. ( dreamily)

All dis while rey ws lost in kriya's thoughts.

Rinni - I m sure u ll get her soon

Rohan - Hope so...

Amar - Accha rey woh head dancer kab aa rahi ( he says bringing him back frm kriyaland)

Rey- woh 2 din baad ane wali hai guys. We have to behave properly specially you nil n vicky. Use dekhkar udna mat.

Nil - Ha thik hai na rey...

Here's the second part

Hope u lyk it...

n plz lyk it n do comments.

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radhika

@-Baatcutter-

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

CHAPTER 3

Nxt day

Everyone were busy wid preparations n rehearsals as dey have to impress lead dancer of NYDA.

Nil - Yaar kaisi hogi woh?

Vicky - Nicole ki tarah honi chahiye.

Rey - stop it guys. Maine uske bare mein bohot suna hai. She is the bst dancer of NYDA

Swayam - She is the the most cuttest & hottest girl in NY. Its really vry difficult to impress her.

Sharon become jealous

Nil - Tu toh aise bol raha hai jaise tune use impress karne ki koshish ki hai. Sharon ko bhul gaya kya?

Swayam - Nai yaar sharon is my life.

sharon bluses

Sharon - Swayam u r Always mine ( Oh Shit! Maine jor se bol diya )

Rohan - ohhh ho ho! Sharon Rai Prakash blushing n all ha.

All starts pulling swaron's leg.

Rey - Accha chalo guys ab practice karte hai as swayam ne bola it is really difficult to impress her.

All- yaaa

Nxt day

Rey - Guys arrangements ho gai na?

Taani - Ha rey sab ho gaya hai. Ap chinta mat kariye ( she said holding his hand n rey smiles )

Rohan - Ahem Ahem I guess hume ek baar sab check karlena chahiye.

Taani n rey cums back to der senses

Ta rey - ha ha

All were gathered in auditorium. Students were damn exicted abt d performance so did the gang.

VP- So guys plz welcome the head dancer of NYDA.

Every1 starts hooting.

( Same performance of d3)

She has mask on her face.

After the dance everyone were impressed by her specially Rohan ( SOTY wala hayeee varun)

Reyam felt like it is kriya dancing in front of dem.

( Swayam knows dat kriya is d head of NYDA bt he ws nt aware dat she is coming as she hadn't even inform him n she is in london for her calendar shoots)

Sharon - Guys she ws outstanding.

Simmi - Ya yaar wat an energy.

Vish - She is awesome dude.

Nil - Yaar kitni hot hai... (latoo)

Vicky - Nicole se bhi zyaada.

Neha n simmi both beat der respective partners.

Nickey - ouchh

Taani - Guys concentrate Maine toh socha tha ki ap logo se accha koi ho hi nai sakta bt she is WOW...

Neha - Bilkul kriya ki tarah.

Before anyone could say VP introduces the head dancer which left the whole college shocked .

VP - So plz welcome the Dancing diva Kriya Ghai.

Rey becomes numb.

A smile crept on swayum's face.

Taani ws shocked.

Sharon ws angry.

The others were having mixed feelings.

Where weaklings were happy specially vish n neha & dazzling were worried about rey.

The whole college was shocked + happy. They had missed kriya alot.

Rohan ws smitten by her beauty n dance.

Kriya ws vry happy to see everyone.

She sees the different emotions playing on her friends face. Some happy, some sad,some worried, some shocked & angry. She sees a girl holding Rey's hand and assume her to be taani. Swayam had shared each n everything with her.Ya she was hurt bt wat she can she do. Destiny always plays cruel games with her.

Soon she ws surrounded by the whole college.

Every1 were asking different questions to her some abt her sudden exit some praising her dance.

VP - Guys I no u r very happy to see kriya again bt nw attend ur classes u cn meet her later.

Every one leaves n now only gang n kriya were present in the auditorium.

Here's d 3rd update

I no bohot bakwaas tha

Nxt tym I ll try to be more better

Plzz like n comment.

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radhika

@-Baatcutter-

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

I no I m late

Bt kya karu yaar EXAMZ thi

Sorry😊

CHAPTER 4

All were present in atrium

Sharon - Tum😡 Tum yaha kyun aai ho?

Vicky - Exactly Ab kya lene aai ho? Yaha tumhari kisi ko koi zarurat nai hai.

Nil - Aree vicky is jaisi ladki ki kise zaroorat hogi.

Neha - Stup up

Vishaka - kriya we miss u yaar

They both hugs kriya followed by amar n bharat

Rohan - You guys know each other.

Simmi - O common rohan isse kaun nai jaanta

Rinni - Bloody back stabber.

Swayum - Just stup up guy

He goes n hugs kriya tightly. Kriya reciprocates whole heartly. We cn hug hundreds of people bt to b in ur beasties arms is a different things, a different feeling.

Swayum - So dis is d reason tum mera 2 dinon se phone nai utha rai.

Kriya - You no mein tumse kuch nai chupa sakti. Isliye tum se baat nai ki

Sharon - swayum tum iske sath contact mein the?

Rey - How could u? ( dis ws d 1st tym he spoke. Swayum is his bff n he ws in contact with her. It deeply hurted him)

Swayum - I no rey dat you r hurt bt plz try to understand kriya ws , is n ll b ma bff forever.

Rey - Even I m ur bff.

Sharon - Tum is cheap ladki ke saath contact mein kaise reh dakte ho.

Nw swayum lost his temperature bt b4 he could say anything

Kriya - Just shut up Dont forget ki tum logon ko meri zaroorat hai mujhe nai.

N mein yaha Rey ko hurt karne ke liye nai aai hoon n I dnt even think ki unhe mere yaha hone se koi fark padna chahiye. I m jst here to help my friends.

Vicky - Fine

Nil rinni simmi - Thik hai agar tum rey ko hurt nai karna chahti n yaha hamari help karne aai ho toh thik hai .

Taani - Maine apke baare mein bohot suna hai. You r a perfect dancer, captain, friend , bff, enemy and AGS.

Sharey- Guys tum isse chance de rahe ho. Really? She is nothing bt a looser.

Nickey - sorry yaar rey bt humne hamesha kriya ko adore kiya hai. Every1 deserves a second chance.

Rohan - hold on koi mujhe bataiga kya ho raha hai?

Simmi - wait badme batati hu.

sharon - mein isse kabhi accept nai karungi. You...

swayum - (shouts) plz sharon. Agar tum accept nai karna chahati toh fyn. Bt plz tamasha mat create karo.

Sharon - mein tamasha create kar rahi hu ha?

Rey - Ab tu sharon ko mat blame kar swayum.

Swayum - Exactly rey jis tarah tu apni bestie ka saath de raha hai mein apni bestie ka.

Kriya - Now stop all this. Jo meri workshop's attend karna chahte hai they can n jo na

i they can free to do wat dey wnt. ( with dis she left giving swayum a hug)

Here it ends

I dnt no hw it cme

I n my sis had started this in summer

We had completed many prts written on a book bt unfortunately I lost it.

So wen I ws writing this I ws completely out of idea.So I dnt no hw it cme up.

My sis is really angry I as I lost our book

sorry di

Hope you guys lyk it

For nxt update I wnt many likes n comments .

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alisha

@alisha_arsha

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

awesome storyline

loved kriya's attitude and kriyam bond

update soon

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