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if possible try to continue this story...and pm me

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just finish read this story all together... amazing and awesome...
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Originally posted by: krarshanaval
just finish read this story all together... amazing and awesome...
do continue soon

I got a new reader😃
Thankz
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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Hello guys

I m back with a update.

I know I know I am late but was kinda busy.

Thank you everyone for your comments and likes (except my Ali di meko punishment nai chahiye)

Please keep showering your love in future as well

A big big thank you to my sweetie foram di.

Without u it would be impossible sis.

Love u all

So this chapter dedicates to my smiley queen aka Alisha arsha

Love u a lot didz for your support and friendship

So enough of my buk buk

Here u guys go

CHAPTER 6

"Rey Rey"shouted someone. "Ha bolo baatcutter"asked a very excited rey. "Rey aj kuch hai?" she asked with a hope. " Ha woh...aj ...ha aj toh tumhara birthday hai" said rey with a smile. "Hawww you don't remember my birthday, jao mujhe apse baat nai karni. Saal mein ek baar hi toh aata hai mera birthday who bhi bhul gai linecutter kahi ke"pouted kriya. " Areee mein toh mazak kar raha tha . Mujhe pata hai tumhara birthday 12^th October ko aata hai. See mujhe yaad hai tumhara birthday." says rey cutely afrading that his baatcutter will get angry and will not talk to him on this special day. Kriya smiles and ask again " toh batao aj kya hai?". "Mujhe nai pata Aj kuch hai kya baatcutter?" asked a confused rey. " Nai kuch nai bas woh hum yaha college me kyu aai hai?"Kriya changes the topic. It was Sunday and they were alone in the college at 7 am . All thankz to Reyaansh Singhania Kriya had to leave her beautiful dream incomplete. (beautiful dream matlab samaj jao guys kiske sapne)

"Kuch GS work hai baatcutter isliye"said rey. "Toh kya itni subha subha ana zaroori tha. Badme bhi toh aa sakte the. Pata hai kitna beautiful sapna dekh rahi thi mein" says a irritated kriya. Rey smiles seeing that angry pout on his baatcutter's face. She looks so cute thought rey. " Ab aise khade khade taad (stare) kya rahe ho mujhe , kaam kareh"she says stretching the word kaam. " Okay tum rehersal hall jao. Mein kuch papers..."

Without letting him complete she went straight to Rehersal hall. " Universeji sach kehte hai saare ladke ek jaise hote hai. Buddhu bilkul buddhu..." she stopped in the mid when she saw Rehersal hall beautifully decorated with white n red ballons and her favourite flowers. Everywhere her photos were sticked. She was shocked would be an underestimate. How can she think that Rey HER Rey can forget this this day.

A pair of hands held her waist from behind .She doesn't need to guess who he was. She can guess his touch in a second. " Tumhe sach mein lagta hai ki mein aj ka din bhool jaunga" he whispered huskly. Kriya turns and hugs him tight. This feelings were new for them andthey were enjoying it. " Happy one month confession anniversary" they said in union and burst into laughter. Suddenly Rey pulls Kriya close such that they were just inches apart.

TRING TRING

Rey woke up wih a jolt " No No No! mein usse apne pe affect nai hone de sakta. Dude tujhe taani ke sapne dekhne chahiye. Oh Universeji kya ho raha hai. Wait did I said Universeji? Oh No No No. Yeh mein kya bol raha hu. Okay Okay maine kuch nai bola, kissi ke sapne nai dekhe. Yah cool Rey cool sab thik hai" and murmuring the same he drifted back to sleep

TING TONG

Areey itni subha subha kaun aaya hai. I am sure wahi hoga. She opens the door.

"Yaar itni subha inlogo ne hume yaha kyu bulaya hoga"asked a confused Vicky. "Hmmm" came a reply from a sleepy Nil. Vicky beats him. "Ha ha who who weakling team ko kuch baat karni hai"said Nil coming out of his sleepy mood."Yaar aj Sunday ke din bhi itni jaldi utha diya"cried Vicky. "Ha yaar its just 7:30" joined Nil.

BEAP BEAP

"Lo aa gaya Simmi ka message. Chal bhai jaana toh padega" said a disappoint Nil. And they both rushed to college knowing that their girlfriend's are all ready to kill them.

"SURPRISE" said someone and hugs her tightly. " Mujhe pata that um hi honge Swayu" said kriya with a wide smile. "So itni subha - subha kaise" she further added. " Great ab apni Jaan se milne bhi nai aa sakta. Dekha universeji kaise din aa gai hai" he said sarcastically. Kriya laughed and said " Oyee nautanki band kar aur andar aa." " Dekha universeji sach bolo toh..." Kriya drags him inside whereas hw was still busy complaining her Universeji.

" Lo aagaye yeh do sleepy heads" said Sharon when she saw Nicky bro's entering Rehersal Hall. " Ha bolo kyu jagaya hume itni subha" cried Nicky bro's. All the Dazzlers faces Weaklinds and said "SHOOT"

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Phew

So guys I hope you liked the update.

I was going to discontinue this story but the response I got on my last chapter made me continue this😛

Thank u soo much guys for your comments and likes. And ya thankz for encouraging a non writer like me😃😳

Ali di hope u like it😳

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Next update will after page 9😉

Probably after my exams

- Radhika