Smitar's: Recalling Arnav-II Parts 1~9 Link to #2 on Pg 1 (4/5)

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daljeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

What will be Kushi's answer?????

Everytime it is about Arnav. His endurance is at limits, he can't draw breath hence he is here. What about Kushi when she was bleeding in his love? When she was suffering in his love. How is a girl to trust a man who professed to lvoe her, yet left her unmarried and pregnant? Who kept her lfie and reputation at stake at each point of their life? A person who won't think twice for blaming her for anything that goes wrong in his family and life?

If I was Kushi I could have never believed Arnav. I might still love him inside, but would I take the risk of giving it one more chance? I don't know. Maybe if Arnav proves worthy of it. So far Arnav has done nothing but play cautious with her and utter I love you meaninglessly and blame himself. Is that enough????? For me it is not. I'm waiting to see what Kushi's answer would be.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Loved the update..
looking forward to know kushi's answer

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@BlueBloodQueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Awesome up date!!!!!!
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muskaansobti

@muskaansobti

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

supeerrrbbb parts loved al three updates

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

awesome update khushi needs time she may have forgiven him but the hurt is to deep for her just to mave on this time khushi is making her self clear and this time asr will have to do everything to make her come back to him .

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sweetfairy16

@sweetfairy16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Wow this story is fantastic!!! I have just read all of the parts and can't wait to read the next update :)

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: Arshix144
I am incredibly ecstatic to see an update right after I caught up with this whole FF! I am sure it is going to come as no surprise to you S, but I simply loved every single development in this chapter. Arnav's initial attempt at surprising his Khushi, Khushi's initial concern for him and then her reaction to his surprise was presented to us so beautifully.
This may sound like I am getting some sadistic pleasure out of seeing this shattered and remorseful Arnav but it is quite necessary in this story, he needs to feel what he inflected upon Khushi. He needs to learn how his actions impacted the innocent soul that his Khushi is. This was shown quite cleverly in the way Arnav tried to start fresh by introducing himself again, looking at Khushi's reaction he also realized that he can't just wipe off everything that transpired in the past so he decided to try a different approach by expressing his undying love for her, the way he craved for her presence in his life! I loved Khushi's questions, they were heart wrenching questions but they were perfectly timed to get the kind of reaction from Arnav that was very much needed.

The helplessness of the whole situation, the physical gesture of Arnav putting his arms around her waist and kneeling down infront of his Khushi also provided us with a vivid picture of a broken Arnav who was trying to apologize, seek comfort and provide comfort to his broken wife. Loved it bas!

PS. I don't think I mentioned this in my comment earlier but thank you so much Rulama for posting these updates for us! :-)

You are welcome dear.😊

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: Arshix144

🤗 J, I can't thank you enough for introducing me to Smita's work! ❤️
It makes for a quite a pleasant reading experience with my kinda stuff! :D Oh and I am happy to Fan girl with you any time you like! You just call me and we will fangirl away! xx

Ps. Apologies for Spamming this thread Smita and Rulama! 😳

This does not come under spamming rules... I think...😉

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: B.S.I_Love_You
ohk now I m more scared thn Arnav wud be..lol.. I hope Arshi come together.. cuz they complete eachother.. 😳

Isha,

Just do this and you will be alright!

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
congo on the century

lovely update - iam happy they are talking it out

hope this tomorrow comes soon - I very badly want to know what khushi's answer would be

great update smita

rashmi, 🤗