SanDhir SS: Burning //Part 8-Pg.41//28/7/14 |Complete| - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Reminiscence

Awww! This is so cute, Ananya! Can't believe I was missing on this. :/
I love this SS. :D
Jaldi update. :)

Thank you Rini! <3
I'll try. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

You have been asking me to review this incredible SS but I have been way too lazy! Sworry! It's okay. The blue made up for it. 😆


But here I am, finally! xD Yes. :') Miss. Novel Writer is commenting. :')

Ananya, this might be a first for you but thank you SO much for having drabble-like updates! This should be called a series of dribbles, not an SS! xD Just kidding! Sometimes, people write and write to make an update longer than it should be and forget the point of it but that doesn't happen with you. Not first, maybe second or third. 😆 Drabbles are generally 200-300 words long, hence I prefer SS. xD I prefer drabbles because I tend to stretch it too much. Thank you <3

Also, there are limited scenes, so they remain etched in the minds of the reader. Your language is impeccable and the way you bring out each feeling and emotion of the characters is commendable! Loving this phase of jealousy between the two. Ahh! Thanks a ton. <3 Means a helluva lot. <3

I love how you end all your updates, leaving food for thought for the reader! Most people prefer to call it 'cravings' 😆

All in all, great going! Update soon and keep writing! :* Thank you! I will and I will. 😆

Always, and forever,
Aru Ananya

PS. This hue of blue, only for you :") With the blue, you made me coo. :')
PPS. ^See how I made that rhyme xD B-) ^See how I made that rhyme. B| xP

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow I just read all the parts together ... update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh hell no!!! How can I miss this one??? I was waiting eagerly for you to update it and see you had sent me the PM yet I wasn't able to see it...

Ah!! Prof. Vardhaan ki jai ho. He slyly paired SanDhir up and played the role of cupid in their newly blooming relationship.
I would say that this chapter was Vardhaan centered, though Sandhir had their fair share as well.
This was so bewitching and alluring. The way you described SanDhir working in peace made it look way more serene and enticing...
The flow of the story left me speechless specially the last portion.
You never falter to amaze me, not even a single time.
I'm eagerly waiting fot the next update.

--With love
Kajal
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yaar this is sooo awsm!! Luvin it plz update!! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Say yay cause I read all the 5 chapters and you're going to get a lamba wala comment. :D

I dunno the concept. I don't want to know either cause for the first time, I really loved reading something that I had no clue about. 😆

Ch 1
It was exceedingly well written. Obviously. Like all the chapters. The passion that lies with SanDhir was portrayed impeccably well. The sudden kiss was *_*

Ch 2
Sanyukta's stammering when she came to know about Randhir's 'cousin' Riya, was super funny. But the funniest part was when Randhir went on to explain the word 'cousin' as if he's a dictionary just to rile Sanyukta. Loved that part. Parth's timing is pathetic. Everywhere. 🤣

Ch 3
Randhir's dream was phenomenal. They had no connection to each other at all except for Sanyukta and the passionate kiss. You didn't drag it and that was good. It was written perfectly well.

Ch 4
Randhir's hallucinating talks were too good. The best part about this chapter is their fights, the passion and most importantly, even after all the hatred, the care they have for each other. THAT is chocolate chip on the chocolate cake.

Ch 5
Vardhan plays cupid for SanDhir almost all the time. An unnoticed fact. xD Rank no. 1 and his Farzi, do produce exceptional outputs when teamed together. How they ended up working quietly the whole while would remain a mystery for all of us. You gave this chapter, a beautiful end.

All the chapters have been executed flawlessly. My favourite has to be chapter 4 for the reasons stated above. It was just too perfect compared to the other chapters. 😳

You could update. Now that the person you've been waiting for to comment has commented. 😎

P.S : This is my favourite SS already.

Love,
Aishu.
Edited by tommo. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


ANANYA UPDATEE!!!^^

I don't know how I feel about this
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Posted: 11 years ago
I WILL. I SCRAPPED YOU DEKH. 🤣
This show though. :')
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Posted: 11 years ago
STalking!!
*Glares at Sanch*
I am having the first comment B)

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