SanDhir SS: Burning //Part 8-Pg.41//28/7/14 |Complete| - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

Ahhh it was cool they fighting again Accha? 😆
Vardhan makes them partners
They complete their work Yesss :D
Awww he sees them and it reminds him of niharika and him awww
He falls asleep on her shoulder
And awww again :p AWWW MAAA 🤣

Loved it Glad you did :')

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks a ton <3
Glad you liked it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks a lot :)
Glad you liked it <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww this was soo cute!!!😊
when r u updating the next part???
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifull story..loved it very much!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww! This is so cute, Ananya! Can't believe I was missing on this. :/
I love this SS. :D
Jaldi update. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
You have been asking me to review this incredible SS but I have been way too lazy! Sworry!

But here I am, finally! xD

Ananya, this might be a first for you but thank you SO much for having drabble-like updates! This should be called a series of dribbles, not an SS! xD Just kidding! Sometimes, people write and write to make an update longer than it should be and forget the point of it but that doesn't happen with you.

Also, there are limited scenes, so they remain etched in the minds of the reader. Your language is impeccable and the way you bring out each feeling and emotion of the characters is commendable! Loving this phase of jealousy between the two.

I love how you end all your updates, leaving food for thought for the reader!

All in all, great going! Update soon and keep writing! :*

Always,
Aru

PS. This hue of blue, only for you :")
PPS. ^See how I made that rhyme xD B-)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Piya1702

Aww this was soo cute!!!😊
when r u updating the next part???

Thank youu <3
Soon enough xD
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

Beautifull story..loved it very much!!
😆

Thank youu <3
Glad you liked it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you! :D
Glad you liked it <3

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