SanDhir SS: Burning //Part 8-Pg.41//28/7/14 |Complete|

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Posted: 11 years ago
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SanDhir Drabble: Burning

"You know what Randhir? I don't even care anymore. You can go and stay with Priya, Shiya, whatever girl for all I care." Sanyukta told Randhir glaring at him like she would kill him any minute now.
"First of all, it's Riya. I don't even know how someone can forget such a short name. But hey, you are Farzi after all. Second of all, I smell something burning here." Randhir replied to her, his face maintaining a neutral expression.

"Damn you, you MCP. Why the heck will I be jealous and that too of Riya and YOU?" Sanyukta said, her voice dripping with disgust.

"When did I say I'm jealous. Something is actually burning in this room Sanyukta," he said, sniffing to see where it was coming from. He saw one of the burners in the lab switched on and immediately turned it off.

Turning back to Sanyukta with a smug look on his face, he said, "So where were we?" Hearing his tone, Sanyukta began to get scared and started walking back towards the door.

As fate would have it, Randhir kept coming towards her and when she finally reached the door, it was locked. Cursing her fate, she tried to escape from Randhir who now had each of his arms on either side of her.

"So, jealous haan? Maybe I should help you get rid of all this jealousy," Randhir told her and slowly leaned in, kissing her on her lips.


So, that was that. This drabble was kinda like a spur of a moment thing. When I was talking to Tanya (TashaForever), we were discussing about writing and SanDhir so yeah, kinda the place where I kinda got the motive from. :P Hope you guys like it! :)

Love,
Ananya


Index:

Part 1- Above
Part 2- Page 6
Part 3- Page 13
Part 4- Page 21
Part 5- Page 28
Part 6- Page 37
Part 7- Page 40
Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay! Ooh Yea! Ooh Yea!
I am first! res!
--Unres---
I am the motivation ;) yay!!
You know what?!
I am gonna kill ya!
Such a wonderful piece of drabble but it hsouldn't be so short yaar.
Itna chotu saa piece..isse behtar thodi mehnat karke ek lamba OS, TS ya SS likh leti ;)
SO Im motivating u once again!
Continue dis piece of drabble ;)
Post a series of 3-5 or maybe 10 drabbles :P
Baaki ur dialogues...Rofl! Priya shiya :P
Smell something burning..switches off the burner ROFL!!
Ur hilarious re Ananya di!
And thank you so much for posting this <3
Love,
tanya :*
Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RSS I mean res!
___________________
*UNRES*
Miss burning kamini!! I guess you are 14 as I have been told earlier! And if this is the sagacity of your work at this tender age then I am ashamed of me being 15!
The understanding of the characters is truly commendable and I really appreciate how the impulsive traits of both have been showcased!! Good going and I really appreciate the fact now Drabble writers manage to sew such gushing stream of emotions into words! Sensual eh?
I hope this satisfied you! Just kidding!! You deserved this!
Lots of love!
Flames!
Edited by BeyondWords - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahh it was so cute Soda <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: TashaForever

Yay! Ooh Yea! Ooh Yea!

I am first! res!
--Unres---
I am the motivation ;) yay!! Don't be so happy 😆
You know what?!
I am gonna kill ya! Zulmi insaaan 😆
Such a wonderful piece of drabble but it hsouldn't be so short yaar. I already told you the reason in scraps :P
Itna chotu saa piece..isse behtar thodi mehnat karke ek lamba OS, TS ya SS likh leti ;) Zyada ummeed mat rakh xD
SO Im motivating u once again!
Continue dis piece of drabble ;)
Post a series of 3-5 or maybe 10 drabbles :P I was so not going to do it but you convince me. Kameeni kahiki -_-
Baaki ur dialogues...Rofl! Priya shiya :P
Smell something burning..switches off the burner ROFL!!
Ur hilarious re Ananya di! Di? Haww, Di mat bol 😆 Ek hi saal badi hu.
And thank you so much for posting this <3 You're welcome <3 And thank you for commenting ^_^
Love,
tanya :*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: FlawlessAshvik

Ahh it was so cute Soda <3

Aww, thank you Coffee <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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short, crisp and to the point...
something I adore in u Ananya...🤗
great job...👍🏼
as always

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Serendipity..

short, crisp and to the point...
something I adore in u Ananya...🤗
great job...👍🏼
as always

Thank you so much Rads <3
Means a lot 😃
As always? 😆 I doubt that xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Thank you so much Rads <3
Means a lot 😃
As always? 😆 I doubt that xD


ur work is always worth all the applause👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it! 😆

Specially when he says something really is burning 🤓 Sanyukta kam baat kiya karo tum

The ending <3
Excellent dialogues 😎

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