Arshi FF: Caretaker ~ Thread 3 ~ Part 14 (16/05)

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mamidis

@mamidis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

What is the contract... loved update

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schwa

@schwa

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

A very nice story. Arnav needs to clear up his thinking and decide who he wants, right now he is yo yoiing between the two women, confusing himself and the two ladies.

The one thing i've found strange is how you make arnav and khusi address each other as Ms. Gupta and Mr. Raizada after all these weeks of knowing each other. They refer to each other in the same way even in their thoughts Even Lavanya thinks of Khushi as Ms. Gupta. I'm finding this a very odd old fashioned stiff form of addresssing. By now after all that they've gone through why not allow them to address each other by their first names. In real life people, especially if they are family members, rarely adress each other as Ms and Mr. They either request tge other to adddress them by their names or use the relevant term for therelationship they share.

Palak is so cute. She should now be able to say words and walk a bit.

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jiji

@lakshyaNkt

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

wow khushi is hurt but will not admit it

thnx

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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Arghh... This is more frustrating. What Arnav is saying? Did he mean it? I wish Khushi and Palak to move out off RM and...to hell wid Lavanya. What the heck she is sayng abt Khushi.?! Plz make Khushi an independent grl and i no mre wish hr to stay in d same place whr tht bimbo La and stupid Arnav lives...

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zaibun un nisa

@saima4744

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

wonderful.

arshi both r wonder on their places.

what's going on their lifes.

arnav explane la miss gupta palak and his bound but khushi took it wrong.

waiting up next.

tf pm.

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arshifan04

@arshifan04

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Arnav is only attracted towards khushi...Arnav's this confession is going to cost him a lot in future...
Loved this khushi very much...She is well composed n I love the way she is around Arnav...that's what he deserves...

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

I m not liking La's attitude much 😡😒

But I m still waitng fr Arnav to realise that what he feels fr Khushi is more dn an attraction :P😉

Same fr Khushi 😳

P.S. Did I mention that Palak is super cute ? :P😆❤️

Edited by Barun_Addict - 11 years ago

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smiley-shiney

@smiley-shiney

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Very nice update

Lavanya 😡 Just wanna give a tight slap to her

Throw her out . She became a big head ache

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

wonderful update...when will arnav listen to his heart...continue soon

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ZakiZ

@ZakiZ

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

well, Arnav's words must have hurt Khushi.. i m sure... i wonder if he truly believes what he said... does he really think it is nothing more than a simple attraction... how come the family has not see the tension between Arnav and Khushi? cant wait for more of this...