ArHi FF || Serendipity #2 || Link to Thread 3: Pg 1 - Page 20

Hopefully that moment is here which i have been waiting for a long time. This time around (finger's crossed) its Khushi's knight in shining armour whom she has dashed into. Ab aur atyachar mai sah nahi paaongi!🤔

Those black eyes ... Hopefully her actual khushi 's ... She's been thru hell ride . But all in all I m glad she left and u closed that loop well. Her family atleast will know what Arnav thinks of her.. That said, keeping in mind the fantastic way u write and the way u tell a story, it's hard to digest this much negativity ... Even of it's fictional. I understand that all this is needed ... Hopefully it goes a little upwards for her from now. It's just too uncomfortable with my heart in my throat every single time .. And don't say don't read it cos it's just fantastic .. And I m addicted to the story ...
Every sentence u wrote, as she was walking thru those streets , it was like I could almost see it all.. That's how potent ur story is... So deep... So please don't go the filmy way .. Arnav's redemption , I m sure will happen , I m sure but does this have to be an arshi together always kinda story?? As much as I love them, this story , for me, has more meaning than just mere re union.. It's a tale of betrayal, misunderstNding , breaking, finding , yearning etc etc in which groveling also is one of ... I truly wish khushi to find her happiness in someone else and not in Arnav after his change... He could move heaven and earth for her from here, that would still not make up for the sheer torture he showed her... It would be lovely to see khushi rise from the ashes and find all kinds of happiness ... For me, right now , khushi's state towards Arnav comes across as indifference... That's not hate .. So she just doesn't care anymore.. And should stay exactly that way... And for all he did along with his family, they all should repent for the rest of their lives thinking kash...

Oh oh i am late...but congo for ur new thread ,
was busy with exams...will be back after catching up with chaps..

It is one of the good decision khushi has taken after a long time !!!!!!!!!! But will this decision change her life for good ? the letter addressed to khushi's father explains all ... will khushi meet her saviour now ?

i read ur story in one go and can tell u that what emotional picture u have draw regarding the abuse done by arnav on khusi is far better and emotional then any other physical abuse shown in other ff .i would love to read this story further that to in one go.Please continue as soon as possible

Are these people really human, how much they are going to torture the poor soul...her condition is getting worse ...but ur last part gave me hope and i am very much looking forward to it, and the pace is fine with me...and a special mention to the your portrayal of emotion ...really it makes me cry with khushi...and hate the raizadas...plz dont spare them from their retribution.

You leave me always wanting more. Brilliant update, I really want Khushi to get healthy and live her life again.

I hope arnav suffers for having Khushi to go they this hell... I wonder how would he feel if he have to abandon his precious "di" or vise versa ... He had snatched everything from her and he refuse to believe her .. I so wish to see one day a reverse of the roll ... A pair of dark blak eye huh? A savior?
Wow can't wait to read more
Thanks for sharing the story and pm

but this was Khushi Kumari Gupta. An indestructible force. ----Loved this line and was happy to know that khushi decided to run away...but she fell? and whose is that darkest pair of eyes????