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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#211

I absolutely loved it. stunning peice of writing!

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jg12

@jg12

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Glad that Khushi left . Looking forward to a strong Khushi

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anera

@anera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Next Update kab tak milega ???

pretty please Zee...😛

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

I know i know..., i m kinda spamming ur thread... Bt suddenly a thought crossed my head... :p ... I wondred when arnav faces the truth wat will be his reaction nd mostly importantly how will he face this silent khushi whose pain nd nt wording out her opinion is just becoz of him... She who is longing for some kind of care how will she behave with him... I mean what if u keep the khushi's character like this only nd not the strong one... Its upto u... I m seriously gona get hospitalised into mental asylum if i keep on thinking about arshi nd their ff's... Lol... Waiting for ur nxt update...

Edited by piyaarshi - 11 years ago

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

congo for the new thread Zee

this was such a wonderful update

Zee, you truly are an amazing talented writer. You penned down the words so beautifully.

I love the way you write

I felt so bad for Khushi poor her

Khushi be a strong girl come on we know you can do this!

How long will Arnav stay blinded in rage when will he realize that he has been really dumb and stupid

I hope Khushi is alright

Is she pregnant? I hope not!

Who is the guy with the black eyes?

Oh la la seems like new hero ki entry hone wali hai I can't wait!

Update soon pleasewa!

Edited by crazyforsarun - 11 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#217

First of all I'm so sorry for the late comment as I have not been active on IF for nearly a week,

Secondly we got three updates in the space of five days, a huge pat on the back for you.

Thirdly you finally reached second thread, a huge round of applause and I'm so proud of you.

Fourthly thank you so so so much for dedicating the last update to me, you are an amazing and superb writer and I am blessed and honoured to be reading your work and this journey from the start has been one emotional roller coaster but I have throughly enjoyed it.

Now coming to the updates each for has been a mixture of emotional, painful, heart breaking as well as sad,

But I am so happy Khushi has left Arnav and I can't believe that monster actually thought Khushi would be upset over leaving him, he honestly needs to wake up from his deluded world.

It shocks me how the Raizada ladies were questioning Khushi about leaving the marriage, it's a shame they have never know Khushi and how precious she actually is.

Who the hell is this Chetan was Shyam not enough that we got another filthy dog in the story, such a disgusting and vile man.

It's good to read Arnav is actually missing Khushi so there was some effect that Khushi did have on the stone cold hearted man,

I love you so so so much for actually making Khushi leave and I want her to return with her head held high and hopefully with her dignity, respect and most of all her smile.

The letter Khushi wrote to her dad was so emotional as well as heart touching, I hope Arnav gets to read that to finally discover the truth.

I hope at the end when Khushi fainted the person saving her is finally her saviour and not one of the pathetic men in her life.

Loved reading all the updates and I'm loving the new banners,

Each update has been written exceptionally well,

The updates were a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM's

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#218

read this FF in one go and i must say that this is truly a unique track... how harder can life be for khushi than it already is... hope from now on it is just better life for khushi and not for the worse...

if this is the intermission then the update perfectly fits ... that letter was truly heartwrenching...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

Edited by amus5 - 11 years ago

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Hope we will get to read you soon and that we will get to see the revival of khushi soon. As for Arnav that all hell now breaks loose after that letter and that Garima & Buaji do go to Shantivan after all