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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

This prologue! Haaye! The adjectives! The overview! The last few lines! I'm getting a feeling that they're from the Twilight series xP

Kritisha (I hope no one has coined you guys that yet xP), you are going to do wonders with this story! Can't wait to read more of it! :D

PS. Please update JALDI! xP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue
This prologue! Haaye! The adjectives! The overview! The last few lines! I'm getting a feeling that they're from the Twilight series xP
Kritisha (I hope no one has coined you guys that yet xP), you are going to do wonders with this story! Can't wait to read more of it! :D

PS. Please update JALDI! xP

You got it right Arushi !! They are from the prologue of Breaking Dawn xD

Thank you so much!! Will update sooon xP

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barauni

@barauni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Nice prologue guys..
Continue soon
Part 1???

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Harita

@Harita1309

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

superbbb prologue...but m really xcited to know wts gonna happen next...plzzz update ASAP...n d vocabulary made me luk into d dictionary for some *god knows how many times*...dis is amazing...dying to know wts next...

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Rekha

@Rekha85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

My dear sisters!!!!!!!!!!!! Krithi and Ipthi!!!!!!!!!Ur intro...the story intro and the prologue...they were just awesum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The story intro...all the questions written...I always needed the answer for every question written their!!!!!!!!!!!!

All differences...as a teenager I want to knoe it!!!!!!!!!!
The prologue was quite interesting!!!!!!!!!!

just updated upto the prologue...and 16 pages...I thought u updated the story without telling me...

Now u might have understood that hw awesum ur story is!!!!!!!

This seems to be a strong foundation to a Superb ff!!!!!!!!!!

And I am sure the whole story would become a damn hit!!!!!!!!!!

Keep writing...Love u both a lots!!!!!!!!
With Love

Rekha!!!!!!!!!!

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Anuradha

@federized2210

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

I'm ROFL!!
16 pages worth comments for a prologue? Tells u what a start u've made!
Kritz n Ipti, awesome work!!!
Written to perfection! Can't wait to read more!!
Post jaldi plz!
Love much :*
#Anu

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: TashaForever
Finally!
Guys abki baar late update naa kariyo! Hum chod denge padhna varna xP

Dil maange more behno! Ittu chotu saa prologue!

Daalo first chapter, toh pheku mai roses aur chocolates.

Baaki mai kya bolu?

Vocabulary toh hai hi...MahaAwesome! Phrases..the penning of thoughts...Tussi dono jee great ho!

Ab jaldi update!

Taare dono ki choti behna,

Tanu aka Tinni!<33

We shall supply enough to make your dil satisfied!

I shall grab the chocolates and Kriti, you can keep the roses!!

Thenkew Ji! Hume aapka yeh comment karne ka naya andaaz bahut hi bhaaya!

Taare

Didu!

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: DEVU46
Awesome concept!!
Nd prologue was really amazing!!
Looking forward 4 d next update!!
Thanks 4 d scrap!!! Do PM wen updated plz!!

Thanks a lot!! This means a lot to us, both!
We shall!

Love

Iptisha!

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: yatup
The prologue's updated. Couldn't wait for the other one. Something about it really attracts me towards these. But sometimes i think, the story is connected to my soul in some way. Is it reincarnation ??

Such beautiful words make us wonder as well!

Thank you Nako!

Love

Iptisha!

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: shalini_shakti
Woah...!! Awesome prolouge...
Both of u... I mean Krisha.. Hats off to u guys..!!
Brilliantly written...
I loved those lines at the end...
Waiting for next...
Update ASAP...
Love
Shalini

Shalini,

Thank you for such beautiful words!

They mean a lot to us both!

The Quote is from Twilight Breaking Dawn, as the book our heroine embraced was the same!

Love

Iptisha!