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Tisha

@BeyondWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: forevermine
Tisha and Kriti!!
U hv no clue hw beautifully u guys have managed to create the prologue...!!
U guys r wonderful writers individually also but together you guys definitely created miracle!! Gosh this is what I call an FF with plot...storyline and a writing which mite look effortlessly put together bt given a in depth tot over it...!!
You guys together have made me expect and await this ff mre and more... Afterall the prologue has turned out to be written to sheer perfection!!
I luved the dept of randhirs emotions sumthng which both you guys have nailed it!!! Sanyukta has turned the villian for him...bt it definitely would be wonderful to see what this ff awaits us...the pain..the sorrow...outright justified...!!!
Update soon guys..
Regards
Safrena

Safy! You made My night today!
You have no clue, how much this means to us!
One of the best writers commenting is itself pretty Overwhelming!!

Love ya

Tisha!

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Madhusmita das

@moonkmh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

this is brilliant..cant believe my lil ipti n kriti writing this..wah..m so so impress n proud of u both. lovely writing..awsome word selection n what a exotic way of writing...superb..love u guys..

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-.QTPie.-

@-.QTPie.-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

I had read this before but couldnt comment due to some problem
Sorry :P

Yaahhh with the storryy
Im having a great feeling
Im soo soo loving this thing
u people are awesome yaar..
Love this FF
Pls update soon n Pm me as well ;)

Lots of Love
-Surabhi-

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Dancindoll8

@Dancindoll8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Res...

Unres...

Sorry to have kept you waiting so long..

What can I say?

This is Wonderful...

I love how you have captured the animosity and frustration in this...

I especially heart the way you construct the lines and the passage...

You guys make sure that the content shines through and that the flow is not broken..

This is a masterpiece...

I just loved the last lines - very delicately and beautifully crafted..

This is going to be a dark ff which will pierce through our hearts like knives...

In the end I just want to say that this ff will wreak havoc in our hearts and mind and also this forum...

Update soon or I'm gonna kick your ass...

Edited by Dancindoll8 - 11 years ago

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..
hey dimples...and kriti...
u both are awesome yar...means u both rock the IF...
iptie u r one of the best writer and kriti to...and u both combined ...it is going to be flawless and this is prologue is just perfect...
u portrayes everything perfectly...i just loved it...
vocab is fabulous as usual...
u portrayed about randhir there..u nailed over there perfectly girls...sanyukta's character is interesting...VILLAIN???
very well written...
loved the last lines...they were so true...
waiting for the first part...
love,harika...keep smiling krisha..it looks good to see u together...😉

Ah! Thank you so much Deani! thins really means a lot to us, both!

Thank you for your support!

Shall we expect the same motivation in future? You and our other friends aka are the thrust!

love ya

Iptisha!😳

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@..Mellifluous..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

Ah! Thank you so much Deani! thins really means a lot to us, both!
Thank you for your support!
Shall we expect the same motivation in future? You and our other friends aka are the thrust!
love ya
Iptisha!😳

well yeah !!! u can expect same motivation in future...because am good in that...yeah !! my friends too..😉

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: winchesters
KriSha, what a beautiful intro!
Every sentence is so well written!
The story seems interestin!
Also, i loved how u managed to say soo much in such a short intro!
I am a fan of short but meaningful posts (In this case updates)
M really looking forward to this one!
Keep up the good work!

Love,
Ifra!

Hey Ifra!

Thanks a ton mate!

Poet of the forum,You know, your review means a lot to us!

Love ya!

Iptisha😃

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rashmi

@morning_dews

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

KriSha... beautiful name, sweeties(instantly after seeing this word I thought it was Kriya+Sharon😆)

Hmmm the pro is like a roller-coaster ride, for me...!!!!

was excited reading it and is now more excited to read the actual part of it(the story..!)

Good Luck both of you.. Am sure you both together will create wonders here with this FF..! 👍🏼

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: G.R.
OMG!!
guys...d prologue is amazing
i felt lyk m watchin sum awesome movie trailer
seriously...cnt wait for this ff to strt.
Guys update soon
nd plzz if u cn pm me too..

We are glad that you could connect this much!

This means a lot to us both!

Yes we would surely PM you as we update!

Thank you so much!

Love

Iptisha!

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: TheDreamCatcher
krisha.
fantastic prologue...
the knife peels in skin and pierces through the soul.. fantastic..
ab jaldi se part-1 update karo.. how long will you satisfy us with teasers and prologues..

with love
Tich.

Tich, thanks a lot!

Well we shall do that till we can!

Shall update soon mate!

Love

Iptisha