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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

wonderful update... beautifully penned...thanx for d pm...

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I'm glad u liked it!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb.. Liked it.. Thanks for pm..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AMadhuri

U r really awesome writer, loved the update

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Thanks! Thank u so much!
Im glad u liked it!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipeee
Our wait is over!!!!!
Btw happy birthday in advance!!!
Man!this update was superb
That confession and insecurity was totally and perfectly portrayed!!!
Hope you update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

🤗May! You promised, and you delivered. I guess it was the right decision for you to put some pressure on you. Unholding the story has turned out amazing. Writer's block?! Girl! The first sentence of Chapter 7 already set the hilarious tone in the update. I love how you went further with that thought and insecurity of hers. I really love how you getting every important asset in the story. The insecurity pregnant woman feel is a big part of the pregnancy but in this story, it's even more. Since Sanyukta doesn't have that social security-thing going on with Randhir. Their relationship is, complicated. and you make it so perfectly clear in the little romance-part, it was confusing and adorable. The little detail that Randhir was kinda out of it after Sanyukta said 'pin', made me smile. Okejj, just like my PMs this thing is getting too long, loving the update.

Hey its u!! Hi!!
OMG!!!
I love your comments!!!!!!
I know right? It was good that i forced myself to write this chapter!
Ah! Thank u!!
I know! All woman, especially a teenager feels insecure about herself! Because i do too!
Oh no.. i love your pm's and i love your comments!
They are always AWESOME!!!!
Thank u for your comment and thank u for reading!
Im glad u liked it!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MyLiFeMyRuLeS..

Yipeee
Our wait is over!!!!!
Btw happy birthday in advance!!!
Man!this update was superb
That confession and insecurity was totally and perfectly portrayed!!!
Hope you update soon!

Hey!
Thank you sooo much!!
I'm glad u liked it!

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Posted: 11 years ago

my very first comment in your ff !😛

well first of all i would like to wish you a happy birthday in advance !
then coming to the chapter !
it was simply superb !
i totally loved it !
the fight b/w sanyu and the boy but randhir intervened !

A gathering crowd enveloped them, chanting, "fight! fight! fight!"

Sanyukta stared at all of them in disbelief. "No one chanted that when I punched that douche bag! What, don't I look like fighting kind of a girl?"

A text from Parth.

I am not sure but I think everyone knows you are pregnant and when a guy called you a s**t, Randhir kicked his ass.

"When did Parth turned into one of the gossip girls?" Randhir scoffed.


these lines were hillarious !🤣

sanyu's getting fat day by day and she's so insecure about her body !
and she even told about it to randhir !
and he complimented on her beauty !!
that was so sweet of him !
and they were selecting the baby's name ! cool !!
it's was quite funny to read those parts with kaustuki pmsing !
and what was hillarious was when randhir said the boy's name was nice but he hated it !🤣
btw what's wrong with jiggy ?
totally loved it dear :)
do continue soon :)

- love
kiki😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thats a new story i read about sandhir!
Quite interesting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awsm update...itcws superb...loved it...

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