A Beautiful Mistake (UPDATING SOON) - Page 38

Created

Last reply

Replies

852

Views

193.3k

Users

173

Likes

1.8k

Frequent Posters

mariya.kamran thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Happy Birthday in advance. And oh my, what an awesome update yaar. Sanyu's insecurity while Randhir's concern... update soon. Lots of love xxx
Sheron18rockerz thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
May where were u all this while no reply no scrap ok fine i agree that even i didnt tried to talk but...chhodo here ur new update was fab that the fighing and the babies name giving was like 😆 hehehehe
xxMaYxx thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-


my very first comment in your ff !😛

well first of all i would like to wish you a happy birthday in advance !
then coming to the chapter !
it was simply superb !
i totally loved it !
the fight b/w sanyu and the boy but randhir intervened !

A gathering crowd enveloped them, chanting, "fight! fight! fight!"

Sanyukta stared at all of them in disbelief. "No one chanted that when I punched that douche bag! What, don't I look like fighting kind of a girl?"

A text from Parth.

I am not sure but I think everyone knows you are pregnant and when a guy called you a s**t, Randhir kicked his ass.

"When did Parth turned into one of the gossip girls?" Randhir scoffed.


these lines were hillarious !🤣

sanyu's getting fat day by day and she's so insecure about her body !
and she even told about it to randhir !
and he complimented on her beauty !!
that was so sweet of him !
and they were selecting the baby's name ! cool !!
it's was quite funny to read those parts with kaustuki pmsing !
and what was hillarious was when randhir said the boy's name was nice but he hated it !🤣
btw what's wrong with jiggy ?
totally loved it dear :)
do continue soon :)

- love
kiki😳

OH. MI. GAWD!!
Hey!!
Thank u sooo much!!! 😃
Im glad u found it hilarious!!!! 😆
Well she is.. m pretty sure every pregnant teenage girl is.
Well she kindda blurted it out when she thought randhir was checking out the girls!
I really dont know what's wrong with jiggy.. havent figured out yet.😕
Thank u again! your comment was so nice and fun to read! 😳
Im so glad u liked it! 😊

xxMaYxx thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! That's sooo beautiful!!!
Thank u sooo much!!!!!!!
shalini_shakti thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey...!!!
Firstly HAPPY BIRTHDAY..!!!! In advance...
Woah..!! Oh god..! U dedicated this update to me..!!!
Uff..!! Thank you do much Yaar...!!
Coming to the update...
Wow..!! Simply wow..!! I seriously missed ur updates..
And I finally got one which was quite long long one...
Thank you for this bada wala update..!!!
Hehe..:p sanyuktha looking fat...!! *im trying to imagine her with a belly kind thing..*
Awww... Kaustuki is so sweet..!!
The baby girls name will be Riley and the baby boy as smith... Awww... Such good names...!!
I was expecting a sandhir kiss..!! But it's okay give it later...
I'm just in love with this story..!! I'm so hooked..!!!
Update next part ASAP...
Will be eagerly waiting..
Lots of love,
Shalini...:D

PS: happy birthday again..!!! In advance..
And thnqz for dedicating this update to me...!!
xxMaYxx thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: remindmeiforgot

Wow awsm update...itcws superb...loved it...

Hey!
Thank u soo much!
Im glad u liked it!

😃
xxMaYxx thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak06

Thats a new story i read about sandhir!
Quite interesting!

Hey there..

Thank you soo much!

I'm glad u found it interesting!

😃
xxMaYxx thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: remindmeiforgot

Happy bday...in advance...

Haha thank you! 😃
xxMaYxx thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Happy Birthday in advance. And oh my, what an awesome update yaar. Sanyu's insecurity while Randhir's concern... update soon. Lots of love xxx

Hello!
Thank u soo much yaar!
I'm soo glad u liked it!

😃
Drama_Writer thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
MiniMo,
Kya yaar! Har cheez ki ek haad hoti hein! Abey, aur kitna accha likhegi?!?!?!😆🤣
Seriously, your update was disgruntingly, ridiculously and not-so-shockingly AMAZING! Love every minute of it!
I usually don't feel a thing during those SanDhir "encounters" really, but then, while reading that here, my breath seemed to hitch in my throat! I had goosebumps all over! Actually now I feel, every girl atleast once in her life should have that one guy who says these things to her. Maybe that's what Prince Charming are for right!😛
Loved it!
Keep writing.
~Aryana😳

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".