A Beautiful Mistake (UPDATING SOON)

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Irij55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Wow amazing loved it upload next part soon

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aglaeca9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

wonderful update... beautifully penned...thanx for d pm...

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mani choudhary

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

sooo nice... luvd it n thnx fo d pm

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anjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

all the prts r fab just read it
update soon dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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AMadhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

U r really awesome writer, loved the update

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unisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

superb.. Liked it.. Thanks for pm..

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: Awesome_Annie
First of all- happy birthday in advance!
5 books? wow that's great.
Now the update was just great and funny!
The flashback.. wow!
Sanyukta fighting with that guy.. hahaha 😆
Randhir holding her back then fighting for her.. yeep!! 😳
Aw poor sanyukta and her dad.. 😡
Parth calling a girl fat? 😆 though its very unlike of him!
Name fight.. 😉😆
Riley is a good name..👍🏼
Now..
The last part!
OMG!!!!!!!!
Did randhir just said that?!?! SOOO ROMANTIC!!!
And sanyukta's heart.. thumping! Somebody is in love! ☺️
Overall.. fantastic! Update soon please!!!!!!!

Hey ann!

Thank u! I know.. i love books more than anything!

Lol i wanted sanyu to fight because i really dont like when all the gals depend on guys!

I know parth calling a girl fat is very unlike of him but you know.. actually i have no appropriate reason to why i did that with him!

Thank gawd! I love the name riley and i wanted everyone to like it too!

Thank u sooo much! I'm so glad u liked it!

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: Asapom
awesome update
mast update
the flashback is awesome
continue soon

Hello!

Thank u sooo much!

Im glad u liked it!

😊

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: 88sandy
oh wow dat was a long and awesum update dear...
so everyone nw knws...n nasty people are cmmenting on sanyu bt our sanyu is a fighter man...
lovd d hw randhr threatnd everyone...
oh poor kaustuki lost her temper thanx to our tom n jerry ur sandhir...
oh d last part was breatakinly beautiful...
sanyu opend her heart out n told everything to randhir n aftr dat wat followd was amazing...d things whch randhir said...suprb

Hey!

Thank u sooo much!

I'm so glad u liked it!

😃

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Mayuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: Prachijainn
Mayuri!
DO YOU REALLY HAVE WRITER's BLOCK???
I DOUBT YOU!
This chapter was THE BEST!
IT WAS FLAWLESS,AMAZING,OUTSTANDING and EVERYTHING!!!
My DEAR YOU JUST NAILED IT!
You SHOULD BE PROUD OF YOURSELF ma'am!
I AM SPEECHLESS!
The WAY YOU HAVE DESCRIBED SANYU's INNER TURMOIL DURING HER PREGNANCY WAS ,IS and WILL BE VERY GOOD!I GUARANTEE YOU ABOUT IT!
And DON'T DARE YOU SAY,THAT YOU HAVE WRITER's BLOCK
I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS CHAPTER
THIS WAS SOOO DAMN GOOD
Mayuri my friend aise hi likhte raho
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YOU HAVE IMPROVED A LOT!
Randhir ne jiss tarah se Sanyu ki care li,IT WAS FANTASTIC
Sanyu ka last waala confession was JHAKAAS!
I MEAN EACH AND EVERY WORD OF MY REPLY SO TAKE IT SERIOUSLY

-In Hope Of Loads Of Updates
and Love
-Prachi

PS:Mind you,I have written in capital letters for you!

IN ADVANCE HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY DEAR