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88sandy

@88sandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

oh wow dat was a long and awesum update dear...
so everyone nw knws...n nasty people are cmmenting on sanyu bt our sanyu is a fighter man...
lovd d hw randhr threatnd everyone...
oh poor kaustuki lost her temper thanx to our tom n jerry ur sandhir...
oh d last part was breatakinly beautiful...
sanyu opend her heart out n told everything to randhir n aftr dat wat followd was amazing...d things whch randhir said...suprb

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Mayuri!

DO YOU REALLY HAVE WRITER's BLOCK???

I DOUBT YOU!

This chapter was THE BEST!

IT WAS FLAWLESS,AMAZING,OUTSTANDING and EVERYTHING!!!

My DEAR YOU JUST NAILED IT!

You SHOULD BE PROUD OF YOURSELF ma'am!

I AM SPEECHLESS!

The WAY YOU HAVE DESCRIBED SANYU's INNER TURMOIL DURING HER PREGNANCY WAS ,IS and WILL BE VERY GOOD!I GUARANTEE YOU ABOUT IT!

And DON'T DARE YOU SAY,THAT YOU HAVE WRITER's BLOCK

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS CHAPTER

THIS WAS SOOO DAMN GOOD

Mayuri my friend aise hi likhte raho

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YOU HAVE IMPROVED A LOT!

Randhir ne jiss tarah se Sanyu ki care li,IT WAS FANTASTIC

Sanyu ka last waala confession was JHAKAAS!

I MEAN EACH AND EVERY WORD OF MY REPLY SO TAKE IT SERIOUSLY

-In Hope Of Loads Of Updates

and Love

-Prachi

PS:Mind you,I have written in capital letters for you!

IN ADVANCE HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY DEAR

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akhiraichura

@akhiraichura

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

first of all Happy Birthday in advance...😊

And the update was really really awesome...

i just loved the way u carried the story...

especially deciding the names of babies part...

could imagine kauostuki like that...😉

waiting for the next one...

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laughing_lola

@laughing_lola

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

U updated! Omg m i dreaming? 😆

well the wait was worth it. Everything was just perfect. The way you described all the emotions.. their fighting, sanyukta feeling hurt for being called a s**t and then the name fight. Then sanyukta's confession was just wow! And what all Randhir said was super cute. Sanyukta has feelings for randhir. That was going to happen because well he is randhir!

Update soon and thnx for the pm.👏

Btw happy birthday! 🥳

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

amazing update

i am glad that your writers block is gone

and happy birthday in advanced, incase i forget to wish you

loved the update

can't wait to see what happens next

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inocence

@inocence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Happy birthday in advance!

Thanks for the update! I loved the ending!!

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Sweta Paul

@-WanderLust-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

res!

~UNRES

Okay . So You Were Awfully Late.

But You Know What? That Update Made Up For It. Everything Forgiven and Forgotten.

It Was So Effingly Beautiful!

The Sandhir Part Was So Amazing!

I am Short Of Words Actually.

Can't Wait For The Next Update.😳

Cheers,

Sweta.

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Sumedha

@suumi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Wowww
such a big and amazing update!
Thr fights jus luvd it...
Nd why they r thnkng abt names so early 😆
parth's dialouge abt baby's fightng suprb 😆 👍🏼
Nd last part suprb!

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Scarlett kevin

@Mrs.JamesBarne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

hey dear that was so lovely written.😊and sayu's mood swings was so nice😃loved how randhir supported sanyu,that was so nice of him.👏And poor parth called a girl fat🤣 .lovely dear continue soon .thanks alot for the pm🤗

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 11 years ago

#340

🤗May! You promised, and you delivered. I guess it was the right decision for you to put some pressure on you. Unholding the story has turned out amazing. Writer's block?! Girl! The first sentence of Chapter 7 already set the hilarious tone in the update. I love how you went further with that thought and insecurity of hers. I really love how you getting every important asset in the story. The insecurity pregnant woman feel is a big part of the pregnancy but in this story, it's even more. Since Sanyukta doesn't have that social security-thing going on with Randhir. Their relationship is, complicated. and you make it so perfectly clear in the little romance-part, it was confusing and adorable. The little detail that Randhir was kinda out of it after Sanyukta said 'pin', made me smile. Okejj, just like my PMs this thing is getting too long, loving the update.

Edited by BrunoMars - 11 years ago

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