TERE SANG..mayur ff..* UPDATED dt 5/5 PART 22 PG 97

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Hello Friends..

I had an idea in my mind so just thought of writing it down.
Dont know if you all are going to like it. If you all dont like it kindly tell me.
Be truthful with me please.

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LOVE YASHFEEN.
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INDEX

CHAPTER 1-PAGE 1
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CHAPTER 1

I was walking down the lane with my friend that's when I got uncomfortable due to someone's intense gaze. I decided to look up because I thought it was one of the loafers sitting on the road whose job is to look at each and every girl passing by that lane, and it was not the first time that someone was looking at me intensely. I decided to look up so that the loafer could remove his gaze. When I looked up I could see a handsome guy sitting on a bike, he was definitely not one of the loafers I thought him to be, instead he looked smart, sophisticated and not to forget EDUCATED. .He was sitting alone may be he was waiting for someone as his bike was on and he was just sitting on it. My eyes met with his and he immediately moved his eyes and all I could see was innocence on his face. Now I was the one staring at him I dint know what was it but he definitely had some attraction in him and now he was the one who could feel my intense gaze which made him uncomfortable , he was about to look up to me when I realized what I was doing and at that instance I looked down.

Just then Gunjan , who is my childhood friend and cousin called my name NUPUR, come on what are you waiting for?'

I started walking fast in order to avoid the embarrassment. I could see from the corner of my eyes that he had left the spot. I heaved a sigh of relief and gave a slight smile to Gunjan and joined her.

We were returning from college and it was our usual lane and I had never him before and that's what set me thinking about him. But soon the thoughts were marred by Gunjan's normal blabbering. I too joined her and soon we reached home.

"Aa gaye tum dono kab se main tum dono ka wait kar rahi thi." Said Nupur's mom,Geeta.

"Haan Maa agaye wo kya hai na aj Gunjan kuch zada hi baatein kar rahi thi." Nupur said while hugging her mother from backside.

"Jo tu zara bhi nahi sun rahi thi" Gunjan said while hugging Geeta from front.

Since Gunjan had lost her parents at the age of ten she stayed with them. As she was Geeta's sister's daughter. And since Gunjan and Nupur have been brought up together they love each other more than anything and share everything with each other.

"Acha tujhe kaise pata main nahi sun rahi thi." Nupur said while defending herself.

"tum to pata nahi kahan khoyi thi ki raste main h.."

"Acha acha baki ki ladai khaneke baad chalo jao fresh ho kar ao main khana lagati hoon." Said Geeta.

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After the lunch while Gunjan was taking a nap nupur stood by the window, enjoying the outside atmosphere as the breeze was soft and cool and was silently brushing against her skin. She took a deep breath and closed her eyes and sat by the window. As she closed her eyes the same face flashed, the guy whom she had seen by the roadside.

She immediately opened her eyes and shook her head and shrugged away the thought and went on to take a nap.

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It was yet another day and Nupur and Gunjan were already in college. This morning Nupur had almost forgotten about the guy and was engaged in her daily activities. After the entire tiring day Nupur and Gunjan were going back home when they were again in the same lane. Nupur felt something strange on reaching the spot she could again feel someone's gaze and thus raised her head. She again saw the guy and this time she dint stop but just while thinking she moved on.

"is it a co-incidence or is he deliberately standing here?"

She asked herself. Immediately she shook her head and said

"But he doesn't like someone who would do something like this."

And without thinking much she moved on.

The same activity was repeated the next day and this time Nupur felt like literally confronting him. Now she knew it was not a coincidence but was surely deliberate but as she was getting late as she had go for a wedding so she moved on but decided to confront him the next day.

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The next morning she was prepared for the confrontation. Gaining the confidence, she moved on. She soon reached the college and after bidding good bye to Gunjan she moved towards her classroom.

Gunjan was a year younger to Nupur so they had to go to different classes.

When Nupur reached the classroom and had taken a round of the room through her eyes was shocked and knitting her brows she paced forwards..



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey yashfeen..glad too see u backk..missed u n ur work a lott..thnx for cmng back and starting an awesome ff..really good strt m loving it..plzz pm me when u update since m not able to hit like button now..

Neha

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Very intetesting. Plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: neha333

Hey yashfeen..glad too see u backk..missed u n ur work a lott..thnx for cmng back and starting an awesome ff..really good strt m loving it..plzz pm me when u update since m not able to hit like button now..

Neha



thanks a lot dear..evn m glad to b back
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Posted: 11 years ago
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glad u came back with a superb story😉
its quite interesting do continue it👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome Back Yash
i m really very happy to c taht u r back wioth mayur FF
Loved the first Part
kay wo boy mayank tha?
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very beautiful update dear
Please do cont soon
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The story with the title itself seems very interesting
waiting for next part
i hope u'll cont it dear

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