A Song of Fire and Ice upd Part17 *SanDhir, Parth, Kaustuki and etc :) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: 100littledevils

Great start! Please continue soon!


Yes I will!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: purnima209

awsme yar... nxt part be upload na soon


Thanks yaar, I will update soon
Keep reading
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanda

goooddd...u r quik wid ur updates ha? so nice


Haha..it's my first ff! I'm trying to update regularly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanyukta_lolz

Awesome story yaar!! Loved it... update soon..! :) <3



Arey yaar!! Thank you soo much...feels good reading comments! I will update soon! You keep commenting :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3

Sanyukta walks in with an injured hand, no one understands what could have happened in such a short time. Sanyukta explains her injury saying that on her way to the station she was passing the lab where someone has dropped some tools by accident and she went to help and her hand got cut on a sharp edge, she it bandaged and drank water and came to visit her team in the meeting, she said. Also explaining the delay for her arrival as she just went to get water.
But she was in for a bigger shock when she found out about the hand written reports and the random selection of people for the presentation. They all headed back to the hostels to figure out a solution for all the extra work that was heaped upon them. Sanyukta was about to tell Randhir and Parth that she can't write the notes due to her hand when Kaustuki stopped her. She reminded her that Randhir will taunt her very badly if she informs him about the injury. She asked her to think calmly about another solutions. Just then Manasvi suggested that she can write the notes as her writing is kind of similar to Sanyu's and since they share the same room and would work there, no one would know.

Sanyu was worried for Manasvi as there was a lot to write and Sahil and Yoyo's report was very long and detailed. But Manasvi asked to relax and that she would manage fine by herself. The next day as per their discussion Sanyu told the team that she was fine to write the reports and she would write every night so that ep they can continue planning for the presentation during the day. Randhir was shocked by her answer, he had seen the bandage on her hand. He didn't think it was fair for her to write the reports and do the shared work with him. He decided that he should help her.

Randhir goes upto Sanyu and asked her if she is ok with handling all the work by herself. Sanyu was shocked for a moment, Randhir was the last person she expected to show some sensitivity. She thought she was hearing things and asked him again. Randhir realised what he had said and quickly covered up by saying that girls can't multitask and he doesn't want the presentation to be ruined because of her. Sanyu couldn't believe her ears, that MCP idiot she thought. She sharply replied that she was perfectly fine on her own and that she would never ever need his help. Randhir cursed at himself for framing his question in such a way. He took a final glance at her hand and with a heavy heart continued on working.

Meanwhile, Parth realised what the problem was and decided to ease Randhir's mind a little, he assigned half on Sanyu's work to Manasvi so that she could write the reports without extra pressure. Little did he know that Manasvi was the one writing and this was a plan of the girls to stop the boys from doubting them. Parth calls manasvi and asks her to do Sanyu's work. Kaustuki and Sanyu looked on shocked. Poor Manasvi, Sanyu was feeling super guilty as her friend would have to suffer because of her. Randhir saw this exchange, for once in his life he could have hugged that little brat, Parth. Now Sanyukta's wouldn't have all that extra pressure on her. In his little happy dance inside his head, he completely missed the interaction between the girls.

That night in the girls hostel, Sanyu was talking to Manasvi, she was convinced that this plan wasn't going to work and wanted to tell the boys about it. But Manasvi stopped her saying that it was completely fine and she doesn't have to feel guilt and also that Sanyu would've done the same for her or Kaustuki. But to make her dear friend feel a little less guilty, Manasvi asked her to help her with the speech for the presentation, just in case she got picked as she knew that Sanyu loved writing speeches. To this Sanyu happily agreed. The girls set out to finish off their respective tasks.

On Thursday,
The team was nearly done, with everything and Vardhan sir had called the entire team to the classroom. He wanted to conduct mock test. He said that he was going to pick random people and ask them question, he mentioned that this kind of preparation was necessary as he didn't want his students to be shocked or nervous when one of them gets called out tomorrow. The whole class nodded. Just then the girls, knocked at the door. Vardhan sir would've scolded them but looking at their faces and condition he truly felt sorry. Sanyukta looked like she just ran the Olympic race, Kaustuki was barely able to stand and Manasvi , that girl was leaning on the door about to fall asleep. He was proud of them for working so hard and working very long hours by the looks of them without proper sleep.

He asked them to take their seats and began the lesson. He called Sahil first, though he fumbled and mumbled, he gave the right answer. Jiggly was up next, after contemplating for a while he answered Vardhan sir's simple question with a very complex answer. Randhir answered his like he just had a book in front of him and he was reading off it. That's how precise it was. Parth answer couldn't have been any more accurate or simple. Kaustuki answered with a tinge of unsureity even though she was right. Sanyukta's answer just flowed like a river, it was well prepared and perfectly answered. The confidence in her answer didn't match her usually confident voice. She sounded tired and in need of a coffee. Vardhan wasn't even sure if he should ask Manasvi a question. She has her eyes closed and was leaning against her arm on the desk. But he didn't want his team to have it easy. He asked her his question in a slightly louder voice in an effort to wake her up.

He also half expected her to ask him to repeat the question, but what happened next surprised him and the whole class. Manasvi answered his question in such a quirky and studious way that he was shocked. Though she was yawning after every sentence. Vardhan was truly impressed at the efforts of his team. He asked all the boys except Parth to leave and take rest. He called the girls forward and told them that they need to be fresh and active for the next day and advised them to get some sleep. As they were leaving he talked to Parth, he told him about how impressed he was with the team.

He also firmly told him that there was a difference between making your team work efficiently and over working them. He also told him that the work was not distributed evenly. The girls seem to be more tired than the guys. He left Parth in a wondering state. Something struck Parth and rushed out the door. Parth caught Manasvi just as she was going to go to her room. He waved of the other two girls and said he wanted to talk to her. He asked about her behaviour in class today. Seeing her clueless expression, he asked why she was so tired and sleepy, "tumhe Sanyu ki tarah extra work bhi nahi hain, usse toh report bhi likne hain, agar voh theek hain to tumhe kya hua? Kaunsa itna bhari kaam kar rahi ho ki, Vardhan sir ko answer karate tumhe need aa gayi?" If you have a problem with the work load you should talk to me, agar tum minimum kam bhi bina effort rakhe nahi kar shakti toh dream team main kyun ho? With that he left.

Sanyu and Kaustuki were in tears. Randhir who was watching this from afar didn't understand why they were so sad. He didn't find anything wrong in what Parth said. Sometimes the workload is so high in their team that they miss some sleep but they shouldn't be in a position where you can see their tiredness. Vardhan sir saw the whole exchange between his team, he knew that the boys were in for a shock.

Manasvi went inside with a heavy heart and teary eyes. The girls hugged her very tightly and Sanyu didn't stop saying sorry. Manasvi told her that it's completely fine. The boys were giving the girls a cold shoulder, they didn't want a repeat of last time's presentation. Sanyu felt a little hurt to see Randhir's behaviour, he was never friendly to her but he was a little bit nicer to her these day. To see him back to normal hurt her a lot. But she was more surprised to see Parth being so rude to Manasvi. That girl was barely holding back her tears. Sanyu was about to tell them the truth but Kaustuki held her hand and Manasvi shook her head saying no!

Meanwhile, in his room. Vardhan sir was thinking about last night's incident...(to be continued)


That's it once again guys...
Hope you liked it

I love reading your comments, do leave your response!!
Until next time xx

Edited by missreddy7 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsme part yar changng behaviour of randhir awsme...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: purnima209

awsme part yar changng behaviour of randhir awsme...


Thank you purnima! Keep reading :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4
Vardhan sir saw this situation arising. He could understand where the boys were coming from, he would've thought the same if he hadn't seen what happened last night. With that thought his thoughts drifted to the previous night, Vardhan sir was finishing of reading the last of the fantastic reports done by his students and was heading back to his room. On his way he saw light on in the lab, he was puzzled his initial reaction was that they forgot to switch off the light but as he got closer he saw someone writing something. He stepped inside the room and saw Manasvi writing the reports very diligently. He cleared his throat to inform her of his presence, she quickly snapped her head up and saw him. He enquired what she was doing at the lab so late and why she was doing Sanyukta's work.
She explained the whole plan of the girls to work together as a team and not let the boys know that Sanyukta wasn't not the one writing the notes due to the injury. When he asked the purpose of this, she replied saying that she believes when working in a team one should not highlight a team members weakness or liability as this will lower the morale of the entire team. They should instead work out an alternate solutions and keep the work going so one gets disturbed and their working relationship is smooth. She also said that by revealing to everyone that Sanyukta could write she would only increase the fights between Randhir and Sanyu which is not good for them or the team. When Vardhan sir asked her if she wasn't bothered about the fact that she wouldn't get any credit for this. Her reply astonished him, she said that she had total belief that any member of the team would've done the same for an other. With those words he left her.

That night:
Parth knocked on the girls door wanting to ask for the handwritten reports and the diagrams so he can individually place them in folders for tomorrow's presentation. Sanyu brought the papers and asked him to be careful with them. He was about to leave when he remembered something. He asked Sanyu to give him a list of their names and Vardhan sir's hand written so he can use it as a cover sheet. Manasvi yells out from the back that she will write them and quickly writes the names and gives it to Parth. He takes the papers and leaves for his room. He sees Randhir waiting patiently to put the papers into the files. When he looks at the papers he is shocked to see that it wasn't Sanyukta's writing. Sanyukta's writing was very curvy and feminine, but this was very elegant cursive. He placed that thought aside and quickly separated them.

The next day:
Every one was apprehensive about the presentation. Manasvi seemed a little out of spirits and so did Sanyu. They made their way to the conference hall and saw the boys waiting for them to go inside together. They went inside and were greeted by the panel of sponsors,a grand total of 8 people. Two others were to arrive soon. They handed them each of the files. They shared morning greeting with the panel and shook hands and were waiting with bated breaths for the name of the presentator to be announced. Mr Mittal comes to the front and says that the panel has decided to be a little lenient and let two people present instead of one. And the names are Sanyukta Agarwal and Manasvi Ramachandran. They looked at each other in shock and surprise, they were expecting them to call out one of the guys names.

The went forward to grab their files, Manasvi was checking the whiteboard marker to see if it was working and Renuka Sanyal who was looking at their report commented on her writing. You have very beautiful writing Miss Ramachandran, I am sure it must've been hard to write all these reports by yourself! Sanyukta quickly replied yes mam it was! But she is very competent and contributing that she decided to take upon the task of writng them, it was originally my task but I had an injured hand, she replied poliety to Ms Sanyal and indirectly to the boys who were taunting them for the past two days and being extremely rude.

There were no words to be said from the boys, they were feeling extremely guilty. They were terribly rude to all of them and turns out that the girls did the most hard work. Randhir whispered to Parth that he suspected it wasn't Sanyukta's writng and stated the difference between the two. Though Parth was at a loss of words he could stop himself from saying. " oh toh tumhe Sanyu ki handwriting ki type bhi pata hain? Bahut attention pay karte ho!" Randhir shrugged at him and was secretly proud of himself that he could state the difference.

The other two members arrived and one of them sat in a corner where no one could see them. The girls started the presentation and were going beautifully. Randhir couldn't help but admire the determination and confidence the Sanyukta had in her presentation. She was smart, precise and straight to the point. Not leaving out a single part of their research and he loved the fact that she said when myself and Randhir did this or myself and Randhir did that and showed the whole group. He loved the way the name rolled out on her tongue.

He didn't even realise he had this stupid Romeo type smile on his face until he looked around to open mouthed boys that were just in awe of how competent the girls were. He was happy until he spotted Parth having the exact puppy wala smile on his face. His blood boiled at the thought that someone else was struck by Sanyukta's charm. He was about to nudge him to wipe that idiotic smile on his face, when he realised that Sanyukta has stopped talking and was drawing something on the board. Then like a heavy watt bulb it hit him that, Parth wasn't smiling at Sanyukta, Parth was smiling at Manasvi, who was very animatedly telling the panel about their research and their various findings and how they think it will affect their project. She was so honest and bright that the judges were enjoying her presentation and apparently so was Parth, by that Romeo wala smile on his face.

Shaking his head, he resumed to looking at Sanyukta drawing on the board. Watching this whole incident were three people. Renuka Sanyal who was happy to see her son smitten by Miss Agarwal, that girl was very intelligent and very hard to dislike. Vardhan sir who was trying very hard to stop his laugher looking at two of his best boy students completely bowled over by two of his best girl students. Neither was he surprised nor shocked and the third was that weird man in the corner who was watching the girls presenting with an evil smirk on his face.

That's it for now...
Until next time..!!

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Edited by missreddy7 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice ff...liked it so far...continue soon!
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Hey the story is just awesum,.. Plz do pm me wen u update.. Awesum story,,.

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