Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 25) - Page 52

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Kya se kya ho gaya...
it was such a beautiful day till dinner than evything changed...arnav's past his trust issue z not letting him live his life happily he z still around it...its creating problem in his life making him a half monstor i think...hats off to khushi for her patience n understanding n being with Asr she z a gem...go for it girl...

hey anon... amazing dost... just read the update again..

Disaster has struck who could have imagine that this beautiful day turn out to be disastrous, though no one is/ was at fault but khushi was actually on a receiving end right now. This update reminds me of a Pakistani song AITEBAR by junaid jamshed and it cover arnav and khushi sentiments and emotions to the T.

I am surprised khushi didn't follow her husband even though she knows what exactly arnav thinks about rishbh... manners and etiquette can be damned if it was the initial phase of their love story I can clearly over look but now she is fully aware of the situation knows about risbh and arnavs animosity. May be I am not getting the point here or missing something I find it really odd and the only thing I come up with or is that she don't want to create a scene in public but still she can phone him or send a messenger or come up with any other thing. Or maybe she want discuss this personally with him.

And here I am not fully satisfied with arnav either, why can't he just stop and face rishbh, he is a business man for crying out loud and he can't let his opponent rule over him. For once I really want arnav to stand on his ground instead of running away and give rishbh back. While reading this update I realize why normal and blissful childhood is so much important because if the child doesn't have normal up bringing he not just destroy his/her future it may destroy or harm others life as well because in the end his/her spouse going to pay the price of all those insecurities.

CRASH again so his anxiety and hopelessness over powering him again so is it something to do with his relation with khushi off course his inability of hiding from her is taking a toll on his temper and he is losing big time he knows she can't tolerate this brutal side of him and his helpless past. Her insisting nature is not helping him at all and he is completely clueless that what supposed to be his next move or how to prevent himself from heartbreak. Below stanza covers arnav emotions fully:

Dhoop mein khara jal raha hoon mein
Saaya do mujhey
Yeh mera junoon
Yeh meri jalan
Hai meri saza

Meri yeh thakun
Khe rahee hai kya
Suno to sahee, suno to sahee

Here arnav did it again, the biggest slap for any woman when her husband accused her of infidelity and adultery and pointing fingers on her character. Though he didn't said to her bur still she knows. Thank GOD she comes to know about the extent that how damaged arnav is or how insecure he is.

Let's see this verbal declaration works or not the way this is getting complicated I highly doubt that this going to work but right now I am feeling really bad for both thoda zyada khushi ke liye because her life and character are at stake and arnav is not at all an easy going person who gets satisfied on verbal assurance. You have to be willing participant in the journey and right now he is not the willing participant and turning away from the only hope he have at the moment. Below stanza covers khushi emotions and thought process fully:

Aitebar bhee aa hee jayey ga
Milo to sahee
Raasta koyi mil hee jayey ga
Chalo to sahee, chalo to sahee

Aitebar bhee aa hee jayey ga, aa hee jayey ga

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okay so her confession of love can go three ways
one when she says ilu he would say it back
this is highly unlikely as we know arnav doent know of his love for her yet
two when she says it he will reject it outright
this can happen but just maybe it wont
after all he wouldnt do that to her
third and final option according to me when she confesses he would be confused as to what he feels for her
he will think that she is saying it due to rishu situation
or he will think if he loves her or not
well what ever his reaction hope he will think about her confession
and not just dismiss it

Yeh kya ho gaya... Itni special day ki end turned out like this...oh no... But at least Khushi finally realized his insecurity... And loved her determination... And she will win in the end, hum jaante hain... Just waiting for that day to come... Brilliantly written update...

lovely update😛 very eagerly waiting for khushi's confession and arnav's reaction😃 thanks for the pm😊