$@nDhiR SS: You're still the one..!! Last second chapter UPDATED...!!!

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Srishti Sharma

@sanyukta_lolz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Gr8 yaar...!! It was superr se bhi uperr... how do u manage to write so amazingly yaar!! Seriously loved it... update next part asap... :) <3

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Irij55

@Irij55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Amazing waiting for next part

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Shalini! This is an incredible start! Waiting for the rest of the story! :D

I loved the lines in her diary in the prologue! The ones about love in loneliness and silence! :')

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wow...sandhir and kriyansh...awesome

Kriyansh is cupid in sandhir story...wow

But I m angry on u...u have updated but not sending pm...if u don't like to sed pm ...ok with it but atleast update title so that we can come to know about update

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shalini_shakti

@shalini_shakti

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Wow...sandhir and kriyansh...awesome

Kriyansh is cupid in sandhir story...wow

But I m angry on u...u have updated but not sending pm...if u don't like to sed pm ...ok with it but atleast update title so that we can come to know about update

I'm so sorry dear...!!!
I was in a hurry thtz why didn't send pm..!!
From next update I'll Pakka send u..!!
Promise..!!:D

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Anuradha

@federized2210

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Okay shalini, here goes!!
Firstly my sincere apologies at commenting so late!
I love the name natasha u knw!!!!
Ur prologue was beautiful...the feelings portrayed to perfection!
The plot is very intriguing indeed! I feel it will be something fresh...not the normal ghisa-pita SanDhir FF!!!
Chapter 1 was again beautifully penned! Grammar, vocab ...perfect!!!
Well done sis! M so proud of u!
Waiting for the next update and this time I won't delay my feedback!
Lots of luv, Anuradha.

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shalini_shakti

@shalini_shakti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: federized2210
Okay shalini, here goes!!
Firstly my sincere apologies at commenting so late!
I love the name natasha u knw!!!!
Ur prologue was beautiful...the feelings portrayed to perfection!
The plot is very intriguing indeed! I feel it will be something fresh...not the normal ghisa-pita SanDhir FF!!!
Chapter 1 was again beautifully penned! Grammar, vocab ...perfect!!!
Well done sis! M so proud of u!
Waiting for the next update and this time I won't delay my feedback!
Lots of luv, Anuradha.

Aww...
Thnq u Di.. Thnq u thnq u so much..!!!
Seriously ur comment means a lot to me..!!!
Will update next part on 28th...
Once again thnq u...:):)
Luv u Di..!!:D