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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanyukta_lolz

<font color="#ff9999" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="6">Awesome! Such an emotional and beautiful prologue..!! Scenty kar diya yaar...!😭 It's really interesting... Post next part asap...!</font>



Thnq u..!!!
Mein bhi kudh scenty hogayi..!!!
Will surely update soon..!!!:):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loving your concept Shalini.
Where do u get these anyways?
I loved sanyukta's pov. heart wrencing but so real too.
Seven years long time! *sighs*
All bcoz of ego? oof!!!
Starting afresh by forgetting someone who mattered the most but then that same someone when u were moving on comes in frnt of u? tough decision what to do. move on or stay with him.
Amazingly written and well potrayed. my chest really aches reading it.
Ah life it is.
Continue soon dear.
Will be waiting fr yr pm.
Love
Shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start!!! Nd awesome prologue !!!😊
Plz continue soon!!! Waiting 4 update!!!!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guyzz..!! hwz u all..?? firstly thnq u so much for those wonderful coments.. im seriously overwhelmed... here im back here to update chapter 1...
here u go..
happy reading..;)




Chapter 1:



It was yet another bitter cold morning in the city Chicago... The cold breeze lingered in the air. And that cold was enough to chill my bones. A heavy blanket of frost ice had settled on the roads. I grabbed my blanket and wrapped around Me wanting to get some warmth. I see children moving to school.. And everyone running late for their office through my window..Finally I have decided to start afresh. New life, new living and new start. Just then I saw my best buddy Natasha enter my room with a cup of coffee.

"Gud mrng sanny..." she greeted me with a big smile. "good morning nori..." replied sanyu ( sanyu calls Natasha nori and Natasha calls her sanny..) "hey why do u have ur eyes swollen and carrying a bag under them" asked natasha concerned. "it's nothing.. I didn't have proper sleep last ni8.. Thatzz it..!!:)" " oh..! Okay get ready soon... John( their cook) is preparing breakfast." "yup will be there.." replied sanyu and got up to fresh up..

At breakfast table:

" hmm.. Someone looks so gorgeous..!!" said nori. " hmm.. Thnqz.. U look gorgeous too my dear nori. Actually its just tht i have an important meeting today.. And Yaa I'm goona start afresh.." " hmm. It's Gud... finally ur back back sanny.." Suddenly there was knock on the door. Natasha got up quickly to open the door. And found her love parth with a big smile.. "A very good morning sweetheart... " said parth pecking her lips. "ahem ahem...!!!!" sanyu made a noise breaking their sweet little romance. " good morning sanny.. U look gorgeous today.." greeted parth. " good morning parth... U look handsome too..." with this parth smiled. " hmm.. Accha guys I'm done.. I gotta rush.. Have an important meeting see u in evening..!! And Yaa parth have ur breakfast dear..!!" said sanyu grabbing her sweter...her laptop bag along with the car keys. " bye sanny drive good.." said parth.


Amazon Group of Automobile...




As she reached her company.. She parked her car and started to the 15th floor of her office building. It was quite a huge one. It consisted of 25 floors and she owning a high position as a cheif executive manger in he company. She reached her cabin and saw her P.A Julie waiting for her. " good morning ma'am.." greeted ms. Julie. " good morning.." sanyuktha replied with a smile and started her work. Just then Julie spoke. " ma'am u have a meeting today at 11:00 am with Mr. Andrew Parker" ( her boss) " okay fine.." and she got up to leave to the conference hall which was on the 13th floor of her office building along with her laptop bag. As I entered I saw my colleague kriya Ghai along with my boss and his client. " good morning sir..!!" said sanyuktha. " oh..!! Here u are..!! God morning.. And Mr. George meet my companies executive manager Ms. Sanyuktha Agarwal and Ms. Kriya Ghai..." said Mr. Parker. " good morning.. I'm pleased to meet u.." said sanyuktha and kriya. " hmm... So I have called u both to discuss about something important. Actually Mr. George wants to collabarate with our company.. And in that process he just want two of them to join his company for a span of 6months.. So u both take it as a contract..So I would like you both to assist him in his company which is in San Francisco. As u both are the most hard working and sincere workers." spoke Mr.Andrew in a go. " sure sir.. We would be pleased to work with you" said sanyuktha and kriya in unison. Both kriya and sanyuktha signed the contract papers.. " so sir when should we be leaving..??" asked kriya. " probably tonight miss.Ghai. " okay sir..!!!" said sanyuktha and kriya and left the conference hall. "hey I'm so excited to work for Lumax automobiles..!!!" said kriya. " Yaa... Same here.." replied sanyuktha hugging kriya. P.S: sanyuktha and kriya work in same office and are best friends.. They share everything.. And kriya knows about sanyuktha past..!!! " here we come Lumax automobiles.." said kriya and sanyuktha in unison. " okay.. Kriya we need go home pack our luggages.. Uff..!! It gonna be huge stuff to carry as we are going for 6 months. And Yaa I'll be at 7:00 pm in house.. We both shall leave together.They bed bye to each other and left to there respective homes.



Lumax automobiles:


There was a guy of nearly mid 20's sitting his in cabin holding his wallet in his hands admiring a photo inside it..

"They say when you are missing someone badly and they even dont give a damn to it... But I don't think you miss me at all as much as I'm missing you right now..." Sanyu Whr are you..?? It's been seven long years.. I don't have single clue that Whr u r in all these years.Even I don't find parth. I think u both must be happily living together. After all u always loved him more than me. But I will always love u baby... And I still love u... I never moved on after I left u... And don't find that feeling.. Tht care with any other girl. And I realised it was my mistake to doubt you.. I shouldn't have done that...!!!

My chain of thoughts broke when my best buddy reyaansh who called my name..

" hey randhir.. Watz wrong with u buddy.. You seem so lost always... Don't tell it's sanyukta again.. Uff..!! Im seeing you since seven years u r just so calm and num person.. Wats with u.. You were never like this before seven years..." said reyaansh. " that randhir is dead...!!! You will get to see only this randhir now... What's with buddy..??" said randhir irritated with the same repeated question since seven years. Reyaansh was his best buddy right from his childhood...after tht incident he and reyaansh moved to San francisco... And now they are successfully working in the top most company in high positions... " hmm.. Nothing I just came to tell u that Mr. George ( their boss) informed him that they are two women who are to join our company for a collaboration... And u know wht my girlfriend kriya is among dos two.. I'm so happy that I'm meeting her after two long years..." said reyaansh. " oh..!! Nice I'm happy for u bro.. Bdw when r they joining us..??" asked randhir. " may be from tomorrow. And boss gave u and me this responsibility to assure they both feel comfortable here." " hmm kk... Done..!! " said randhir and continued his work putting back his wallet back in his pocket caressing the photo in it. In the evening sanyuktha's house:



She tried to pack all stuff in three suitcases... Uff..!! So many ri8. And was to give final check to all of them. She was even preparing herself to tell this news to parth and nori as it won't be so easy for them to stay away from her for 6 long months. Around 6:00 pm in the evening both parth and nori entered the house tired. They were surprised to see sanyu so early back from her work.


" hey you're so early home.. And whtz all this stuff..!!!" asked nori. " hmm.. First u both sit n relax I'll explain everything..!! Saying this she went to kitchen bought two glasses of water. they drank peacefully and was waiting for her explanation " hmm.. Guyzz actually it's just that I have leave to San Francisco for 6 months... My company is sending me and kriya to collaborate with Lumax automobile.. And I accepted it.. It's just a contract of six months. I'll be back soon.." said sanyu hoping them to react normally. Just then nori spoke. " wht..?? 6 months.. It's very long... Sanny 6months is so long Yaa.. Hw will I stay alone without u...??" said sad nori. " you r nt alone nori.. Parth will stay with u till and come back.. And I promise will speak daily have video chats if possible and pls try to understand dear.. This deal is Beth important for me... I have to do this at any cost." said sanyu hugging her. " i understand sanny.. But how can I stay all alone in a new city..?? And u don't evn have any friends from San Francisco...!!" said parth. " no... Kriya is with me.. And her boyfriend reyaansh works in the same company so.. Guyzz no worry..!!! " explained sanyu hoping that they would agree. " hmm kk... But I'll miss u sanny... I'll miss u so much.." saying this nori started crying.. " I'll miss u too... Nori.. I'll be back soon baby.. Until then u enjoy with parth.. Now wont be there to disturb u both..." said sanyu giggling... " ahem ahem.. Done both of u.. Even I'm present here..." complained parth... " awww... My best buddy..!! " saying this they three formed a group hug... " Accha guyzz.. Listen kriya will be in an hour I have to get ready..!!" said sanyu. " kkies... And Yaa we will come to send off.." said parth. " no need... U both take rest.. I'll go...kriya is there with me na..!!" " but..." nori was cut by sanyu.. " no buts n ifs.. It's decided tht it..!!" " okay" said parth and nori in unison making a puppy dog face.. Later she bed bye to parth and nori.. And left to airport...

At airport: "hmm.. It really seems a good start... I'm back yes sanyuktha Agarwal is back... Here I come San Francisco.." said sanyu in her mind...




Precap:

first encounter of sandhir after seven long years..!! And much more...

Till then stay tunned..!!!:):)

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Phew done with the first chappy... Now pls give ur valuable comments.. And do like it... Love Shalini❤️

Edited by shalini_shakti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
WOW YAAR 😊😊
EVERYTIME YOU COME WITH AN FF THEY RE OUTSTANDING👏
WAITING FOR YOUR UPDATE
UPDATE REAL SOOONISH

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shalini di!!
You write so amazingly yaar.
mai toh aap par fida hogayi..i mean aapke stories par!
What an intriguing plot!!
And thank you for long chapter xD
Update naa!
Ek aur chapter likho!!
Jaldi!
kriyaansh bhi and sandhir bhi! vaah Vaah!
Update ASAP
Love,
Tanya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awme yar... really so interesting to read ur story pls continue soon with another part waiting for it eagerly...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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stay tuned? m already so tuned i cant get out of this trance! please update quick..maybe in another 2 minutes :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: TashaForever

Shalini di!!

You write so amazingly yaar.

mai toh aap par fida hogayi..i mean aapke stories par!

What an intriguing plot!!

And thank you for long chapter xD

Update naa!

Ek aur chapter likho!!

Jaldi!

kriyaansh bhi and sandhir bhi! vaah Vaah!

Update ASAP


Love,

Tanya




Aww..
Itna bada comment..!!
This comment made my day sweetie..
I'm glad u liked it..
I'll update next part on 28th march..!!
Haa kriyaansh n sandhir together..!!
Luv u tanzz..!!:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanda

stay tuned? m already so tuned i cant get out of this trance! please update quick..maybe in another 2 minutes :P



Thnq so much..!!
Will update on 28th Pakka..!!

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