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Posted: 11 years ago
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AUTHOR'S NOTE: hey guys..!! Firstly sorry for the delay... I was actually suppossed to update yesterday but unfortunately I fell off from stairs and hurt my back badly... Hmm.. And all thnqz to my phone and net operator... I'm Able update... This update is dedicated to my shona..[anamika1309] harika.. Sonia di... Rekha di... Karthika.. Shreya... Anu di... And all other readers too...Here u go..!! Happy reading..!!!



Chapter 4:

They kissed finally after seven long years... The feeling itself was magical for Randhir. It was like heaven... He could still feel her lips.. Her rosy lips and the smell of the strawberry gloss... But whereas sanyuktha she was hurt.. She didn't Want Him back again in her life.. She had enough all these years... She just wanted to wash away all her memories related to Randhir and move on but all in vain.


FLASHBACK:


It was their third year. Randhir and sanyuktha were in a relationship. As Randhir confessed his feelings for her. But everything was not at all fine Randhir still hated parth. He was always Sanyuktha's best friend. Sanyuktha was always worried for him because of his family issues.Randhir didn't like it. He was infact jealous when she spent more time with her friend than her boyfriend.
It was Sunday and all were busying resting... Some had day outs with their friends. Here Randhir was planning a date. He wanted to spend some quality time with his girlfriend. He called sanyuktha to a store room... It was their private place where they used to spend time together in free hours.
" hey Randhir why did you call me here..?? Is everything okay..??" asked sanyuktha as she entered the store room.

As soon as she entered Randhir hugged her from back.
"hmm.. Everything is not okay sanyuktha... I'm missing my girlfriend... She is very busy that she forgot that she has a boyfriend and he is waiting to spend time with her..."Randhir replied putting his chin on her shoulder and kissing it.

" awww... Is it..?? I'm so sorry sweetie... Actually PAR...T" she was about to say something when he interuppted.

" Accha leave it... I have a surprise for you..!!!" said Randhir. He didn't want to speak about parth.

" Ohh.. Wow..!! What's it...??"

He immediately took out a box wrapped in a purple colour wrapper. She immediately snatched it and opened to see what was in it.. She found a beautiful pink color knee length frock... Which was simply yet elegant...
" wow..!! This so pretty... Thank you so much Randhir... Love you..!!" said sanyuktha.
" hey sanyu... I want you to wear this tonight... We are going out for a date... " saying this bent on his knees... Took her left hand and kissed it saying...

" Would you like to be my date tonight...?? My love...!!" asked Randhir.

" aww... Yes..!! " answered sanyu. With this he pecked her cheeks and left to make preparations for their special evening. In the evening:

Sanyuktha got ready wearing the dress which Randhir gifted her. As kaustuki helped her with make up.. She straightened her hair and applied a straw berry gloss. She looked like a barbie doll. She stood in front of the mirror giving a final look and left. Randhir was waiting for her near the college gate...drssed in black jeans with a light pink formal shirt and a black blazer over it. As she entered he was just mesmerized by her beauty... She looked like an angel from heaven.
" you look beautiful... love..!!!" said Randhir still admiring her.
" thank you..." replied sanyuktha slightly blushing.

Soon they started to their destination in randhir's car. Sanyu was going restless as she didnt know where Randhir is gonna take her.

" Randhir... Where are we going..?? Tell me please.. I can't wait to know.." asked sanyuktha.

" patience... My love.. Ahaaa I can't tell you that... It's a surprise..."replied Randhir.

Soon they reached their destination. Randhir asked sanyuktha to close her eyes. She followed him with her eyes closed. It was a beach... She guessed it as the very moment she stepped onto the sand. They walked few minutes... Only when Randhir asked her to open her eyes... As soon as she opened her eyes she was awestruck with the view in front of her... It was just so amazing... The moonlight glittering the grains of sand.. the ocean waves clashing against the cliff along with the sounds of the waves making beautiful tunes...The seagulls flying in circles around in the air.. As I walked the tiny little shells that have been washed into to the shore by Rippling of water gave a tickling sensation to my feet... The feeling was magical... As I looked at him knowing that he was already admiring me... We both walked hand in hand. Randhir held her close by her waist..

" howz ur surprise... Dear..??" asked Randhir.

" it's... It's just amazing Randhir...!!! I loved this..." replied sanyu.

"wait..!! You have more surprises to go...!!!" said Randhir.

They had their dinner arranged by Randhir. The feeling of having dinner near the sea shore enjoying the fragrance of wet sand and light breeze... With all her favourite dishes was amazing..!!!

Soon they finished with their dinner and walked hand in hand... Along the beach..
" Randhir...!!!" called sanyuktha.

"hmm..."
" you know what this was the best day of my life... I love you so much baby..." she said she tears formed in her eyes due to happiness.

" hey sanyu... Why are you crying...?? Hey I promise I will never leave you alone.. I will love you till my last breath... I love very very much sanyu..!!!" said Randhir hugging her.

" I love you too... Baby...!!!" said sanyu breaking the hug. Randhir inched forward and leaned to kiss her. Soon their lips met and they kissed passionately... It was a love making kiss and officially their first kiss on their first date.

FLASHBACK ENDS



PRESENT:




But Destiny wrote a different phase in her life. She fell on her bed and cried literally.. Remembering those words Randhir said seven years ago on their first date... She threw a glass vase nearby... She was angry... What all he said was false... He left her all alone... He didnt love her at all... If he did, he would never leave her and distrust her. She cried and cried...She dont know upto wht her destiny is leading. But she is a strong girl. Enough to face her problems... She is not a coward. Both had sleepless night as none of them slept and were thinking about each other.

The next morning:

Sanyuktha reached the office on time...As she entered her cabin she found him waiting for her. He looked quite nervous... He was about to say something when sanyuktha interrupted.

" now pls dont Apologise..!! I know for wht r u Here..?? So pls get out of my cabin now..!!!" she shouted at him.

" sanyu pls.. It just that I want to say sorry for last night's incident.." Randhir spoke.
Only then sanyuktha phone rang.. She rather ignored him and picked her call it was parth.

" hello parth..!!! How r u..?? Sorry dear. Couldn't call u...?? I was busy with some projects..." she said excited.

At the very moment when Randhir heard parth's name.. He fumed in anger. He got remembered of their past... He was always behind sanyu.. And the one who's responsible for their break up according to Randhir. He immediately stormed out of her cabin in anger.

" hmmm.. Got time to receive my call.. And u don't know how much tensed we were... It's a new place for u.. And last time when I spoke to you was when u landed in San Francisco... Wht sanyu..??" said parth.

" Arey baba...!! I'm sorry I was held up with these projects.." replied sanyu.

She was speaking to parth and Natasha since an hour... As they both were missing her presence so badly. Parth and Natasha were so close to her that they can't stay away from her. But she didn't tell them about randhir. Only when sanyuktha heard Robert knocking the door.

" Accha guys gotta go...!! Call you at night"said sanyuktha and disconnected the call.

Randhir entered his office in anger threw a flower vase which was ept on the table. Don't know why He still hated parth... He was the only reason for their break up. He banged his hand hard on the wall...only when blood oozed out.

" hey Randhir watch out buddy...!! What's wrong with you..?? Stop stop hurting yourself..." said reyaansh and pushed him from hurting himself.

" she is still in touch with parth..!! I knew that bloody parth... Always was behind her... She loves him... She didn't love me..!!!" said Randhir and fell on his knees and cried.

Precap:
Sandhir in Paris... _____________________________________________________________________________ Phew..!! Finally done with chapter 4.. Thnqz u guys for ur constant support... Ur comments always encourage me to write more n more... So pls do like n comments... And for the silent readers.. Thnqz to u guys also...
Edited by shalini_shakti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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shaluuu...for me dis updatezzz a blast...seriously firstly i luv u for dedicating dis wonderful update to me n also my luvd ones esp harika n anu diii🤗...n secondly i consider myself very honoured...coz u dedicated such a sweet update to us...luv u loads ❤️(i know dese words r supposed to be at d end of d cmnt ...tk koi baat nahi...no matter wherever i put these words u know i always love u right!!!!)
n cmng to update u hav nooo idea how much i wanted to know wat happened in FITE😲...n i did njoy reading dat pleasant scene...i could imagine d beach,d dinner,sanyu n ofc Randhir...awww must tell u i luv ur Randhir's dressing...very cool n hot!!!! at d same time👍🏼
now time for showing my anger😡...shaluuu i wonder if u like me sitting on pins n needles
again...a half flash back (note : fine i agree dat flash back is worth d wait now stop cursing me)
but half flash back..how could u jus leave it there not revealing wt happened n sanyukta...😡
shalu i think i m gonna stay in juvie in future for killing her...y is she doing dis to Randhir...i don't approve dis...no matter wt happened in FITE,coz i personally feel wts important is Randhir realized his mistake (god knows wt dat mistake is..all thanks to u 😕) n is apologizing to her n most imp he never forgot her...he lived for her even after d break up...is sanyukta dat blind to see dat Randhir's truly sorry for wat he did😭...fine i became a little emotional but note dat i meant wat i said...sooo shalu quickly do something to make everything normal between them...
n precap...awww shalu i always liked paris frm my childhood but now i m falling in luv whenever i think of d city cozzz of ur ff...

Edited by Anamika1309 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
awesome update.sandhir date was absolutely perfect and ading the precap o am impatient fo the next update please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
SanDhir??????? PARIS?????????? shit!!!!! update!!!!!!!🤪
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tes res res

Unres--

Awesome update 👍🏼

The past was soo Shweet 😳
Bt randhir was jealous at dat tym too 🥱 *hey bhagwan*

The update strtd with an end of a kiss n the flashback ended with a kiss 😃
Flashback wala kiss was so sweet ^_^
N radhir's suprise!!! 😲
Moonlight,seashore,a walk *freaking awesome*

moonlight glittering the grains of sand.. the ocean waves clashing against the cliff along with the sounds of the waves making beautiful tunes...The seagulls flying in circles around in the air.. As I walked the tiny little shells that have been washed into to the shore by Rippling of water gave a tickling sensation to my feet dis was beautifully described! 👏


He left her all alone... He didnt love her at all... If he did, he would never leave her and distrust her. xactly !!! Dis is wat came to my mind aftr reading randhir's wrds at the end of flashback >_<

Sanyu cryin n hurt 😭
N randhir on other hand,again misunderstood
Seedha keh diya she never loved me *wow* (-_-)'

Btw its was gud 😃
Natasha parth n sanyu's bondin!!
Missin so much dat talkin fr hours! *dats great,true frnds* 😊

Randhir hurtd himself >_<

U described it efficiently !! 👍🏼
It was damn easy to imagine 😃

Sandhir in paris!!!!
Ye precap toh dekha hi nai *andhi mein*
Wowie! Paris the city of love 😳
N sandhir waha pe
Dis wud b intrstin vry intrstin 😎
Ab toh yr plz update soon


i shud say, bang on awesome stry 👏

Waitin fr stry to move on
Update asap ⭐️
Edited by Awesome-blossom - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
RES...
UNRES...
sorry for the late...
well thank you so much for dedicating yar...loved the whole update...
u described perfectly...
u nailed it girl!!! keep it up...
the flashback was damn amazing..walk surprise...everything is awesome-blossom😆
half flash back...😡u know how to keep readers hooked to ur story...
Two kisses😳 OMG blushing yar...
sanyu crying and hurt and randhir hurting himself😭
Jealosu...ahh loved it...
sanyu-parth-natasha bond was quite amazing yar...
overall mind blowing...and marvelous...
love,harika..get well soon...
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Shalini...
take care n get well soon dear!!!
coming to update it was fabulous👏
Randhir n sanyukta's feelings after the kiss , the flashback !!!! Maaza agaya!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
awsom updt
loved the flashback
thier first date and first kiss
awsom
randhir still think sanyu loves parth
waiting fr nxt
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update👏
Interesting precap😊
Loved sandhir's first date😛
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsme yar i loved this part

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