$@nDhiR SS: You're still the one..!! Last second chapter UPDATED...!!! - Page 12

Originally posted by: Awesome-blossom

Tes res res

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Awesome update 👍🏼

The past was soo Shweet 😳
Bt randhir was jealous at dat tym too 🥱 *hey bhagwan*

The update strtd with an end of a kiss n the flashback ended with a kiss 😃
Flashback wala kiss was so sweet ^_^
N radhir's suprise!!! 😲
Moonlight,seashore,a walk *freaking awesome*

moonlight glittering the grains of sand.. the ocean waves clashing against the cliff along with the sounds of the waves making beautiful tunes...The seagulls flying in circles around in the air.. As I walked the tiny little shells that have been washed into to the shore by Rippling of water gave a tickling sensation to my feet dis was beautifully described! 👏


He left her all alone... He didnt love her at all... If he did, he would never leave her and distrust her. xactly !!! Dis is wat came to my mind aftr reading randhir's wrds at the end of flashback >_<

Sanyu cryin n hurt 😭
N randhir on other hand,again misunderstood
Seedha keh diya she never loved me *wow* (-_-)'

Btw its was gud 😃
Natasha parth n sanyu's bondin!!
Missin so much dat talkin fr hours! *dats great,true frnds* 😊

Randhir hurtd himself >_<

U described it efficiently !! 👍🏼
It was damn easy to imagine 😃

Sandhir in paris!!!!
Ye precap toh dekha hi nai *andhi mein*
Wowie! Paris the city of love 😳
N sandhir waha pe
Dis wud b intrstin vry intrstin 😎
Ab toh yr plz update soon


i shud say, bang on awesome stry 👏

Waitin fr stry to move on
Update asap ⭐️

Thnq u so much harshu...!!
ITna bada comment..
I'm glad that u liked it..
Will update soonish...
Love you...:D

Originally posted by: --ScarletRed--

<font color="#666666"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Hi Shalini dear, I never knew you were such an amazing writer...
Hmm... how could I've missed such a fantastic SS??

Firstly, the banner for this OS is just mesmerizing and so very beautiful.
I've read all the previous updates in one go and trust me they are the best.
This update was superb with so many emotions flowing altogether at a wonderful pace.
It started with a kiss and the flashback ended with a kiss... So many sweet kisses in one update hmm... good going.
The sweet SanDhir moments were so radiantly described that it is bound to mesmerize anyone.
I loved the way you have penned down the scenic beauty of the beach, it was so very much alluring.
Randhir... he really needs a piece of my mind. Why can't he trust Sanyukta for a moment?
He's again back on jealousy track.
Aww.. poor Sanyukta. She's suffering so much coz of Randhir. Well, she should have clarified all her misunderstandings with Randhir.
The flow of the story is so very constant and flawless..
I enjoyed reading it to my heart's content.

Do update the next part soon...
Thanks for the PM.

--With love
Kajal</font></font>

Thnq u so much kajal..!!!
I'm glad u liked it...
Will update soonish...

Awesome Update!

Originally posted by: federized2210

<font color="#3300ff">They kissed finally after seven long years... The feeling itself was magical for Randhir. It was like heaven... He could still feel her lips.. Her rosy lips and the smell of the strawberry gloss... But whereas sanyuktha she was hurt.. She didn't Want Him back again in her life.. She had enough all these years... She just wanted to wash away all her memories related to Randhir and move on but all in vain.</font>

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^^^^ Oh my effing God!!!

Those lines had me drooling!

How well u penned...perfect!!!

The entire chapter...Randhir's surprise was sooo sweet!!!! Sanyu is such a lucky girlfriend!!!!!

And back to present...haye!!!!! Tragedy!

Shalini...I just want to say that with each chapter u are becoming better and better and better!

I can see ur writings ...how flawless they are! And I am so proud of u sis!!!

The descriptions are so well written...The feelings are portrayed perfectly!

Really lovely work!

I'm sorry for commenting late...But u my schedule...I remain busy whole day!

Loved it swthrt! Do update soon!

Love u loads,

Anu di!!

PS: The dedication was so sweet of u!!!! Thank u!!!

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Thnq u so much di...!!!
Oh... I improved... Yipee..
And I wanna tell u something... I get so inspired by ur writings.. Tht I try to improve more n more...
I'm very much glad tht u liked it...
Love u too...

hey...i read this ss in one go...

nxt part uplaod na pls... so many days completed na pls...

ITS AWSMMM PLZZZ PM ME >>>>>

M in love with dis story..its so amazing..n randhir is sioo cute!!
😉 😆

Originally posted by: richaaa

plz update asap waiiitin!!!!!!<div></div>

Will update day after..!!!!!