SANDHIR SS:Love Keeps US Together chapter 11 updated COMPLETED!!! - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Rekha85

Harika!!!!!!

That was great!!! Randhir only understands her words!!!!!!!
Update sooN!!!!!!


hey di...sorry for replying late
thank u so much di...it means alot
yes randhir understands her words very well...
thanks for reading and commenting di u commented that is enough for me either big or a short one..
thanks for reading and commenting di...
love,harika ...keep smiling..it looks good on you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
wo www yarrr awsme... i loved it... it is really like some thng i cant express my feeling to u... i m so happy yar pls upload nxt part as soon as possible waiting for it sry wrong word daing for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: TashaForever

Res ---Unres---

Okay first of all i am very sorry for the delay in unresing! Very cruel of me xP
Harika!! Harika! You have got talent re...
The clues! They won my heart!
SO very well written and awesome!
Very clever of u...the library scene and all xP
Grease can gift eh? SMart
Im eagerly waiting for the story to progress, for mysteries to unravel.
Update soon please :)
Love
Tanya


hey tanya thank you so much and its okay re!!!
am glad u liked the clues...and all
thanks for reading and commenting...
love,harika
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Anarkal

Super duper awesome update harika di in the second clue i thought it was the medical room where sanyu made fool of randhir remember but u r just grt noone ever have thought abt the library at tht time i am sure update soon and u also KEEP SMILING


hey sheron ..thanks sweetie ..means al lot to me... am glad u liked it...thanks for reading and commenting ...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Harika!I can't believe I hadn't read this till now! A can of grease a gift, naan? *wink wink* xP
The clues are all fab! Waiting to read more from you! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Harika!I can't believe I hadn't read this till now! A can of grease a gift, naan? *wink wink* xP

The clues are all fab! Waiting to read more from you! :D


hehe di i got that idea from ur ff...
am glad that u found clues fab...
thanks for reading and commenting di..means a lot to me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

CHAPTER 3


He went away after reading the clue with a smile on his face but behind tht smile he has tears which no one noticed...no one understood what happened to him..so they started to read the clue...

Sanyukta:am over whelmed with your searching guyz... am impressed that u went to var dhans bhai 's lion den also hehe... vardhan...was feeling good listening bhai from her...he has tears in her eyes...he want to find her at any cost ...

Our first song and first dance...which I LOVE
The time which i spent with you over there I LOVE
I have fallen for you there...
MY hearts beats for U...
The place where I have fallen for u...am there...


Waiting for the end to come
Wishing I had strength to stand
This is not what I had planned
It's out of my control
Flying at the speed of light
Thoughts were spinning in my head
So many things were left unsaid
It's hard to let you go

(Oh) I know what it takes to move on
(Oh) I know how it feels to lie
(Oh) All I want to do
Is trade this life for something new
Holding on to what I haven't got

Sitting in an empty room
Trying to forget the past
This was never meant to last
I wish it wasn't so

Randhir am waiting for u ..I want to meet u once MCP... hope u fufil my wish before...

They all ran towards randhir's room but didn't find him there so they searched for him... they found him on the terrace...he was crying ..he was crying for his love...he wished he can reverse the time for once...he want to make her happy and give her all happiness in the world he just want to see her smile and now he realized how much it means to her to work in her father's office...that time if he supported her ...she would be here...but it is late...it is too late...

Parth came and asked him...where is sanyukta? and he hugged him and cried his heart out he needed someone right now..parth consoled him and asked him and randhir said she is in MUMBAI ...city of dreams but her dream is collapsed and shattered...parth was shocked now he unerstood the clue..they danced there for the first time ...he came out of the shock and said we should go right now...abd randhir nodded his head and they all reached airport and got to know that fight is in 2 hours... so they all waited for the flight...Randhir went back to the beautiful memory ...MUMBAI...

FLASH BACK...

The whole dream team went to mumbai regarding a comptition and like always they won the competiton...and last but one night they had a party...so all the colleges came..and everyone is busy in talking and drinking and some are on the dance floor...in this mean time...

Randhir singh shekawat enters wearing a black tuxedo he was looking damn handsome and girls were like oggling at him ...everyones eyes are on him...boys jealous and girls staring and randhir has a smirk on his face I know am hamdsome wala smirk ...he went to jignesh and parth and started to talk with him..but suddenly air blows...his heart beats raised ...he was feeling something... he turned to loook at the entrance and there she is ...Sanyukta Agarwal ..she was wearing a pink net saree...with silver work on it...with matching long earings...overall she is looking damn pretty ...and randhir saw her and their eyes met...and without knowing he muttered DROP DEAD GORGEOUS...and sanyukta understood what he meant and muttered a small thank you while blushing... and all girls were no less they were looking beautiful and now all girls are jealous and boys are oggling at them especially sanykta...and they made their towards boys...and all were talking with each other and stealing glances in middle suddenly DJ announced that everyone should get on the dance floor and with pairs and randhir saw her and sanykta too saw him and he asked her a dqnce..and she nodded her head and they went on to the dance floor while others were having a perfect O they were shocked but soon came out and joined them on the dance floor...

The song was HERO. of enrique iglesias

Let me be your hero

he whishpered in her ear and she felt sensations...


Would you dance if I asked you to dance?
Would you run and never look back?
Would you cry if you saw me crying?
And would you save my soul, tonight?
Would you tremble if I touched your lips?
Would you laugh? Oh please tell me this
Now would you die for the one you love?
Hold me in your arms, tonight


they both did latin dance...he lifted her up ...and twirled her...nd he slowly kept her on the floor and they both did sensual moments ...everyone on the floor were seeing them and left the dance floor for them


I can be your hero, baby
I can kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever
You can take my breath away

he catched her hand and kissed it...and they both did slow version over here...

Would you swear that you'll always be mine?
Or would you lie? Would you run and hide?
Am I in too deep? Have I lost my mind?
I don't care, you're here, tonight
I can be your hero, baby
I can kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever
You can take my breath away

they were doing graceful turns and twists... and her saree swished and swayed along with the beat of music

Oh, I just wanted to hold you
I just wanted to hold you, oh yeah
Am I in too deep? Have I lost my mind?
Well I don't care, you're here, tonight
I can be your hero, baby
I can kiss away the pain oh yeah
I will stand by you forever
You can take my breath away
I can be your hero, baby
I can kiss away the pain

his two hands ate on her waist and her two hands were on his ...and there he lifted her and twirled her and slowly kept her on the ground...

And I will stand by you, forever
You can take my breath away
You can take my breath away


They were so close to each other eyes closed and were feeling the song...and the sing ended like sanyukta in his ams and she felt she belonged there...and they came out of their dream land by the claps and both were blushing ...like a red tomatoes...and everyone was saying that they danced so well and vardhan also saw this and was happy to see them like this...in this mean time some college boys were checking out sanyukta and having bad thoughts in their mind...sanyukta excused herself and went for a walk and the boys followed her...sanykta sensed someone os following her and she turned back and she saw those boys...she dont know what to do she started to walk fastly and one boy said why r u walking fastly wait for u ...with that she ran how fast she can...but the boys caught her... and surrounded her...and saying how beautifully u danced one biy said and made a step towards her and she was trembling with fear...she said dont come near to me or else...or else what baby ...no one is there over here ...and the four boysl lifted her... and kept her on the troundone was catching her hands and one boys her legs and she was crying so hardly ...and one boy closed her mouth and the fourth one came to remove her pallu he was almost there but BANG ...he was on the ground next moment ..yes RANDHIR he beat all the boys ...so hardly and snyukta was crying and her state was so bad...and randhir came to her...and asked is she okay? she just hugged him how tightly she can...she want to be there and she fekt safe in his arms and randhir lifted her and sanyukta was perfect in his arms and both were seeing each other through eyes as eyes speak volumes...and they reached to her room to their kuck no one was present and he kept her on the bed... and started to go but she catched him and said please...and seeing her face randhir stayed there...they spoke to each ither not through words but with eyes...and sanyukta fell asleep in her room and randhir kissed her in her forehead and went from there...


The next day night they left to F.I.T.E ...


randhir snapped out from his thoughts by the announcement..to mumbai he gathered his things and he went into the flight


Precap:will sandhir meet and sanyu will be alive...???


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to find out...stay tuned...

phew am done ...am not good at dance moves but i tried...do comment and like...

thank you,harika...

keep smiling...it looks good on you...






Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
*_* first comment!! :D
The party was just perfect! I loved the song :D
The dance was beautiful!
Continue soon.. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Omg sanyu ne to randhjr and others ko pure college mein run karwaya...awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
awww... sandhir "DANCE"..!!!!!
beautifully written girl..
keep it up..
i loved the clues.. brilliantly executed...
and yaa.. i love love enrique.. and tht song "HERO" its my fav...
update next part ASAP..
will be eagerly waiting..
love
shalini..:)

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