SANDHIR SS:Love Keeps US Together chapter 11 updated COMPLETED!!! - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsme update yar i loved it... pls yar dont kill sanyu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG Hari...😲
awesome update dear...👏👏
I love that song...❤️
you penned each nd every word beautifully...👏👏
I loved that dance scene... how romantic yaar...❤️❤️
PLz cont soonish naa..
love
Ashka...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab update dear
Waitiiing for next one
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Posted: 11 years ago
The flashback was so so lovely but the present was painful... You did a good job... keep writing & am waiting for the next part... 😛 😳 😊 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
I shall read all the updates & then comment 😃
Thanks for the PMs though😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey it ws mindblowing...i read all 3 in one go...and i jst cnt wait...pls pls update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hero is such a beautiful song and it fits sandhir so well!!!!
Loved the part of their close proximity!!! Loved how randhir leaned on parth for support and the latter responded!!!
Sanyukta wants to meet her mcp...!!! :) :)
I really enjoyed this update!! U writing is very calming! It really relaxed me! I felt an inexplicable sort of soothing sensation!
But ur precap dropped my jaw! What do u mean 'will sanyu be alive?'...
No angst harika...pretty plzzz!!!!! *puppy eyes*
Sanyu has to live n sandhir have to reunite!!!!
But thatz Upto u unfortunately!!
Once again, loved this piece!!
Love u , Anu :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: federized2210

Hero is such a beautiful song and it fits sandhir so well!!!!
Loved the part of their close proximity!!! Loved how randhir leaned on parth for support and the latter responded!!!
Sanyukta wants to meet her mcp...!!! :) :)
I really enjoyed this update!! U writing is very calming! It really relaxed me! I felt an inexplicable sort of soothing sensation!
But ur precap dropped my jaw! What do u mean 'will sanyu be alive?'...
No angst harika...pretty plzzz!!!!! *puppy eyes*
Sanyu has to live n sandhir have to reunite!!!!
But thatz Upto u unfortunately!!
Once again, loved this piece!!
Love u , Anu :)



hey di...thank u so much ...means. a lot to me...
yeah !!! hero song is perfect for sandhir...
am glad it calmed u di...and it was soothing...
sanyukta will live..or not..🤢.u hav to wait for one more day di...
thanks for reading and commenting di...
love u too di...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rekha85

Harika...it was just Awesum!!!!!

Waiting for ur updates is worth it!!!!!!!!!!
wen I told u to write I didn't knoe that u had this much talent in urself!!!!!!!!!
U r tooo goood!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved it dear!!!!!!!!!


hey rekha di...
thank u so mich..it means a lot...
u find its worth waiting...omg di..thank u so much ...
thanks for reading and commenting...
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Posted: 11 years ago




CHAPTER 4

In plane...Randhir is thinking about sanyukta...where she would be? how she would be? ..he came out of these thoughts by the air hostess firl as they said ..the planes is going to land...so please ..put on your seat belts...randhir is smiling...finally he will meet HIS Sanyukta...and after 10-15 minutes the plane landed in mumbai...which is known as city of dreams...it is morning till then...they all reached the hotel...and they freshen up and had their breakfast and started to search for sanyukta...and randhir said we will first search in the party..venue ...am thinking she should be there only because we have fallen for each other at there only...everyone is smiling seeing randhir...and they started their hunt ...in search of sanyukta...


They all reached the party venue and Randhir came out of the car as fast as he can and he started to look for her ...He searched for her everywhere but he is not able to find her...and he asked the watchman whether he saw this girl anytime here...unfortunately the watchman is new over there ..he don't know about this girl...and randhir sighed ...and went from there to search in somo other places...all boarded the car and the car zoomed out ...and next moment sanyukta came in...it was her daily habit coming and sitting here and waiting for him ...all the day ...she went inside and sat somewhere far...thinking that ..this will be the last time I will be coming here...and she is thinking about randhir...hoping that he would come...and it was after noon she got up and went from there...


Randhir and parth...everyone is searching for her ...god knows what what places they had searched for her...it was after noon and they also went back to the hotel as the sun is so hot...burning like fire...so they went back to hotel and had their lunch though randhir didn't want to eat ..parth forced him ..saying that if sanyukta will know about this she is goin to kill..so silently he had his lunch...and went to his room without saying anything...and it was evening ...the sun cooled down a bit so they started again to search for her...but all went in vain..they were not able to find her...and randhir is slowly loosing his patience...so as it is evening 6...they all went back to their rooms to freshen up but randhir said i will go the beach...they said okay ..and said they will join him shortly...hmm..he said ..and went to find some peace...

Sanyukta is also at the beach ...finding pleasure by seeing the scenery...

Sanyukta"s P.O.V.

The sun was warm on my face, evaporating all my bad feelings, lifting my sorrows, lightening my heart and emptying my soul of all I knew.The sand stretched alongside me; white and pure. Only the forgotten footprints left behind remained, except for the debris and a few shells that were scattered among the footprints, as if they had been sprinkled, just for decoration.I could taste the salt - ground up sorrows; fear not yet forgotten. I could taste the bitterness of all the bad thoughts, blowing in the tired wind.The debris lay around on the outstretched sandy beach as though it had been thrown over somebody's shoulder in disdain; it lay hopelessly, waiting for someone's love to spill. It lay, waiting for some love to reach their aching souls. It was the skeleton of what had once been beautiful - together, it was the skeleton of life.I could hear the lost cries of the sulking gulls; the echoes of happy laughter. I heard my aching heart, rising and falling; waiting.The waves sparkled and glittered playfully, splashing over my feet. They were happy then; calm and gentle; leaving behind their endless potential to destruct unfulfilled.I picked up the curved and twisted shell at my feet. I placed the shell upon my waiting ear. I heard the voices of a thousand years, holding songs, thoughts, memories, joys, stories and broken hearts. A miracle was preserved in intricate beauty, protected by the sea - forever.The salty sea air burnt my nose; stinging the thoughts inside my head; sending shivers down my spine. I smelt the eerie mystery left behind in the sand dunes.The sea held so many unknown wonders; breathtaking beauty. Hidden secrets held close - kept safe. All this beauty and wonder, continuing until it met the sky and all the secrets and dreams took flight - let loose, into the open, waiting skies.My eyes followed the sea, resting on the sunset sleeping peacefully on the horizon. For once, good and evil were equal and serene. There are no words to describe how I melted into that sunset; that perfect moment of mistakes and achievements.

I walked, just walked. waiting ...for randhir...


Randhir was also enjoying when he saw a girl walking ..he felt she is sanyukta...so he got up from his place...and went to that girl...and he said excuse me...and she turned ...there she is...SANYUKTA ..his happiness has no bounds...it is like his wish come true...and he just hugged her with a great force..if he hugged her with exerting some more force her bones would broke then and there only...and sanyukta is like a statue ...she don't know whether she should be happy or not...but keeping her sadness apart she also responded to that hug and they were like that for minutes..only god knows till when...and they broke apart and randhir started to ask her ..where have u been sanyukta ...??? I missed you farzi...and i really did and see farzi i came ...u want to meet me right...see am here farzi and i want to say something sanyu... that I LOVE YOU...WILL DO...FOREVER...


Sanyukta: am glad u came...

The sun goes down

The stars come out
And all that counts
Is here and now
My universe will never be the same

I'm glad you came ...came...came...


Randhir is stunned seeing her because she sang just now and that too for him ...it was like...he just hugged her...and sanyukta is in state of crying and she said to randhir...it is late randhir...it's too late...he didn't get her so they broke apart ...nothing is late sanyukta..see am here ...but she nodded her head no ..and then ...she just vomited...she vomited blood...all over his shirt...he is in utter shock ..he don't know what he should do...? sanyuktha lost her balance and she is going to fall but randhir catched her and she was in his arms...and said randhir...he cut her in middle and said sanyuka..he is crying seeing her...she sqid shh...she kept her fingers on his lips ...shh randhir...see i want to say something before i go..please sanyukta ...don't say like that...shhh..I LOVE YOU RANDHIR ...I ALWAYS DID and DO AND WILL DO ..if am not here also...so randhir promi...se m...eee...t...h..at u will take of your self and will be happy ...till then everyone reached there and is shocked to see sanyukta in that state...Parth immediately called ambulance...and here sanyukta...is in her last breaths ..and is saying to randhir...randhir promise me...t..haat u will talk to your mother...consider that it's my last wish...randhir is crying so badly...he just nodded his head and she continued and say to my dad ,mom,brother that i love them...he just nodded...and she turned towards her friends and said love you guys and take care okay...all were crying and till then ambulance arrived and she is taken to the hospital...she is in I.C.U.


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phew am done with this chapter...and please do comment and like please...

love,harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you...


Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago

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