SANDHIR SS:Love Keeps US Together chapter 11 updated COMPLETED!!! - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Rekha85

Hey Hari!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Really loved the update!!!!!!!!
Each Pov was awesumly explained!!!!!!!!!!!!
A big hug to u again!!!!!!!
Update sooN!!!!!!!
Love u!!!!!!
Urs Sissy,
Rekha!!!!!!!!


thank yu so much for reading and commenting...
am glad u love it
love u too sis
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sanyukta_lolz

Emotional... scenty kar diya yaar!! Haan... iss baar complete karna ye story.. beech mein remove mat karna, varna katti...!! U r seriously an awesome writer yaar, agar bade hoke writer banna ho to mujhe pehle hi apna autograph de dena... kya pata baad mein chance mile ya nahi..?!? 😉


hehe...thank you so much shristi
am glad u liked it
will continue soon
thanks for reading and commenting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Anamika1309

Harika...u r such a selfish girl 😡 ...i told u i hav ants in my pants when i read d prologue n now i still hav ants in my pants..but u...u simply chose to end d story widout revealing d clue 😭 not at all bothering abt my state but fine...since u updated dis part quickly..i ll forgive u..but next part u must reveal d clue n hats off for d first part of dis update...top notch 👏


hey anamika ...
thank you so much and haa will update soon
am glad u liked it
thanks for reading and commenting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

CHAPTER 2

Randhir takes the paper of clue and reads it

There is a dream which I live for and which I LOVE
There is a place which I LOVE
The things and grease in that place which I LOVE
everyone says our chemistry is perfect which I LOVE

Randhir thinks what place it can be ??? he repeats the clue ...

There is a dream which i live for and which I LOVE
There is a place which I LOVE
The things and grease in that place which I LOVE
everyone says our chemistry is perfect which I LOVE

Then he thinks about chemistry ... chemistry yeah !!!! MECHANICAL LAB ...

Randhir runs towards mechanical lab where everyone is shocked as they cant understand what happened right now and what is the clue so they also ran after Randhir

Parth : Randhir ,say for us also ... why did u come to mechanical lab...

Randhir hands over the clue to Parth and says guys she left us a clue which leads to mechanical lab ... so guys start searching for another clue ...how fast u can ...

All are searching for the clue but all went in vain and randhir read the clue once again ...the GREASE yeah!!! how could i forget it ...guys the GREASE BOX which i gifted her on her birthday search for it...

All if them were shocked ...their mouths were in a perfect O shape...

All:What ?? u gifted her ... OMG ...

Jignesh:kastuki pinch me please ...this is dream or what ???

Randhir turned to them when he realized what he said ... guys it is not the time to discuss about this we will talk later now first search for it...it is a red colour box..guyzzz everyone's eyes are on him again and he saw that and said not again guyz ...everyone started to search and parth got the box in the cupboard back of a machine ...guyz i found it...randhir rans towards hi. and snatched it from him and got the clue inside the box...

Sanyukta: I know u will crack the clue... after all Mr.Intelligent na...

There is a place which I LOVE the most u know why??
The place is very special to me as a thing happen to me for first time
My mind didn't like it bur my Heart love that thing...
The plce is special because I made u fool by my avting skills...
The place is also special because a girl left a clue for her loved one
now am leaving a clue for my loved one...


Randhir : Farzi am gonna kill u for this yar ... ahh!!!

Parth:Randhir think randhir because only u know about that place...

Randhir : yeah !!! am thinking he repeats the clue...to get a better understanding ...

Parth :wait she said someone left a clue for her loved one ...means something connection ...guyzz

randhir gets it...guys. vardhan sir ... niharika mam left a clue for vardhan sir in library yes !!!! guys it's library let's go... the all run towards library everyone in the college is seeing them ..what happened th these guyzz...

They reached library and started searching ... and randhir is searching when his eyes went to a book it was the same book which niharika mam left a clue to vardhan sir ...so he thought of seeing in that book and his guess was right she left a clue for him... guyz i found it... he gets the envelope and he opens it...

Sanyuktha:am impresses MCP ... well the credit not only goes to u it goes to them also u r there with u...so ...

The place is like a LION'S DEN but ...belong to someone special...
i love that place as I SNEEKED there so many times ...
The place is full of papers...
But the person who lives in that room finds solace...

Randhir : yar sanyukta i will kill u ... for sure... he thinks about the clue for 10 minutes and vidushi says guys i think so it is vardhan sir 's room ... everyone turned their faces towards vidushi...and she says guys why r u staring me like this as if am a murdrer ..and randhir says good job vidushi with that he goes to vardhan sir's

Randhir :sir,may we come in...

Vardhan:what happened randhir...??

Randhir : sir ,woh!! sanyukta left us clues to find her ...the next clue is in your cabin sir...

Vardhan is so much happy he finds sanyukta like a sister... he is happy that he got a way to find her...
he says okay search it...

Randhir finds the clue and he reads and he goes from there with a smile on his face ...

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I know this is short but tomorrow. i will post another one and sorry i was late with this part

whats is there in that clue ...to find out stay tuned ...will update my next one tomorrow...
thank you...
love,Harika ...keep smiling...it looks good on you...😉


Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Omg..!!! Harika..!!
Awesome update sissy..!!
Yeh kya tha..??
I mean superb..!!! Those clues brilliantly written Sweety..!!:D
Randhir after finding every clue he is Lyk sanyu I'm gonna kill u.. Tht was lol..!!:):)
Eagerly waiting for that last clue...
Randhir was smiling that means he gotta know where is she...??
Yippee... Next update keliye kal tak wait karna hoga kya..??
Love
Shalini..:):)
Edited by shalini_shakti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: shalini_shakti

Omg..!!! Harika..!!
Awesome update sissy..!!
Yeh kya tha..??
I mean superb..!!! Those clues brilliantly written Sweety..!!:D
Randhir after finding every clue he is Lyk sanyu I'm gonna kill u.. Tht was lol..!!:):)
Eagerly waiting for that last clue...
Randhir was smiling that means he gotta know where is she...??
Yippee... Next update keliye kal tak wait karna hoga kya..??
Love
Shalini..:):)


hey shalini
thank you so much dear
am glad u found the update awesome and clues superb
thanks it means a lot
love,harika...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
nice update...clues were brilliant...Randhir smiling...does that mean he knows about that place...eagerly waiting for next update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Res ---Unres---
Okay first of all i am very sorry for the delay in unresing! Very cruel of me xP
Harika!! Harika! You have got talent re...
The clues! They won my heart!
SO very well written and awesome!
Very clever of u...the library scene and all xP
Grease can gift eh? SMart
Im eagerly waiting for the story to progress, for mysteries to unravel.
Update soon please :)
Love
Tanya
Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Sweetie...😊
It's a nice update!!!😊
And the clues were very nice!!! Seriously u r really brilliant!!😊
Thanks 4 the pm!!!😊
Waiting 4 tommarrow!!!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Amazing story and thanks for pm

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