Arshi: Jaan Ho Tum [chp2B p.10, 05/06]

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Cute teaser...well i can understand the Arshi/Sarun effect!!😳

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Sona257

@Sona257

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Aahhw that's sweet to introduce u to all IF member
Loved the teaser.. Can't wait for the chappy

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Anaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Thanks guys! A big hug nd kissi for all of ya! ❤️

A note will be up in a hour or so... I want your suggestion! 😃

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Anaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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Apeter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

You should post index below prologue.. Because it will be Easy for people to check the index and you should post CS... So people will know who is in the story and who to come.,, it will make make it more interesting

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Sona257

@Sona257

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Yep I agree with Apeter.. It's easy for the readers if u post the index below the prologue.. It would be nice if u post a CS.. So that we know which characters r in the story.. I kinda like the last name of khushi.. U can make it as khushi Gupta.. Without the Kumari ;-)

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Roshni

@rashika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Yes I also agree with the index being below the prologue, Character sketch would be good and I love Khushi's surname as Gupta.

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sirivalli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

good start dear...

loved the concept...

n it would be nice if you post CS...

continue soon...

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1987Trisha

@1987Trisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

very nice...update next part soon and plzzz PM me

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Anaya

@annulvak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Apeter
You should post index below prologue.. Because it will be Easy for people to check the index and you should post CS... So people will know who is in the story and who to come.,, it will make make it more interesting

Originally posted by: Sona257
Yep I agree with Apeter.. It's easy for the readers if u post the index below the prologue.. It would be nice if u post a CS.. So that we know which characters r in the story.. I kinda like the last name of khushi.. U can make it as khushi Gupta.. Without the Kumari ;-)

Originally posted by: rashika
Yes I also agree with the index being below the prologue, Character sketch would be good and I love Khushi's surname as Gupta.

thanks all three of you for your suggestions :)

Edited by annulvak - 11 years ago

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