Arshi: Jaan Ho Tum [chp2B p.10, 05/06]

Originally posted by: honey-sweety

Nice Start Dear...

Loved the concept.. So Arnav and Kushi are waiting for each other... hmmm..

Can't wait to read more..

Originally posted by: arshirupa

Good start dear
nice concept
continue soon

Originally posted by: annulvak

aww! i got my first feedback from you! I just love the feeling. Now I know how the other writers feel, when they get feedback from readers! :)

Thank you very much! Well lets see who is waiting for whom. What say huh?!

Originally posted by: honey-sweety

I am sure, you will do a good job with this story dear... Glad to know that i am the first one for commenting your wann-to-be-successful story... feeling happy that i am the responsible for your the feel of your happiness... All the best for your first attempt dear... Hope to read lot of stories from you.⭐️

Originally posted by: salooni

nice start

Originally posted by: Chaverah_TFC

That was brilliant! Quite intriguing I must say.. The plot is promising.. Would love to hear more from you.. Appreciate the PM.. Do send them.. I may not be frequent in commenting for every chap you'l update, but I sure will when ever I'd get time as a cumulative comment.. Hope you are okay with it.. Once again, congratulations and great work!