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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Awsme prt.
Loved it...
thnks 4 pm
pm me when u update...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Awesome concept...
awesome story...
awesome update...
continue soon !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
loved d concept n chapter..
it was awesome..
kria was in touch with swayam n loved their friendship..
every1 r indifferent to her feeling bad for her..
loved d way swayam s making her b strong..
well written concept n chapter 1.. waiting for next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Amazing update.
Loved it.
Kriyam friendship is awesome.
Update next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Chapter 2

She doesn't want any collapse, at least not now. She is ready to tolerate everything only after the completion of the party. She never wanted to return if the affiliation would not be such important then, she would have never returned. And why would she have returned also, there's nothing for her here to live in Mumbai and her friend, no... so called friend, whom she think to be her friend are doing nothing but ignoring her.

He keeps his hand on her shoulder, she turns around to see swayam, ya who could have she accepted rather than him.

"Kria! Party tumhare liya rakhi gayi hai... so enjoy...come" he drag her to VP sir. "Sir dekhiye naa.. jiski pary hai wahi chup chap khadi hai"

"ya right! Kria enjoy the party" VP sir said.

Swayam drag her to the dance floor, she is hell not in a mood to dance at all, and he made her force to dance.

"maine mana kiya na to kyun tum jabardasti kar rahe ho?" she burst out at him.

Everyone's attention is on them now. She didn't do it intentionally, she is irritated of being here tolerating her friend's ignorance and she burst out at her best friend, not fair. She didn't want to insult him. He looks around and left the place. She goes behind her but is being stopped by Sharon.

"ruko. Kria" Sharon speaks holding her wrist.

Kria didn't turn. She is standing looking at the direction Swayam went, she is not focusing on Sharon at all but her mind is thinking about her best friend who is hurt by her only. She knows him, he will not tell her anything, but as a friend she knows how he reacts to the situation and she need to go to him else he might go far away and she couldn't catch him.

"Kria! Are you listening?" Sharon almost asked in anger.

"chodo" kria said, trying to move out of the tighten grip on her wrist.

She turns and jerks Sharon's hand and left the place following Swayam, her eyes is on him only else she couldn't reach to him. She follows him till the car; he sits inside and then opens the passenger door for her. She is shocked, and takes her sit. They drove away from the place. Sharon was the one to follow Kria and after what she saw, made her hell angry. This all didn't go un noticed by one and only one person Mr. Reyaansh Singhania'. He follows his bff, who is hell angry on Swayam and no one could resist her anger, so he need to make her calm down.

She is sitting in the corner of the dance floor inside the party. (Of course party is still on) he goes and sits in the chair next to her.

"Sharon!"

She looks at him with teary eyes. What can she do also, she feels like she is going to lose her love only because of Kria. Yes Kria is Swayam bff but her heart, it's denying to accept it that Kria will not come between them.

"Rey mujhe abhi koi baat discuss nahi karni hai" wiping her tears she said.

Well it's enough for Rey to understand that she actually mean it. He doesn't know why but he too felt jealous seeing both of them together. Life has come to a crucial stage, where neither can they move on nor they can move back. He is in anger for Kria who left him giving a valid reason that she likes Swayam and now he is feeling that Kria must take his bff love from her. Of course it's so easy task for her, she did break his heart before and now she can break Sharon's heart making Swayam hers. But is actually she did then he is not going to spare her. May be his heart will melt for her later but he would not give up from his heart.

The cold breeze is passing on the silent road at the mid night and two bff are sitting on the beach looking at the sea waves. He looks at her, who is sitting calm staring at the waves with expressionless.

"kya soch rahi ho?

"kuch nahi Swayam...bas ye soch rahi thi ki life bahut jaldi jaldi nikal jati hai na" she said

Yes life has passed so speed. It was like some days have just passed when she left Mumbai but time again brought her here, with a big cause, dream of her friends to make a dance academy. Her life has to be full focused on that. She has left all her feelings behind her; she is now a strong hearted girl who doesn't care about anyone except her bff Swayam.

"han Kria bahut jaldi chala gaya ke mujhe bhi pata nahi chala"

He says looking at her who was in her deep thought, having a sigh he looks back at the waves forming in the sea. He hadn't thought that she would return here. He doesn't understand why she didn't want to tell the truth to friends. What all will think? Rey and Sharon hat about them. Rey must be thinking that Kria came here for me and Sharon would have got angry if she would have seen them coming together. It was ok in the party as he has told Sharon that he will come with Kria so she didn't mind but now what?

Life plays lots of game with peoples. It's life which can betray any one at any moment of time. People usually cursed those who are related to them and get betrayed but it's actually the life that does so. Neither the betrayed people nor the betrayal are included, it's all a play of life. It's Life, which play twists and turns. Not only on shows or stories but only in real life too.

Edited by AnuFFandPM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

NOTE

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Edited by AnuFFandPM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
suggest a name for the ss guys pleaseee
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Its grt!!!
Emotional senti update!!!
Kriyam n sharey bonds r d highlights!!!
I love it!!!
Bt i dnt understand y she has to b d "mahaan sacrificial ghai"!!!
Cant she just b a young normal gal!!!
Cant she jist yell at dem making dem shut der mouth wid her truth!!!
Cant she just open up bout her decisions dat were d best for dem n worst for her!!!
Well yes she can!!!
Bt wanting dis mahaan tag wid her name!!! She wudnt!!!
I m frustrated by her sacrifices yaar!!!
I mean she gives away her love n her frnds for her mother!!
She plants d seeds of hatred for dem to forget her!!!
She gives away d life changing opportunitu for dese ppl!!!
As i said i m frustrated!!! So i better stop!!!
Cya after d nxt update!!! Which i hope wud b soon!! 😉 😛 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
It was really nice...
i loved the way you write it.. ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
u said this proverb in chapter 2 was superb and fabulous...
this suit it Life plays lots of game with peoples. It's life which can betray any one at any moment of time. People usually cursed those who are related to them and get betrayed but it's actually the life that does so. Neither the betrayed people nor the betrayal are included, it's all a play of life. It's Life, which play twists and turns. Not only on shows or stories but only in real life too. ... it in true go on in rey,kriya, sharon and swayan life... do continue soon and pm me

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