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Prologue
After a long evening walk, she enters the house. Holding a bottle of water kept in the table of the hall, she steps to her room. Opening the bottles cap she is gulping the water, when her phone rings.
"Ah! Iss phone ko bhi abhi bajna tha" she said irritated keeping the bottle in the desk.
Looking at the name flash on the screen she quickly picked it up.
"Hello! Swayam. Kaise ho? "She said excitedly.
"thik hi hun Kria" he said in a deep voice.
"kya hua? Swayam? Is everything all right?" she asked curiously.
"Kria... wo darashal baat ye hai... k..."
"haan Swayam bolo..."
"Kria main chahta hun k hame sabko sab kuch bata dena chahiye" he said.
"nahi Swayam hum kisi ko kuch nahi batayenge" she said in a loud voice. "Ah! Sorry Swayam. Mujhe aise chillana nahi chahiye tha"
"nahi Kria main samajh sakta hun" he said smiling
"Thanks Swayam"
"Are isme thanks ki kya baat hai. aur waise bhi I am your best friend to I can understand you" he said in a concern.
"haan wo to hai" she said smiling.
"To tum aa rahi ho naa?" He asked wanting her reply to be yes or no.
"haan bhi aur nahi bhi" she said looking to the window.
"acha. K. jab aaogi mujhe inform jarur karna"
"haan baba kar dungi inform" she said having a smile on her face.
"chalo now bye bye."
"Bye bye Swayam"
She keeps her phone and the looks outside the window crossing her arms, thinking about her, her life. How her life has changed today. What was she before? She was the leader of the weakling of the st.louis who fought against the dazzlers, now the weaklings and dazzlers are together called Lousians. Her team members the weaklings may have forget her now. And why won't they? It's after all 2 years. And in these two years everything has changed. Though she wants to meet her friends but she can't face them. After all what she did with them was shame. She knows after knowing the truth her friends may forgive her. But no she don't want to do so. It's been 15 days she came back here but her friends totally ignore her and Rey, he seems to as if he doesn't know her. And Swayam is the only one who knows about her, who was in touch with her last 2 years. He knows everything happened in the last 2 years with her. But she made him promise not to disclose it to others. And Swayam as a good, no not good best friend kept his promise not to disclose it.
Chotu sa prologue diya hai maine. Kria kea ne k baad kaisa hota according to me maine likha hope you guys will appreciate. Chapter 1 ready hai. I will update it after getting good response.Thank you.
Waise title kya duun samajh nahi aa raha hai to if any of you can suggest it.
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Anu (16/3/14)
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