~Opurnota~ A tale of dangerous liasions (Ch 2 updated in Pg 7)

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

bhai shahab... let me just boast a little..

I comment lamba... and be the most frolicking bhen I laaikkkhhh it...

and tragedy leaves mark... bhakkk... get me no tragic and am all urs... :-D

one more thing... tragedy leaves mark kispe???? me confused... :-D

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

OMG OMG OMG Calcutta!

RESERVED

(trying to express my excitement with the help of these humongous fonts) 😛

Love you Kishi!!

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Alright. Guys this is EPIC!

I can see everything play out in front of my eyes, in a grand scale.

I am in love with Kriyoshi Bai so much. Her pious rage, her formidable demeanour.

It is such a delight reading this piece. I wanna read one chapter everyday. Please.

Sharon Westerford, I like that girl.

So is Swayam the polyglot? Is he a swadeshi? Like Uttam Kumar in Sabyasachi. 😛

I'd love it if he is. Nevertheless I'm curious to see how things unfold.

And Calcutta is always intoxicating, is it not?

Update this sooon... come on now.

Edited by -bLEu98- - 11 years ago

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

really an amazing update

superb one

loved whole chapter

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elizabeth paul

@enigma1997

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

i fell in love with this kriyo and shron westford ... an irresistable period drama !!!!

cant wait for the boys to get indroduced! gimme more!

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

woww wat a start👏 i totally lovedd d intros of kriya and sharon👏 fab one👏 well-written😊 loved ittt❤️

continue soon😊

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Nice start

The plot is very much different

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Pray_For_Peace

@Pray_For_Peace

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

You are a Bengali Kishi??? Being one myself, I never got to know that...my bad!!

coming to your writing...this is AMAZING and I can repeat this for 'n' number of times and I don't think I'll will be tired...from the historical background to the characters to the setting, everything seems so real...I can imagine the entire thing happening right in front of me...

yes, a special mention is for the use of layers in this story, I loved the subtlety with which you are using the layers to the plot of the story. Hope to get the next update soon😊

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..Roop..

@..Roop..

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

you are a Bong Kishi...even me too...

omg i never knew...

firstly i loved the title...Opurnota...

and Kolkata 1906 Historic..KR fic...

sirf itna hi kafi hai excitement k liye...

Kriya a tawaif or whatever you call her...

the way you portrayed the story its mesmerizing...

you are a gifted writer kishi...

this is looking really promising...

i am really eager to read further...

Loving it already... (:

Edited by ..Roop.. - 11 years ago