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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it...
update nxt part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for Pm i am actually shivering. i was ltoo engaged in it. i felt like seeing it. omg. you explained very well...
do update next part soon... please please.. thoda lamba dena please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG... What a concept... its really diffferent...
Plz continue soon n pm me!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
That incident was just horrible..

Kria lost her mom.. 😭
Finally the goons were killed..
Eaget to knw wht wil happen next..
Post d next part soon.. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
it is interesting...plz try to continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Thank You all for such a great support and I'll try updating the ff real soon.
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Here is the chapter 3 of the FF
Its is basically giving some few important moments that have occurred in Kria's life post the tragedy


Chapter 3


On the other side in Mumbai the gang seeing the news somewhere deep were worried and hoped it should not be Kria as they knew she was from a Dehradun and had only her mother, plus she was of the same age as the girl was but outside they showed like they didn't care if the girl was Kria. Everyone secretively followed the entire media coverage just praying it should not be her as the feelings they had were very much real and how much they hated her but still had a sweet corner for her at least in just two months they can't just remove her from their heart. They would need time for that.

After six days of hard work by the doctors, she was out of danger but didn't knew any one they could contact and cause they had to keep her identity a secret they could not also flash her photo and ask anyone. After the 7th day when she finally came to her senses she told that she had no one other than her mother. She told them that she actually was born in US were they have their family mansion. She told that her mother shifted to India and got a job here after her father left them and eventually got the citizenship of India. She told them that her mother had instructed her to go there only if something happened to her. She had no idea about her family her ancestors nothing. She gave them the address she had. On inquiring about the address she gave them they got to know that she was the only living member left of the richest industrialist of the United States. Unfortunately the entire family had died during a plane crash except their youngest daughter which was Smriti. She was extremely rich even though her family ware no longer in the business. She was the owner of an estate worth several thousand billion dollars. She was the owner of an entire Island named after her and many such things. The doctors were shocked to know this.

Meanwhile the last words her mother had told her were the only thing that kept her going and had vowed to always chase her dream and live her life as much as she could to honor her mother who was not here because of her. She also read the diary of her mother and her resolve only strengthened. The doctors were themselves shocked how strong this girl was. Normally after such a tragedy people are not even in their senses for years but here she was recovering so fast which made them wonder how strong the girl is not physically but mentally.

The expected time for complete recovery was 1 year but she had recovered within 9 months. During her stay in the hospital she had won the hearts of all the 10 people attending and treating her by her resolve to fulfill her mother's last wish.

Meanwhile as the time passed the gang had already started forgetting her, not actually forgetting her rather despising her more, which eventually had turned into not talking about her and always remembering her as their biggest enemy whom they had to conquer no mater what.

After nine months she returned to New York where she was greeted by Kaka, the caretaker of the family. He was one of the nicest person one could find. Even though he had almost a mansion spread over 1000 acres, he lived in a small cottage just outside the mansion. She was treated with so much affection that she sometimes let the old Kria out to him. After coming back to New York she had only two motives one was to become the best dancer she possibly could and the other was to train in martial arts so she can always protect herself and her loved ones. There she applied in the New York School of Dance and no surprise here she got selected pretty easily that too on full scholarship. And at the same time there was a worldwide reality dance show organized, and the winner was to be awarded with a chance to start their own dancing group, which would perform all over the globe.

Kria wanted to participate but didn't want any of her friends back in Mumbai or as a matter of fact anyone who knew her to know that she was participating. All she wanted was to dance and stay out of the limelight as well. She went to the Dean of New York School of Dance (he was a family friend of the Ghai's but he got to know her after she got into college so no partiality there and also to mention she never told anyone what had happened to her not anyone) and asked him if he could keep the news of her participation a secret and excuse her whenever her presence was required for the competition to which he readily agreed. She actually took a month long sick leave when the show was in its later stage. She went into the competition wearing a skin colored inner like thing that hid all the marks (from neck to feet) she had got from the incident (note: it would appear just like skin) and over the inner she would wear the dress she has to perform in. Besides that she would wear a mask of Vendetta. This would eventually become her signature. She entered with the pet name KSG (short form of Kria Smriti Ghai). She looked so mysterious and yet so serene and beautiful in the attire.

After a month and half, when the show completed she was judged the winner of the show by a huge margin. It seemed no one could even come near her when it came to dance. She was a class apart, what she brought on the dance floor was something no one could ever tell. The passion and the determination to become better was unfathomable. All the attributes along with her unmatched dancing skills made a sensation all over the world in just one world tour organized by the competition guys. She was the Sachin Tendulkar, Roger Federer, Michael Schumacher, Michael Jackson all combined when it came to dance. She had become the queen of the world, the most sought out celebrity within half a year. On top of her amazing skills the mask she put on which added the mysterious part to her, the fact she never disclosed her name or ever give a live interviews made people only more curious to know who she was. Only two people knew who this mysterious KSG is; the dean sir and Kaka.

She had become bigger than anyone in the world at the age of nineteen. The president of United States himself requested her to meet him and she would almost earn billions of dollars for every show she would do (though she would perform only once or twice in couple of months). People called her the angel from India because of the fact that she would deposit everything she earns into her trust (including the winnings from the show) and then would donate everything to people who are in need of the money. Her deeds had gained her a reputation of the one of the most noble humans and immense respect from all over the world. People considered her a soft, nice and an extremely talented artist with a heart of gold but the performance in Texas added another adjective the world would use to mention her.

While she was performing on a song do dhari talwaar with couple of background dancers who were carrying a sharp blade, one of the blade slipped from the hands of a dancer and hit Kria piercing her cloth along with the skin. She started bleeding profusely. The show was put on halt and due to the immense love and affection people showered on her, no one was ready to leave the arena until they got update about her condition. Everyone hoped that she would come back on stage and inform them that she was all right and then they could leave a little less worried. After 15 minutes she showed up on stage not just to assure them of her well-being but she actually performed for another 2 hours completing the show. This action of hers came as a shock for everyone as it was clearly visible that she had started to bleed again 30 minutes after resuming her performance but still performed with same intensity, and vigor like she felt no pain. After addressing the crowd she went backstage patting the guy from whom the blade slipped a while ago. After the performance when he was inquired about what happened backstage he narrated the entire conversation.

The backstage conversation

Doctor: KSG this is a deep cut you should probably go cancel the show and take rest. I have done the dressing and don't exert much or else bleeding will start again.

Dancer: (feeling guilty and scared of the repercussions of his mistake) Sorry ma'am, the blade slipped of my hand and hurt you. I am really very sorry.

Before he could say anything KSG interrupted

Note I am using KSG so it's easier to understand that no one involved knows anything about the identity of KSG aka Kria

KSG: Hey there is no need to feel sorry. It is not like you purposely harmed me or anything. The stunt you are performing is already very difficult and there is a slight risk involved and the risk is to you more than me. Plus you are quite more experienced and senior to me so you don't need to apologize. We are artists and while performing such small incidents happen all the time. If you really want to do something for me then just forget that such an incident happened and perform like you always do without any hesitations.

Dancer: Thank you KSG. You are too kind but what do you mean by performing like I always do, we are not performing after your injury.

KSG: we are performing. I am absolutely fit and fine and can perform. I don't want to rob people of their money. I had promised them a three hour show and can't stop it just after an hour cause of a small injury.

Doctor: what the hell are you saying girl. It is not a small scratch it is a deep cut you need rest.

Again interrupted

KSG: I am fine I have all the time to rest after the show and we are performing and am not hearing anything else. Get ready everyone we are resuming in 5 minutes.

The authority in her voice was something no one could go against. Her tone though being polite had don't know what kind of influential power that no one was ever able to argue with her. And so the show resumed.

This incident along with what the media were told about the conversation of KSG and her crew was the talk of the town for many days to come. The incident had increased the respect and admiration her fans had to a completely new level.

Meanwhile her normal life out of the limelight at the New York School of Dance was also not quite different.

She had already become the most admired dancer in the institute. The command she had in her voice, the confidence she had in herself was something to admire. The way she carried herself was so divine that no one could keep their eyes of her. The beautiful face and a perfect body was enough for any guy to start drooling over her. The marks of that dark phase could also not affect her beauty in even a slightest manner. Though everyone did wonder how she had those marks all over her body but no one could ever make her reveal the secret behind it. Everyone had assumed it must be due to a severe accident she must have suffered. She was the person to talk to if you had any problems no matter if they were related to dance or anything else. She was the person anyone would go if they had any difficulty mastering a step or if they were having problem in choreographing a song. She was a friend to all but she was also someone whom you would not want to make angry. Though she never got angry easily but if she did then its hell for the person for whom the anger was directed to. Everyone had seen her angry side only once she kicked the asses of the four well-built bullies when they didn't pay heed to her warning to stop ragging a girl but instead tried forcing them upon her with the intention to scare her. But what the entire school witnessed blew away the minds of everyone. Within a minute all 4 were down on the floor begging for her forgiveness. This was a result of the training she had been going through for almost a year now.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hope you all like the new chapter and my interpretation of Kria's character

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hehe me first... yippie

chalo ab ubdate ke bare me so it was awesome. beyond imagination i am loving it..

thanks for PM.

update soon.
Edited by rolisiddhant - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
now even m wondering...how can sm1 be so strong...b4 anything..i want to say gang really dont deserve her...she is way too precious...2ndly..salute to u dear...u r incredible...
just amazing...this chapter..described kriya perfectly..no qstn nothing...evrything justified...i m loving it..keep it up..nd ese hi jaldi update krna
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago

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