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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

Kria loved her dad deeply...she had lost him...and all because of the guy she loved...

She hated him...she hated the feeling of love...coz it took away her dad from her...

Okay ab itna hi bakwas kafi hai...😆

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#702

Manny ek aur idea bolu...agar tu haan bolegi to main wo batungi...

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: Endurance
Raji kaam beech m chod k chali gayi🤣

Agar tu itni fast spam karogi toh I can't keep up...isliye chali gayi😡

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#704

Manny tu Randhir ko mat bhulna...Kria ko pata chalna chahiye ki randhir had helped Rey...plz...

And let ur Shivam win the bet...u feel really sad for him...so okay give him the captain-ship and give Rey his love😊

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pinky

@pinkypanrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#705

The part was too god...just loved it...the written...please update nxt part soon...!!

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Anvesha

@..ANVESHA..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#706

Awesome update...
Loved every bit of it...
Bechari kriya... Use sabke saamne poochna pada... She was so esmbarrassed... Haha... Rey is too much!!!
The car scene was cute...
And the kiss was perfectly potrayed... But she is seriously falling for him badly... Hope she won't be too hurt...
Last but not the least... The ultimate suspense... Really excited for it
...so plz update soon... Really to read the next part :-)!!!!!

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akanksha bakshani

@akankshamannu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#707

Sorry I know i said i will comment was a bit busy these days so couldn't.

Coming on the second half update:

It was funny when Rey said that her mom informed him about visiting his home. Why was servant afraid of Rey??? And the kisses was magical. Over all loved it.

Update soon.