14 Days || A Kriyaansh Short Story || Day 10 On Page 96.

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Since I lost my other account... I'm copying my story in my new ID

Hello... So I have really gotten a great response on two of my stories so here is another one of my works.

The basic idea of the story is how the arrogant, rich, selfish and playboy Reyaansh Singhania falls in love with the not so naive Kriya, and how they built a relationship on lies that now even love seems a lie.

The story is the same good girl falls for the bad boy cliche but with a twist.

Dated: 16 February 2014
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Index

Prologue 1: Page 1

Prologue 2: Page 1

Prologue 3: Page 1

Day 1: Page 08

Day 2: Page 17

Day 3: Page 26

Day 4: Page 35

Day 5: Page 44

Day 6: Page 53

Day 7: Page 62

Day 8: Page 72

Day 9: Page 83
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Character sketch:

Reyaansh Singhania-

The heart throb of college and the ultimate play boy. He just cares about money and girls but what happens when one girl doesn't give him the kind of attention he is used too?

Kriya Ghai-

The quiet girl, who breaks her shell only when needed. She is the only girl who won't go gaga over Rey or any of his friends. But she has reasons, she doesn't trust anybody enough. What will happen when someone gains her trust the way she wants.

Swayam Shekhawat-

Rey's cousin on mothers side and only source of sanity. If not for him Rey would've been lost in the world of clubs, money and girls with the kind of company he has. He is not interested in Money or girls, he wants a true relationship, which is hard to find in Mumbai.

Sharon rai Prakash-

Kriya's best friend and support system. She doesn't go all fan girling on Rey and his gang but has a tiny (huge) crush on Swayam.

Shivam Dutta-

Every love story has a villain and here he is in the disguise of the hero's best friend, who literally wants to stab him a million times... But what can he do being Rey's friends has advantages.

Randhir Singh-

Kriya's bestie and Rey's enemy or competition.


More characters will be introduced as the sort proceeds...

Dated: 17th February 2014
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This is kind of a trailer... Do tell me if I should continue...


Kriya Ghai is a normal teenage girl except the fact that she doesn't like to have 'fun'.

SCENE:

"Because that is Kriya Ghai" Swayam replied. That is confusing. "So?" was all that came out of my mouth.

"Well her records say she doesn't like to have your kind of fun" he said sarcastically.
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Reyaansh Singhania is your college playboy and the rich bad guy.

SCENE:

I saw the brown eyed girl from last night, what was her name... God why can't I remember her name. Well not my concern at least I remember she is from last night.

"Hi Rey" She said trying to flirt, miserably failing. "You do remember me right?" She asked. "Well last night was great and u was hoping that you could come over tonight" she said.
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Shivam Dutta is the "best friend" of Rey, but in reality he's extremely jealous of him and always wants to see him fail.
So wat happens when Shivam bets Rey that he can't sleep with Kriya Ghai

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"You need to sleep with her by your birthday"Shivam said. "But that's in two weeks." Rey said shocked.

"What? You can't do it." He said making him angry. "I will show you what I can do" an angry Rey replied.
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Wat happens when he realizes it's not going to be as easy as he thought?

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"Go out with me" Rey pleaded.

"I'm not your type Rey" kriya replied agitated.
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"I don't like you Rey" kriya said, begging him to leave her alone. "Come on, give me a chance"Rey requested. She was about to reject when "Fine just give me two weeks to impress you"Rey interrupted.

"Fine, you have fourteen days" Kria said, sighing.
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Will she ever warm up to him?

SCENE:

Rey pulled her towards him and looked in her eyes, they were heaving and just then kriya closed her eyes.
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And wat happens when he actually starts to fall for her?

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Rey sat next to Swayam on the couch and whispered "I think I'm falling for kriya."
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But wat happens when Kriya finds out about the bet?

SCENE:

"All you wanted, was to sleep with me." Kriya yelled at him as she wailed because of her fate.
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Will Rey ever be able express his true feelings to her?

SCENE:

Rey held her hand to stop her from going anywhere "You gave me fourteen days didn't you and kriya Ghai never breaks her promise"

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Reyaansh Singhania

Kriya Ghai

Swayam Shekhawat

Sharon Rai Prakash

Shivam Dutta

And more in...

14 days.

Okay trailer bakwas tha but plz comment.
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Prologue- part 1

I was talking with my friends casually, well our casual talks usually comprised of girls, one night stands, last nights and well as everyone should've guessed s**. Suddenly Vicky asked about what did I do last night. "You really don't know or are you trying to act innocent" I said to him with a smug smile on my face. Last night was another night of pleasures like most of the others.


"Which one?" Nil questioned. I really don't remember what was her name, " uh I think her name was K...kr".

I felt a tap on my shoulder, I groaned and turned around and saw the brown eyed girl from last night, what was her name... God why can't I remember her name. Well not my concern at least I remember she is from last night.

"Hi Rey" She said trying to flirt, miserably failing. "You do remember me right? I'm Kriti" she said. Oh that's her name. "Well last night was great and u was hoping that you could come over tonight" she said clinging on me and adding a wink at the end. Really that is the best she can do, I feel like barfing.

"I don't think that's possible" I said trying to get out of her grip. Oh that worked, she left me as soon as she heard that. God, oxygen I missed you.

"What" she said, surprised, bringing me back to my senses. She was teary eyed. Ugh, I hate girls at times like these, only at times like these.

"Look preeti" I started. "It's Kriti" She wailed. "Yes, Kriti I know you are a great girl and you deserve a great guy, but you know what you did with me, it was a one time thing, I wanted to have some fun, you offered and I gladly accepted" I told her with the infamous Reyaansh Singhania smirk. She looked at me for a moment, is she going to slap me. But to my fortune, she turned on her heels and walked away.

I sighed a sigh of relief and frustration "Girls, they're annoying." I said. "You can't keep them off, can you?" Vicky questioned. I smirked and replied "What can I do, they just can't resist the Reyaansh Singhania charm." We all were laughing, when Amar said "Is that Shivam?"

We looked at that side and saw Shivam trying to hit on a girl, trying to. "He is so dead, that girl's gonna shut him down, embarrassingly." said Swayam approaching us.

"And how do you know that?" I asked confused. Shivam has a great record in girls and no one has really rejected him.

"Because that is Kriya Ghai" Swayam replied. This confused me more, is she the daughter of the president or worse principal. "So?" was all that came out if my mouth.

"And I thought Reyaansh Singhania knows about every girl, dude haven't you heard, she's the new hot topic and as her records say she doesn't like to have your kind of fun" he said sarcastically.

This girl is interesting, but I'm damn sure she is gonna fall in shivam's trap.

---kriya---

"So how about it, you and me, tonight" this crazy guy kept trying to sleep with me. He is so dead. I took out a soda can from the dispenser and started shaking it.

"You and me, tonight huh?" I asked making sure if he wants to do this. He started getting closer "Yes. We can have a lot of fun" he said, winking. This is getting over board.

"What kind if fun are we talking about" I asked, acting innocent. "Any kind" he said smirking, poor guy must've thought I fell in his trap.

"The kind in which you get wet" I asked. His eyes glittered and he replied "yes". God is the limit. I opened the can and spilled the soda all over him. "W*F" he exclaimed. "You are right, it is fun!" I said, smiling falsely and walked away.

---Rey---

Shivam walked over to us, with his head hanging low. We couldn't control and started laughing like maniacs. I could see he was embarrassed but he masked it with attitude and asked us to "Shut up." I don't know what came over but I burst out after that.

"REJECTED" Nil cried and we burst out. We burst out laughing again and he being him caught Bharat by his collar "I said shut up!" He yelled at us. This got us silent. I got up and glared at him "Don't get carried away and remember who the leader is." I stated in a stern voice, placing my palm on his shoulder. "I don't forget things so easily Rey." He said as he jerked my arm off and the memories flooded back.

"Well, you don't know if she rejected me" he smiled and changed the topic. "Dude you came over with soda all over you, it's no rocket science" Swayam stated the obvious. "So what, she rejects everyone in college" Shivam said, holding back the frustration.

"Well, that's because, she hasn't met me" I smirked, it irritated him. "What? Do you really think, you can do better than me Mr. Singhania."

"You even consider that as a question, it's a fact dude. Ask the girls in college they will choose me over you Mr. Dutta." I said with a smile. "Okay then, ask her out. Let's see if she will agree"he said smirking. "Fine I will" I replied.

Swayam looked concerned, but before I could ask he said "she doesn't do these things Rey." Ugh! Don't tell me he is starting this again "I'm telling you, she can't resist me."

"Sure" he said sarcastically. I hate it when something like this happens why can't he be like me "whatever" I replied.

--Few hours later--

---Rey---

Shivam, Vicky, Nil and me were checking oh girls in the canteen when Swayam entered "What are you people doing?" He asked, already knowing the answer. "Checking out girls" I replied. He rolled his eyes.

"Dude why can't you not be a bore and do it with us." I said. "Because, unlike you guys, I would like to have a serious relationship." He said. "I can't believe you guys are related" said Vicky.

"I know" I said as Swayam walked away.

---kriya---

I was casually walking through the college corridors when I felt a tug at my arm. This person is so not gonna like what is gonna happen. I turned around and found Randhir standing there.

"Hey, it's you." I said with a sigh of relief."Did you want someone else Miss. Ghai." He said cheekily.

"Stop that" I said irritated as he laughed and continued "Well I saw what happened this morning." And burst out.

Really, this guy needs manners. But who am I kidding he has been the same since 7 years hasn't he. "Apparently, everyone has." I said as seriously as I could. But soon after the both if us burst out.

I tried hard to stop laughing, gradually succeeding. "I'm going to the canteen wanna join in?" He asked hopeful.

"Stop making such a helpless face, leave I'm right behind. I need to get some stuff." I agreed and left, walking further.

---Rey---

"There she is." I heard Shivam say as I was busy checking out girls. I looked at him and gave a confused look.

"Kriya" he muttered and I shot my head towards that direction, and the world came to a stop.

Just kidding!!

But yeah I have to agree she is damn hot man!

"Are you gonna just drool or even reach out to her." Shivam's words broke my focus on kriya's body. "Of course I am and thanks buddy it would be great to have dome fun with her. She is hot!!" I said as I buckled up.

"Have fun getting rejected" he said mocking me and I glared at him and replied looking at all of my friends "Watch and learn boys." And headed towards her.

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Sorry kriyaansh nai tha par prologue Mein kriyaansh nai mileage sorry :)

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I guess that is not too much.
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Okay this is not exactly a chapter as I don't want to give it in chapters but in the basis of days...

So let's say this is the continuation of the prologue so...

Prologue 2:



---Rey---

"Watch and learn boys" I said to my friends as I headed towards my feast for tonight.

I reached out to her and stood right behind her. She turned and gave a shocked look to me. "Hi" I said to her. She placed her palm on my chest and pushed me a little, and I moved back a little.

"Do I know you" she asked. Is she serious? She thinks she'll tell me that she doesn't know me and I'll believe her.

"Nice joke but I'm Reyaansh Singhania, call me Rey." I said, ignoring the question.

"Hi but I need to leave" she said in a hurry. Again, is she serious? Girls die for even a look from me. Oh yes I know she's playing hard to get. I took a step closer and she moved back, "Well I was thinking, if you want, we can get to know each other."

"Not interested" she said, leaving me shocked. She was about to leaved when I caught her wrist "Come on just none date, we can have dinner and then maybe-" I started pleading but she interrupted "And maybe what? Take me to your car, sweet talk me into your arms and have some hot sex. I'll pass" trying to release her wrist from my grip.

Did she just say that or are my ears ringing. "I like you, you're pretty straight forward" I said bemused. "And you're annoying!" She said getting on my nerves.

She bit her lip, trying to find something to say "Look... I really don't want to spill a soda all over u like I did to your friend earlier this morning, not just because i don't have more money to get one." I smiled a little at that, this girl surely know how to prove her point.

"But also because you came to me a little more nicer than your friend so I'll make this easier, so please lets make this rejection as simple as possible, you can keep your dignity and the popularity and I'll keep my sanity." She continued. Really is she rejecting the Reyaansh Singhania.

I was shocked, would be an understatement. Did she just royally reject me, but that's my part. Whatever, I over came the feeling and asked hesitant "So is that a no?"

"Yup, that's a no" she replied so casually. She just insulted me indirectly and she is so casual. How could she. She left and I walked back to my friends.

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I walked back to my friends and directly looked at Shivam "Aww, you got rejected, didn't you?" How the hell did he know?

"Did I come back with soda all over my shirt, I don't think so. So stop guessing." I said getting frustrated. "Well you also did not come with the smug look you have on your pretty face when you get something you want" he continued.

"Maybe I did not want her" I said back, this guy can be annoying. "Was that before or after she rejected you?" He said.That's it this was too much. If looks could kill, Shivam would be dead by now.

"REJECTED" Nilesh yelled and my glares changed their direction. "Shut up" I said and he immediately muttered a sorry and did as instructed. I looked back at Shivam and saw a tinge of jealousy in them, but why the hell was he jealous?

"I told you Rey but you were all 'no one can resist my charm'" Swayam started breaking my thoughts and putting the air quotes around that phrase. Way to make my day much better Swayam.

"No one does. Do you understand? No one rejects The Reyaansh Singhania" I said masking my emotions with rage. And Swayam rolled his eyes I was gonna comment but Shivam interrupted.

"So are you going to try again?" He asked, sounding curious and... And wicked. That was strange, this girl is really getting in my skin.

"I always get what I want" I said, confidently. "Ah-ha! So you do admit that you want kriya" Nil made a way into the conversation. I looked at him, with the dumbest look I have ever had on my face.

"Nilesh" I said in the most sweetest voice I have ever heard myself utter. "Do all of us a favor and SHUT UP!" I shouted at the end. Sorry, that was all he muttered and shut up.

"Dude, she is just going to reject you again." Shivam said continuing the conversation while Vicky, Nil, Amar and Swayam just listened. "No, she is not!" I said totally against the idea. "She is gonna say yes, girls say yes to me, so she also has to!" I said to him, more like telling myself.

"How much do you wanna bet she is not gonna f**k you" he asked, totally serious. "That depends on how much you wanna loose." I said accepting the indirect challenge.

"Fine, if you loose, which obviously you are... You are going to hand me over the basketball leadership." He said overwhelmed. Is he really asking for this. What is wrong with him? But I can't tell this to him right now, we'll talk later.

"Fine but if I win, which I probably am. What do I get?" I asked agreeing to his demand. "What do you want?" he asked casually.

I thought for a while and asked him "Your dad owns that auto repair shop right?" Though I knew the answer already.

"One of the best in the country" he said, pride dripping from every word if his sentence. "Okay then, when I win I want you to fix up my car, the engine and everything... For free." C'mon Reyaansh can't you think of something better, was all I thought after I said those words. What can I do, I have everything.

Shivam chuckled and said "Yeah, that's cool but only on one condition." Isn't the whole bet his condition? But well what does this guy want now. "You have to sleep with her before your birthday"he continued.

Wait my birthday's coming up, okay. But then that's in two weeks. I looked at him shocked as soon as the realization hit me. "But that us in two weeks!" I exclaimed.

"What you think you can't do it" he replied. This guy surely knew how to hurt someone's ego. "I can do it" I replied slightly gritting my teeth.

"Woah woah woah" I heard Swayam intervene. "For your kind information guys, you might be kings at your home but you are not the kings of the whole world" I so knew this was coming but he unusually delayed it.

"What rights do you have to hurt someone's feelings, that girl isn't a toy to play around with. You guys are planning on using and throwing probably the most sane and sensible girl in the college. Why? Because she doesn't care who you are and doesn't go all fainting over you guys. Accept it guys she has guts to hurt you enormous ego and your out for revenge."

"Are you done" I asked, irritated. "And who the hell told you I'm bit doing this for revenge Swayam, that girl insulted me, she deserves it" Shivam said, interrupting me.

"And why the hell are you talking now? After everything is decided and set." I asked, frustrated.

"Because, I thought you were better than this. I thought you would at least stop this from happening, but no, you want to enjoy... Then enjoy, I'm leaving." He yelled at me and stomped out if the canteen.

"Okay then... Two weeks" he said, relieved and extending his hand towards me. "Deal?" He asked. Reyaansh Singhania never backs out, I reminded myself.

"Deal." I accepted, shaking his hand.

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--Afterschool--

---Rey---

I was waiting by her locker and she came up to me and asked "Do you always stalk people?" Annoyed, sarcastic and mockingly.

"Look" I started, what was her name again. I was deep in thought when "You don't even remember my name, do you?" Am I becoming so predictable. "No, I do" I practically yelled at her. She was shocked for a moment then composed herself and asked me "Then tell me, what is it?"

I remember how can I forget ummm... Preeti, no Kriti, Krupa? Kriya! Yes it's kriya. "Kriya, it's kriya" I said almost instantly.

She rolled her eyes "Look, I'm not your type" she started to justify but I interrupted "Girls are my type." I said with a tinge of flirtation in it.

"What a total clich" she said with a fake smile, which gradually turned into a frown "Do I need to spill soda all over you so you can understand, I do not want to go out with you. So stop trying." She yelled on the top of her lungs. Good thing no one was present in the locker room or I would've been embarrassed like hell.

Then she started walking away.

---Kriya---

I started walking away from Reyaansh, but just when I thought that I have left him behind, he caught up to me.

"Okay, I know your playing hard to get, but it's okay, I like it when I have challenges." He said. Ugh!! I so can't believe that he is serious. I stopped walking and looked at him.

"I'm not playing hard to get. Scratch that, I'm not playing anything with you. Why don't you understand, I don't wanna do anything with you." I yelled at him.

"Look kriya, many girls get intimidated by my popularity, so it's okay for you to be nervous." I can't believe he is doing this again. "Let me make it easier for you, pick you up at 8, tonight." He continued adding a wink at the end. Oh my god this guy is so full of himself.

I laughed and said "You are so full of yourself, you seriously think that you are the best thing that has ever happened to anyone, don't you?"

"That's cause, I am." He said, confident.

"Well not for me, neither do I get hugely nervous around you nor do I get intimated by you 'massive' popularity." I said putting air quotes around massive. "And as a matter of fact I didn't even know who you were." That was a lie.

"Seriously, no need to pretend." He said with that smug look. How did he get that. I did not know what to say next so I started walking towards the door of the building and walked into the parking lot but he tailed behind. This guy is so irritating.

"Your unbelievable." I muttered and stopped at my car. I turned to him and said "Well this was an interesting conversation but I need to leave now."

"Is that a yes for tonight?" He asked, hopeful. I looked at him in disbelief, is he serious. "You never give up, do you?" I asked him back.

He simply shook his head and replied "Nope." I sighed and said "Look Rey, why don't you find someone else, someone easier for that fact. I need to go to work." Did I really have to say that.

"Where do you work?" He asked almost instantly. Did he really think that naive of me.

"I'm not gonna fall for your games Rey. So how about you give up." I said and sat in my car, closed the door and zoomed off. Not giving him any chance to speak.


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So people ready here comes

Part three:


---Rey---

I stood there in the middle of bathe college parking lot, dumbstruck. No girl has ever dumped me and this girl had the hits to walk out on me, scratch that drive off on me.

I was walking towards my car when I saw one of kriya's friends. I did not know her name, well better to know it now.

---Kriya---

I walked into my house and saw my mom sitting on the couch watching some non-reaslistic chick flick. "Hi, mom." I said. And she replied with a smile and a pat next to her on the couch. I sat beside her and started watching the movie. Really, the whole idea of love and relationship in movies is so fake mostly it is something like, good girl and the bad guy fall for each other.

Bad guy was just playing with the good girl, and the good girl falls for him. He stays in denial but then realises that he also loves her then the girl gets to know that he was playing with her, she dumps, he cries, she cries. She moves on, he chases her and finally she forgives him.

Pathetic.

But who can deny I was like that once.

But now I have better thing to do than fall in love. Like going to my room and getting dressed up.

"Do you want me to come to the restaurant with you?" I asked my mom getting up from the couch and heading towards the stairs to my room.

"Yeah it's Friday and it's gonna be pretty much hectic. If you wanna give a hand please come." She said not even looking up at me.

"Okay, I'll call Sharon also." I said to her and she gave me a faint nod and a quick smile.

--At Evening--

I was taking someone's order as the waiters and waitresses were too busy today, like every other Friday night. Yeah I don't know why but I thought that the half or at least one-fourth of Mumbai's population came here every Friday.

"Miss?" The man asked me politely bringing me out of my thoughts. I apologised quickly and gave the order to the chefs. Whenever I worked at my mom's restaurant I always worked in the V.I.P section. Call it pride or whatever but I hated to go to the normal section. There were always romantic couples and yeah the high schoolers and everyone who I think will break up after a very minimal amount of time.

But the thing was today, there were not many people in this section. I was told to serve Table no. 23. Now where was it. Ha there it is I thought as soon as I spotted the long metal rod emerging out of a table with number 23 written in gold with a black background.

I approached the table and began searching for my pen and writing pad constantly saying "Hello I'm Kriya Ghai, your waitress for tonight. Would you like to order something." I completed and deciding to spare the person a look.

"What are you doing here." I asked as soon as I saw the person's face. Reyaansh effin' Singhania. Do I have to really need to spill a soda over him.

"Felt like eating." He replied very casually. Oh really, I'm not buying any of that. "How did you know that I worked here? Are you a stalker or something!" I said raising my voice at him at the end.

"Woah, don't flatter yourself. I'm not stalking you. I'm simply a hungry customer wanting food and yeah I come here very often." He said. I'm not buying any of that either. This person does not know who I am. And then why haven't I seen him yet.

"Then why haven't I seen you around ." I asked him. "You haven't seen me around but Smriti aunt has. I'm one of her favorite customer but she won't even remember your name." He said in a very mocking way.

Oh so he did not know who I was, interesting.

"Now, are you going to take my order or just stand there and stare at me." He said with that smirk I wanted to slap off "I mean I don't mind as long as you're here." He stated and added a wink at the end.

"What do you want?" I scoffed.

"Well for a drink a coke please." He smirked. What did this guy find so amusing.

"I'll be back." I told as I finished writing that down.

"Please do." He smirked the infamous Reyaansh Singhania smirk. Again. I gave him a short glare and walked off. I saw Sharon waiting for me.

Sharon and I usually hung out at my mom's restaurant but sometimes when it was too busy I served as a waitress and she gave me a hand while chatting with me constantly.

"Want something?" She asked. "Yeah get me a coke." I replied.

"Here" She said handing me the coke. I thanked her and walked back to Rey.

I gave him the coke and asked "So ready to order?"

"Yeah, I think I'll just have a steak. It wasn't my first choice but what I really want wasn't on the menu." He replied looking down at the menu. What'd I he want.

"What did you want?" I asked him.

He looked up at me and replied "You." Adding the smirk at the end.

"Ha, so cute." I said glaring at him. "I'll be back with your steak." I said walking away.

"I'll be waiting." He replied back. I rolled my eyes and headed to the kitchen.

My mom was giving orders to all the chefs and I gave her the slip of Rey's order I which it was neatly written New York Steak (Burnt). My mom read this and looked at me surprised a little.

"What's this?" She asked me.

"I was shocked too, the customer said he hates it when the stake is not well done practically burnt on the outside." I replied as innocently as I could.

"Okay then burnt it is." She replied giving the instructions to a chef as I smiled mischievously.

Twenty minutes later my mom screamed 'burnt steak' and I went towards her and thanked her and walked back to Reyaansh.

I placed the steak in front of him and he looked at it horrified.

"Would you like something else too Mr. Singhania." I asked with a sweet smile.

"Yeah, how about something edible." He said looking at the steak gulping.

"Isn't this what you ordered." I said.

"I ordered steak not a piece of charcoal." He said grossed.

---Rey---

She laughed and said "This is your steak, silly." And started walking away. Oh no she ain't getting away so easily. I grabbed her arm causing her to turn around and scowl at him accompanied by a "What?"

"What will happen if I told the owner what you did to my steak." I asked anger taking over my words.

"Nothing." She replied, challenging me with those big eyes of hers.

"And why is that?" I asked impatient.

"Because my mom is the owner." She spat.

What!! She is smriti aunt's daughter. I didn't know that. Just on cue sriti aunty came over us and recognised me instantly.

"Rey." She said rather surprised. "I didn't know you liked burnt steaks. Well how is it?" She asked.

"It is perfect." I replied. She must've worked hard in it.

"How would you know, you didn't even taste it yet." Kriya intervened and I glared at her.

"So true, how about you eat it and tell me, come on eat it." She urged me to rather forced me to.

I unwillingly cut a piece from the steak and ate it. I swear I would have spitted it out that instant if Kriya or her mom wouldn't be here. And I swallowed it. I am genuinely sorry stomach.

"It's great." I replied back as cheerfully as I could.

"Good then." She said back.

"Well I'm gonna go now." Kriya started.

I was gonna ask her to stop but her mom spoke before me.

"Actually, I think we have enough staff to look over all of this. You sit and enjoy with your friend."

I smirked but Kriya objected "Oh no thats ok, he likes eating alone."

"Actually, I hate it." I said as soon as she completed her sentence. I smiled at her and she returned the gesture with a glare.

"Don't worry Kriya is going to stay with you." Smriti aunty said in a stern voice, directed towards Kriya.

"Aww, thank you Kriya." I said to Kriya and she rolled her eyes.

"Well I have to get back to work." Smriti aunty said walking away.

As soon as her mom left, Kriya sat across me and asked "Now get to the point, what do you want from me?"

I sighed and said "I already made it clear but I repeat go out with me."

"I'm not your type." She retorted.

"Yes, you are."

"Fine, you're not my type."

This girl is the queen of sarcasm.

"Sure." I replied sarcastically.

"I don't like you Reyaansh." She said to me.

"Rey, it's Rey and please just give me one chance." I said.

"No." She replied sternly.

"Please, at least give me two weeks to impress you." I pleaded remembering the time span of the bet.

"Two weeks?" She asked, interested.

"Yup and if I can't, I'll leave you alone for good." I said getting a little happy. She is falling right into my trap.

She thought for awhile and replied "Fine then you have 14 Days."

Comment and like loads please. Page 8 should be completed for the next update.
Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 11 years ago
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Hey... really intresting concept... Like the way u have portrayed Kriya's characters...
Wonder why she cant trust people... Waiting to know how the story will proceed...
Continue soon n do pm me :)!!!!!!!!!
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awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm
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Loved it... :D :D
Poor kria... So much trying to get rid of him...

and the guy. he got determination...

Awesome

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