14 Days || A Kriyaansh Short Story || Day 10 On Page 96. - Page 73

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Posted: 11 years ago
kyunki tune res karne se mana kiya hain
isliye im commenting lately sorry for that kyunki main bohot busy hoon aaj kal
but maine pehle hi pad liya hain 😆

so coming back to the story
im happy that kria is melting down slowly😳
bas aisa kuch mat kar jisse Rey apne bet keliye kuch kare
i dont want that to happen😭
by the way kria ki mom kitni achi hain rey ke ghar main rehne keliye kahaan hain😉
loved the part where rey acted so bhola as if kria's mom didnt call to rey❤️
and AAHHH finally KR kiss di tune
but y did u stop till thr only manny very angry with u for that😡

ab jaldi se update karde im dying to read it manny plsss😊
all in all i loved the update manny👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
So here i come also...
Updateee plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
This ws fab..so kriya doesnt knw yet abt the bet...shivam z trying 2 win the bet...wanna knw wht happens next...plzzz updat3eee
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Posted: 11 years ago
The limit z already done...plzzz updateee...
The rain scene ws muaaahhh
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I ll keep on spamming till u update...plzzz update...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FrozenTeardrops

---Kriya---

11:15. The time on my wrist watch. I paced in the balcony waiting for Reyaansh. I was hell pissed at the guy.
Done.

Okay this might not be so great but still...

Comment.

I'll update the next one on page 53.

nice update 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz plz update...
Luv ds story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all d parts of ur ff on one go today..
n its freakin awesome!!!!!!
waiting fr d nxt part n do pm me when u update
by d way i have sent u buddy request
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey great SS!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Just loved it!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳

I hate this Shivam and loving that Rey is changing!!!!!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉

U wanted pg 115 and now it's pg 117 so pls update!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FrozenTeardrops

Bahut late hogaya na?
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Credit: -spongy- [Isha]

Day 7


"Ugh!" I groaned at the unpleasant sound. Somebody has been honking his car's horn and does not seem to stop at all. I just 15 minutes ago shut my alarm. And now from the last tem minutes this guy is continually honking his bloody car's bloody horns.

I put a
"Leave." I said and he stood, leaving my hand once he did.

"So, I need to stay with you 24x7 now." He said and I glared at him.

"Mr. Reyaansh Singhania. I hope you realise that I gave you 14 days and half of them ends in exactly 40 seconds. And how much ever you had impressed me has gone back to zero this instant." I said through my teeth, looking at the huge digital clock hanging just above the television set.

"So you mean I did impress you." I was quiet for a moment. Why does this guy give importance to the wrong part of the sentence?

"Shut up." I muttered and was about to leave when he held my wrist and pulled me towards him, I banged into his chest, my hands on his broad shoulders as I looked at him, wide eyed.

My eyes shifted to the clock and it displayed. 12:00:03
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Done! 😃

Oh! My god! I'm evil! I can't stop laughing, imagining your faces.

Now don't slap or throw anything at me, you guys should be glad I gave you 3 seconds extra of the day in update.

Guys the reason for the Rey ignoring session was to show that even Reyaansh Singhania makes mistakes and doubts his actions, nobody is perfect... Okay?

You thought it was crazy? Then I'm sorry.

Goodbye!

I would love to have long comments, please?

Okay guys one thing... This was the last time I sent PMs with my real ID i.e. FrozenTeadrops but the next time they will be from the ID ...Imperfect... So please add it if you want PMs and are interested in this particular story as you won't get any other update PMs but this one.


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