14 Days || A Kriyaansh Short Story || Day 10 On Page 96.

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

ur prev id got blocked..hawww...

nywaz..baaki sab toh padh liya tha...

3rd chap was really good...

He ate that burnt steak... Hahahahaaa...

finally Kriya gave him 14 days ahaaa...

now the real game begins...

Looking forward for upcoming updates now...

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

mehnaaz...u r fantastic darls..just simply fantastic...muje tere hr update pr yahi kehna padhta h dat u r amazing as a writer...
what the hell this guy is...not a bit of sanity...
jis ego pr isne bet lagai h vo to kbki gaddhe me gir gai...no one rejects reyaansh singhaniya nd he himself is begging rejection evrytym...great...
kriya is wonderful here...m getting very much attracted to her...
gud job swthrt...sad to say...game has began...
i would love to kill rey...

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wow...so d 14 dayz wala tym span started...finally...
letz c what he does to impress her...she vl definately fall...jus lyk d movie dat smriti waz watchin...
haha...restaurant scene waz good...burnt steak...
hahah...bichara reyansh...kya kya karna pada usse...

page 10..kaise hoga...thoda discount de de na manu... plsss...*puppy eyes*

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Mahnaz Gul

@FrozenTeardrops

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Aditi!!!!! ek aur post aur page limit 15 hojayegi...

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

n what hapened to dat CarelessDreamer wala id..???

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: FrozenTeardrops
Aditi!!!!! ek aur post aur page limit 15 hojayegi...

nai nai sorry sorry...
10 hi thik hai...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

awesomeee updates👏

its interesting too😳

waiting for d nxt part😳

continue soonish😊

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Supab update
lov it
burnt stalk i mean seriously
n he actully eat it
cant belive
poor stomach
love kr convo
that was awsome

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Mahnaz Gul

@FrozenTeardrops

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: reyaditi

nai nai sorry sorry...
10 hi thik hai...

rehte de kar Kitni spamming karni hai...

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

the part 3 was fabulous... rey serious had got to know something about her so why
not talk to her friend and get some inform about her... and yup he succeed in that...
and kriya and sharon are help it up in restaurant so they work there when there is lot
of rush to help his mom and rey have used this as weapon to convenience her and finally
she agreed to try it but it go to be tought for him to get her agree...
do continue soon and pm me