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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello guys!! Thank you so much for your comments :) Im glad you guys like it :D So my Hindi exam rocked today and soo...heres the next part!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Camp At Goa
Part 4: When eyes speak
Snap! Sanyukta looked away from Randhir's eyes and glanced at her feet from where the noise had come. Her sandal straps had snapped. -_- Uhhh. What the Hell. She told the two boys to go ahead while she went back to the hotel to change her slippers. As she was walking towards the hotel she was pulled to the side by a strong arm. She turned to face the person who'd dared to touch her ... even pull her behind the bushes!
S: Excuse me? Who the hell are you. teri himmat kese hui muje choone ki?
Guy: Arre Jaaneman Kahaan jaarahi thi tum akele? Mein bhi akela hu..Socha tumhe company de du..dekho kitni sunheri shaam hai.
S: What?! How dare you. Leave me you bas***d. Tum mardo ko aur koi kaam nahi hai kya?
She tries to shout but the guy ties a cloth around her mouth, stifling her screams. He drags her by the hair to a lone warehouse at the back of the beach. He throws her down on the floor and tries to come near her but she kicks the guy hard in the stomach.
G: Aaa. Abbe saali. Teri itni himmat. Yeh le.
He gives her a tight slap on her right cheek.And then he ties her legs with a rope.
G: Dekh jaanu...mere saath co-operate kar naa. Mein tujhe chot(injury) nahi pohuchana chahta. Isiliye mein tere haath nahi baandh raha. koi hoshiyaari mat dikhaana.
But we all know Sanyukta. Is she one to sit quietly and give up? No. She pushe the guy away hard with her free hands. She then tried to remove the cloth on her mouth but before she succeeded in doing so...
Craackk.
There was the stinging sensation again. This time on her left cheek. Crack. Right cheek. Crack. Left cheek.
That bas***d had slapped her four times. Her cheeks were burning. Even though she didnt want it to happen, a teardrop escaped from her eye. The guy was now angry. He tied both her hands too. Then he grinned wickedly as he pulled her hair to one side. Sanyukta's tears were now flowing as the guy kissed her bare neck. She was still shaking and trying to ward him off. But in vain.
Sanyukta's dress was attached to her body by thin transparent straps on either side of her neck. If you looked from far, the straps were not visible and it looked like Sanyu was wearing a strapless dress. But now it was clearly visible, the guy smirked wickedly as he tore of one strap. He slowly kissed her exposed shoulder. Sanyukta was shaking and trying to shout more vigorously now. She tried as hard as she could to shake the guy off. The guy only smiled an evil smile and looked at her bare legs. He traced a finger along her slender legs.
Why. Oh why did Sanyukta choose to wear this bloody dress today of all days!, Sanyukta thought.
The guy sunk his teeth pn the place between her shoulder and neck. he seemed to be enjoying but sanyukta was feeling the pain now. He kept kissing on that particular spot where he just bit her. Sanyukta stopped trying to shake him off. She new that the bite mark was a punishment...a mark left on her skin so she would know...TO listen to this guy and cooperate. With one of the straps torn, her dress was threatening to slip at any moment. Sanyukta had only one thought running in her mind.
Just let this get over god. Pls. Finish this off fast you bas***d. That is wat Sanyukta kept thinking. Cause she'd lost hope of escaping.
G: Good girl. Im happy. Chal ab ese hi rehna. Mein muh se kapda hattaa raha hu par agar tune chilaane ki koshish bhi ki toh...
And he showed her a knife. He traced the tip of the knife vertically across the cloth tying her mouth. Sanyukta didnt even dare to move. The cloth fell off. Not a single sound was uttered from her mouth. She was broken. Scared. Crying. Dreading what was going to happen next. The guy inched closer to her, staring at her lips. He was so close she could feel his stinking, drunk breath. Just as the guy touched his lips to hers... THUD.
Someone had kicked open the door. And she knew who that someone was. And it was NOT Parth. It was her usual saviour...Randhir. Randhir dragged the guy away from Sanyukta and puched him right on his face. He beat the shit out of him but the guy managed to run away. He wanted to follow and murder the guy but Sanyukta was here. He turned to face Sanyukta. He was looking fierce. And all she could do was lower her eyes in shame. And cry helplessly. In front of HIM. The one person she didnt want to be weak in front of. But for now she didn't care. Randhir's eyes were burning with rage but as he looked at the broken Sanyukta, his heart melted. He quickly went and untied Sanyukta's legs and hands. Sanyukta said nothing but just hugged Randhir tightly while crying on his shoulder. Randhir hugged her back. The gratitude that she could not express through words, her eyes and hug expressed. Her eyes told Randhir everything.
R:Its okay Sanyukta. Calm down. Sab thik hogaya hai.. lets go to the hotel.
As they broke their hug, Randhir observed Sanyukta carefully now. He noticed the broken strap of her dress. He saw the kiss-bite marks on her shoulder and neck. He saw the handprints of the slaps on the cheeks of Sanyukta. He wanted to touch her, to comfort her, to keep hugging her but he resisted. He is Randhir Singh Shekhawat. And even at a time like this... he cannot let the walls around his heart break. He took of his jacket (fortunately he was wearing one) and draped it around Sanyukta. The usual grim, arrogant expression returned to his face as he spoke.
R:Tum ladkiyaan naa. Khud ko zyaada samajhti ho. Kya zaroorat hai akele jaane ka jab suraj dhalne laga hai. Ms Sanyukta Aggarwal. I have no pity for you. Ab bachi ke tarah rona band karo and pull yourself together. Im waiting outside.
As he walked out of the warehouse Sanyukta mumbled something.
What she said was bearly above a whisper.
S: Subhe se Parth ne meri madad ki. Voh saari cheeze ki jo tum usually karte ho. Jhagadna, Chidhaana, bachaana, musibat mein madad karna, chot lagne par uthaana. Par ek baat aaj mein jaan chuki hu. Chaahe hum jaani dushman hi kyun na ho lekin meri zindagi mein tumhaari jagah koi nahi le sakta. Tumhaara yeh haq koi nahi cheen sakta. Tum humesha mere savior the, ho aur rahoge. Thank you.
R: Kuch kaha tumne?
Randhir was still here? Oh but looks like he didnt hear anything. Good.
S: Nahi. Chalo chalte hai.
Sanyukta wore the jacket and they walked out of the warehouse. Just in time. Just in time cause unknown to them, the yard in front of the warehouse was the best sunset point. Coincidentially the sun was just setting then. Sanyukta stared at the sight before her. The sun setting behind the mountains, leaving a plain yellow-orange-pink sky. Her lips curved into a beautiful smile. Randhir's eyes however were staring at a sight much more beautiful than the sunset. The sight of a stunning girl, with bright grey eyes, long dark hair and a beautiful smile. He was staring at the pretty girl standing beside him.
R:(Self thought)
~Pretty is the understatement of the year.~
~Wait...What am I thinking? Usne thank you kya keh diya tu havaa mein ud raha hai Randhir. Usse thank you toh kehna hi chahiye, balki jor se kehna chahiye tha. Usne toh ese whisper kiya jese khud se baat karahi ho. Apne ears strain karne pade uski baato ko sunne ke liye. Aur jab mene esa behave kiya ki mene suna hi nahi tha toh usne firse bola bhi nahi.~
~Haan toh? Tune suna toh sahi naa. Tera haq vaapis jeet liya naa? Uska savior ban gaya na?~
~Hmph! Savior toh mein hu hi. Men are meant to save women.~
A womanly voice piped in..
~Really? Laut gaya naa Mcp mode mein?~
~What the... muje sanyukta ki aavaaz brain ke andar bhi sunaayi de rahi hai?? O_O~
Randhir. You need sleep, he chided himself.
The two favourite students of Vardhaan then proceeded towards the hotel.
And if you think Sanyukta is shattered by the incident that occured...you're wrong. Sanyukta is not a weakling. she is strong and determined. And after all that has happened in this one day...She is determined to continue Vardhaan Sir's quest from tomorrow. Without fail.
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Ok..done part 4. Hope you like it. Guys one small note id like to add is that im not going to include love into this story so easily. If you think after this savior incident sanyu and randhir will fall in love...you're wrong 😛😉 We have to keep in mind the current track of Sadda Haq. And i want to keep this story realistic. So love isnt coming so easily. Cause...love isn't so simple, you see 😉 Happy Reading guys!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
yippeee m da frstt...😛
wowww superb...👍🏼.i jst luvd it...n i lykd da idea of nt lettin da luv cum so easily...😃.keep writin...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
oye hoyye!!! such a wonderful update 😃
Randhir fighting for her, their hug ☺️...wow...superb...n thnx 4 da scrap dear 🤗 update soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Prarthana7

yippeee m da frstt...😛

wowww superb...👍🏼.i jst luvd it...n i lykd da idea of nt lettin da luv cum so easily...😃.keep writin...👏

Thank youu :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Aney..

oye hoyye!!! such a wonderful update 😃

Randhir fighting for her, their hug ☺️...wow...superb...n thnx 4 da scrap dear 🤗 update soon 👍🏼

No probs. Thanks.. LL update soon aftr next exam ovr :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
This was superb !!!
My day today is really good , first the hindi paper came out to be so easy though I hadn't studied even a word (heheh typical ME)
And now this update , my day is made
I loved the way how u added a little paanch touch to it...
Waiting for next update (but pls keep it after sst exam , varna we both won't be able to study 😉)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Wow.. Amazing..
I really got scared while tht person was misbehaving wid her n doing watsoever things..finally randhir came to her rescue..( yeh toh Hona hi tha..)
Superb update tha..
Thnqz for d scrap dear..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: MyLiFeMyRuLeS..

This was superb !!!

My day today is really good , first the hindi paper came out to be so easy though I hadn't studied even a word (heheh typical ME)
And now this update , my day is made
I loved the way how u added a little paanch touch to it...
Waiting for next update (but pls keep it after sst exam , varna we both won't be able to study 😉)

Lols. Ur right Anshika. Yea im gonna keep aftr sst only. Hindi ws easy. And even i hadnt studied a word until 7pm yestrday :P Umm yeh a lil paanch toh spicen the tadka :P And thanks for complimenting soo much :)😊😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalini_shakti

Wow.. Amazing..
I really got scared while tht person was misbehaving wid her n doing watsoever things..finally randhir came to her rescue..( yeh toh Hona hi tha..)
Superb update tha..
Thnqz for d scrap dear..!!

Scrap toh dena hi tha! Meri most prominent reader ko :P And yeaa to evrythng u said plus Thanks!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read all the parts in one go...it was awesum...👏👏👏...Update soon Tanya...(I guess its ur name)

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