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Hi everyone. Glad you liked it. Am v happy :) So today I am posting a long update as usual cause my flow of thoughts for this story isnt stopping :P Good for you. Enjoy! This post is dedicated to Iptisha di! You suggested to have yoyo and so I got yoyo in my last update. Your having your English finals today and I hope you do well. Read dis after your exam. Hope it gets you pleased :) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Camp At Goa
Part 3:Walk on the Beach
They all walked for a little while. After 15 minutes of walking in the scorching heat they all came to a halt. They sat down at a dhaba for a snack and some water as they had not eaten anything since their breakfast at the hotel. They were all very tired. Parth was exhausted as he had been carrying Sanyukta all this time.
P: Guys mene abhi ek rickshaw-vaale se baat ki. Voh field yaaha se 3 ghante ki doori par hai. Suraj jald hi dhalne vala hai, 3:30 hogaya hai. Hum sab bohut thake hue hai so I suggest hum aaj hotel vaapis chale jaaye.We could go to the beach for sometime. Sanyukta ko bhi khuli havaa mein behtar lagega.
Yoyo: oh Parth tune ekdum sahi baat kahi hai. chalte chalte toh marjaenge hum iss dhoop pe, hai ji? Hotel hi chalte hai fir beach pe thoda aash karenge.
(thought)
~Kaustaki toh haath lagne nahi vaali, beach pe koi soni kuddi toh paalu 😛~
R: ( Grimly ) Task poora kiye bina mein jaana toh nahi jaata par ab kya karu. Ek bunch of weaklings ke saath aaya hu tu bear karna padega. lets go.
S:Parth, my leg is better now. Tum mujhe uttar sakte ho. Thanks
P: Sure?..Okay. aaraam se...
-----------------------At the hotel-------------------------
R: Sanyukta, Kaustaki! Hum shaadi mein nahi jaarahe hai. Kitna samay lagaate ho? Hum jaa rahe hai, saamne beach hai, aajaana.
J: Kaustaki baby, zyada samay mat lagaana.
S: haan tum log jao. Hum aate hai.
The four boys leave.
S: Are you sure Kaustaki? Mein pakka theek toh lag rahi hu na? Not overdressed naa, yaa actually I should say not underdressed naa? God. Muje yeh dress mall mein kharidni hi nahi chahiye thi.
K: No Sanyu. Yeh tum kya bol rahi ho. You look perfect. Now lets go. Late horaha hai.
S: Okay chalo varna voh sadu firse lecture sunaayega late hone par.
-----------------At the beach---------------------
J:Arre Randhir bhai inn ladkiyon ko toh dekho. sahi mein sundar hai aur ek dum sabse hatke.
Yoyo: Oye chupkar! Itne soni girlfriend hote hue bhi tu dusre ko ghur-ghur ke dekhta hai.
P: Yoyo humaara pyaara Jiggy kaustaki aur Sanyukta ko hi dekh raha hai. Voh dekh dhyaan se. Voh do ladkiyaan Kaustaki and Sanyukta hi hai.
Yoyo: (Staring) ooh teri! Kaustaki toh mast lag hi rahi hai par aaj Sanyukta toh sahi mein achi lag rahi hai!
This grabs Randhir's attention. He turns to look at the girls.
Kaustaki is wearing a cut off tee that reaches just above her navel, leaving her entire stomach exposed. She is wearing a pair of shorts below. But Randhir was not looking at her. No. He was looking at the girl who was wearing a long beach dress. It reached just below her knees, in the front and reached her ankle in the back. The dress was beautiful but it only added to the beauty of the one wearing it. The shades of blue on her dress suited her a lot. She looked like a water goddess. Her hair was left open and although it was not swept on one side, the breeze blew on her face, sending her hair flying in all directions. Randhir was lost in the way her hands gently pushed off the strands of hair blown onto her eyes. Now she was smiling seemingly at him.
S: Hi Parth.
And Randhir came out of dreamland. He thought she was smiling at him...Or maybe not. The girl was Sanyukta. And she was not smiling at him. She never will.
P:Hi Sanyukta. You look gorgeous.
Yoyo: Arre Sanyukta! Kaustaki! Bohut sundar lag rahe ho!
J: Kaustaki darling. Tum bahut beautiful lag rahi ho.
Both the girls smiled and thanked the boys for their compliments. Unintentionally, Sanyukta turned her head towards Randhir who hadn't said anything since they arrived. She was waiting for a snide remark. But what she saw, left her stunned. Randhir's eyes conveyed what his words never would. Sanyukta was surprised. They stared deep inside each others eyes. An involuntary blush crept onto her cheeks. She smiled in embarassment and quickly turned away. Yes Sanyukta Aggarwal the farzi engineer actually smiled at him. Randhir was in a daze.
Jiggy and Kaustaki had already gone into their own mushy world, walking along the beach, hand in hand. Yoyo knew that he didn't stand a chance witj Sanyukta or Kaustaki. So he started flirting with the other girls on the beach. Parth asked Sanyukta to accompany him to a spot which he had just discovered, from where you could see the beautiful sunset clearly. He held Sanyukta's hand and was taking her to the spot. Sanyukta still had her head turned, looking at Randhir. She looked at his eyes and his tension-less face. For once he looked like a human, at peace. God knows what got into her but she didn't want to leave his side. She shouted: Randhir! Comeon. Udhar akele kya khade ho. Chalo saath chalo. Sunset dekhte hai. Ladkiyon se nafrat hai naa, sundar nazaaro se toh nahi!
Randhir did not reply but silently went with them without a fuss.
The usually silent, Parth, was chattering non stop but this time nobody was listening. He was saying something about how pretty Sanyukta looks in this dress and so on. But Sanyu wasnt even interested. Probably Parth was trying to compliment her to get more close to her and change their relation from friends to something more but that was impossible. Cause Sanyukta's heart was already in the clutches of another man.Sanyukta and Randhir were lost in each other's eyes.
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Tada! hows it? I have a next part in mind already and will post that today only but only if I get your comments. Enjoy.
Edited by LovetheVlovers - 11 years ago
Asapom thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Awesome updates
Read all in a go
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Woah... Yeah..!!
Finally got d update...
Love u Tanya...!!:):)
Coming to d update...
Boys drooling over girls...thatzz nice..
Sandhir dono ek dusre ke aanko mein doob gaye.. Hayyee..
Loved it so so very much..
Next part jaldi update karo plzzz..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: shalini_shakti

Woah... Yeah..!!
Finally got d update...
Love u Tanya...!!:):)
Coming to d update...
Boys drooling over girls...thatzz nice..
Sandhir dono ek dusre ke aanko mein doob gaye.. Hayyee..
Loved it so so very much..
Next part jaldi update karo plzzz..

Hey Shalini! Am so glad to know you liked it :) And love you too :) Next part sorry not gonna update very soon. My final exams are going on. still cuz of the gaps in btwn i posted. bt now i ve just last 3 exam. Aftr 12th will post. Will try to post earlier as even i cnt wait for so long 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asapom

Awesome updates

Read all in a go
Loved it
Continue soon

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reading them. Will try and update as soon as possible :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
no words to say , this was gr8 , superb :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyLiFeMyRuLeS..

no words to say , this was gr8 , superb :)

Lol! Arohi! Thanks so much :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
wooow its nyc waiting for nxt update... 😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
wow yar awsome ... really awsome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
hey!!!
awesome update just loved it 😊
how they were looking in each other eyes was so beautiful their eyes speak alot😃
u penned it beautifully👏👏
and last parth was saying alot but sanyukta was not listening LOL😆
it was a superb update😃
pm me if u don't mind !!!
ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS !!!😊

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