Sandhir FF:Camp at Goa!*NEW Part 18 updating*

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@anyania

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

The chapter title started with that sugar factory. Couldn't u hav omitted it. Well coming to the update. It was cute. Sanyukta was thinking bout randhir. Wow! Nd they affect each other so much. So adorable na. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Update soon. Waiting...

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Anu

@AnuParshHolic

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

res...

unres

its not worst😛

nor its your best😉

but its amazing as ever😆

loved it a lot😃

jealous randhir😳

and that sugar factory made a desert🤣 nice

I really love the ending part 😃

[He recognized the grip, but wondered what was the reason behind it.😳

He whirled around to see Sanyukta staring right into his eyes.

"Randhir, I..."🤔 she started.

Randhir's heart suddenly accelerated his speed😛.

"Randhir I wanted to say..."🤔

He waited, eagerly.😳

"Randhir I wanted to say that there's some of Parth's desert left in the kitchen. I still think you should try it.😛" Sanyukta said, with a blank expression.🤣😆

To say that Randhir was shocked, would be an understatement😛. The poor guy.😆]
hahahaha bechara😆😆

well a nice update😊

and thanks for finally updating...😛

Edited by AnuSweet - 11 years ago

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Ashka

@nothereanymore

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Tanya... awsm part...

just amazing...

Randhir jealous... Sanyu ke vo thoughts... just perfect..

you penned it beautifully...

this was not a crap at all... this was amazing..

I loved it...

now plz cont soonish..

thanks for d pm

love you

Ashka.

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Anuradha

@federized2210

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Chutki,

On a day when I literally felt like crying because I trusted the SHq CVs, ur CAG update has cooled me down!

U have no idea how much I loved ur so-called 'crap'!

I thought it was utterly perfect!

The way u made them realize their feelings...wow!

Say, why aren't we the CVs of the show???

Imagine a mash-up of all of our (I mean the KBGs) ka stories!!!!

CAG has become better with each update and u've grown as a writer!!

U know what's the best thing about u? U are a very fast learner! It's like u have an urge to be the best in a forum full of people who are way ahead of u maturity and age-wise! And I love that about u! I'm not being buttery here. I mean it...Because I have noticed this...U use a lot of new phrases and words in each of ur updates! It just shows how much u are learning!!!

The title was just a mood-lifter! I loved how RD was ignoring Sanyu!! I want that in the show also! I'm done seeing a puppy-dog faced RD!

I also loved how Sanyu made him utter the L-word by mistake!!

Waiting to read what happens next!

Loads of love for u!

God bless u.

-Anu di.

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amulbaby06

@amulbaby06

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

hey it is so good 😊😊😊 super yaar... even Sanyu won't leave a chance to tease Randhir... pls pls update soon... also pls pm me...

Love,
Mickey

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

*Pulls Randhir's cheeks*

Can I just go and hug him? He is SO adorable! Awww. :')
He is such a baby. :**

I love this update rey! This is SO cute. Very fitting sequence. :D

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Ruhi

@babydoll2014

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

LOVED IT ...

awesome ... :)😊😛

update soon :)😊😊😊

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

edited on pg.69

sowwwy for late unres

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vaishnavi

@sandhirfan25

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#499

awww so cute plzz continue it .waiting eagerly 😛

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#500

Taneeeya, you are one piece of work. First you say you really want me to comment. Then you call this your worst piece of work. What do you really want me to do? xD

Nevertheless, I shall review! This one was so phunny! First of all, their inner thoughts. Then Sanyu's list of things to talk about to your arch enemy. Then all the fake fussing over the food. Man, you are one hilarious woman!

RANDHIR IS ADORABLE. FOREVER AND ALWAYS.

Continue soon and have fun during the vacations!

PS> Don't get sunburnt though xD